Interlude: North II

“Twenty years will blend friend and foe.”

– Taghreb saying

Hakram Deadhand stood in a shadowed corner of the tent as his allies raucously argued, watching them in silence. The leaders of the dominant clans of the alliance, the Howling Wolves and the Red Shields, were trading the usual insults and boasts with the representatives of their allied clans. Dag Clawtoe and Oghuz the Lame towered above all others in that conversation, as had been the case from the start. Their clans were the largest and wealthiest, their deeds the greatest – in Oghuz’s case, anyway. Juniper’s father had been a famous champion for the Red Shields before his leg wound. Dag instead must rely on lesser deeds and the reputation of the cousin that’d overshadowed him all his life.

He was only the jemmek of the Howling Wolves, the camp-leader, even though Grem One-Eye had not returned to the Steppes in decades.

Adjutant did wade into the talks. He preferred not to. The moment to speak would come when the tent was empty and it was only he and Catherine, when he could complete her vision with what he’d seen and she hadn’t by virtue of not being so close to it all. Detachment had been in Hakram’s blood since he was but a boy but he’d made his peace with the feeling. Found the uses in having blood that rarely went red. Calm was what let you see with clarity and tonight, calmly looking at the alliance in this tent, what Adjutant saw was a losing proposition. The conversation was going through familiar, pointless circles.

It would take more than champions and challenges to cut into Troke Snaketooth’s support. It was attacking the symptom instead of the sickness: Troke was not popular because he had many champions, he had many champions because he was popular. The chieftain of the Blackspears was growing more powerful by the day, and the longer the conversation went on the more Hakram realized that none of them had any idea of what to do about it. It was not that they were fools, or dim, but that they’d never had to deal with being this position before. The Blackspears had a foul reputation, while the Howling Wolves and the Red Shields had been held in high honour for decades.

They were still popular even now, but the ground was shifting under their feet. Hakram thought that under all the boasts and shouts he might be hearing a thread of disquiet. They could feel it too, the wind turning against them.

There was no point in staying here, Adjutant realized. No solution to be found in this tent, only the same conversation had in one of a hundred different ways. Yet he was not discouraged, for Hakram Deadhand had already figured out where he would find his answer. Adjutant was one of the Woe, and so he knew that one could learn from enemies as well as allies. Still silent, he slipped out of the tent and into the muddy grounds of the great camp surrounding the fortress of Chagoro. Not too long ago, Hakram had received an invitation by Sigvin of the Split Tree Clan to begin private talks with the Blackspears in Callow’s name.

He still held no intention of accepting that invitation, but it brought something to mind: the Split Tree Clan itself.

As early as the delegations that’d been sent to Wolof he’d thought that alliance strange. The Blackspears had a reputation as feckless liars, while the Split Tree were known instead as cleaving close to old ways. They were known for their shamans, many of which could use magic, and for being willing to serve as mediators in the disputes of others. They were not a large clan, though, or one known for its warriors. So Hakram had assumed the alliance with the Blackspears to be a marriage of convenience: they were large and powerful but of poor repute and without a speck of magic to call on. The weaknesses of the Blackspears would make the Split Tree influential over them, difficult to dislodge even after Troke Snaketooth took power.

Except something didn’t fit in that story. Adjutant hadn’t noticed it the last time he’d gone to the edge of the territory claimed by the Split Tree Clan, but now that he knew what to look for it was hard to miss. Troke Snaketooth had been showering his allies and servants in wealth so that the display might attract others to his banner, but there was no trace of that wealth in the Split Tree camp. No herds of sheep put to roast, no great barrels of aragh and batak freed to flow, no baskets full of pottery and ivory and furs. No thick rings of gold and jewelled earrings. The Split Tree Clan was the most important ally to a wealthy chief on the rise, but it was not visibly gaining from that position. So what was it getting paid in, power? That was not enough.

Power might satisfy the chief and his closest circle, but a clan was more than these. They would see their friends and allies growing wealthy while they did not and there would be rumbles of discontent. So what was it that the Split Tree were getting? Hakram’s instincts told him that behind that truth lay the key to the alliance around the Blackspears, the key to understanding his foe. Perhaps even the key to turning this around. Unwilling to simply retreat after having come all this way, Hakram wandered off to the closest marketplace and bought a few skewers of horse before returning to lean against the tall post marking the edge of the Split Tree grounds. He’d been seen from the start, so he was not surprised when someone came out to meet him.

Or who it was that’d been sent. Sigvin wore one of those tunics showing a generous eyeful of her scarred shoulders, which a thick braid only drew attention to, but this time Hakram’s gaze did not stray. The calm was on him, the itch to understand what made something work. The same part of him that’d made a game about stacking stones to see how people would play it.

“If it’s my tent you’re looking for, Hakram, you’ll have to offer me a drink first,” Sigvin said, flashing her fangs flirtatiously. “And maybe tell me about Keter, since tales insist you’ve been there.”

The tall orc did not answer, continuing to look at her clan’s camp as he finished the last bits of his meat and tossed the skewers aside.

“Adjutant, then,” Sigvin mused, tone changing.

Hakram inclined his head to the side in agreement.

“You would have gone into the camp if you meant to accept Troke’s invitation to talk,” she continued, humming in interest. “So what is it that does bring you here, Deadhand?”

He had half a dozen lies ready, but what would be the point? What he wanted here was nothing for them to fear. Nothing they would not want to give him.

“I want to understand what the Split Tree gets from this,” Adjutant said. “Why this alliance, why now? Why are you so tightly bound to a clan you wouldn’t have looked at twice a decade ago?”

Sigvin did not look reluctant or cautious but pleased. He’d thought she might. And why wouldn’t she, when for the first time since Hakram had come to Chagoro he was trying to understand her clan instead of stepping over it?

“The answer is in your question, Hakram Deadhand,” Sigvin said. “A decade ago. Give or take a few years, that’s how long you’ve been gone isn’t it? Since you took to the Legions.”

“Give or take a few years,” Hakram agreed.

“The first of our kind Named in centuries,” Sigvin said. “And you never even came back to the Steppes.”

There’d been a lot of that talk when he first came here, especially as an envoy of Callow, but it’d died out after the first few crushing victories in duels. It wasn’t his people’s way to question strength.

“I wouldn’t be Named if I had,” Adjutant bluntly replied. “I found my path far from here and it did not lead back until now.”

And, for all that it had cost him and might yet, he did not regret it.

“An even more damning answer,” Sigvin replied just as bluntly. “You don’t see it because you were of the Howling Wolves and then a soldier far away, but we are not so blind: the Legions of Terror are eating the Clans, bit by bit.”

Hakram felt like scoffing but restrained himself. It was obvious she believed every word and Adjutant believed Sigvin to be an intelligent woman. She would have a reason to believe this.

“The Legions are making the Clans richer,” he replied instead, “and without the need to fight each other for that wealth. Our people return home with learning and allies. We have more influence in the affairs of the Tower than we’ve had in centuries because of the same ties you condemn.”

She shook her head.

“It’s the wrong sort of wealth, Adjutant,” Sigvin said. “It’s imperial coin, which we use to trade with them instead of each other. Our people come back using the Praesi system of measurement, building forges the goblin way, organizing warriors in companies instead of warbands. It’s hollowed out your own clan without Dag Clawtoe realizing it. The Howling Wolves don’t war for cattle and land anymore, they send their youths south and wait for the gold to return with them. Only gold’s not all that comes back. They began training their youngbloods in Legion drills a few years back, did you know? To give their youths an edge when they send them south to enrol.”

Sigvin paused, strong face twisted in disgust.

“Not if,” she said, “but when.”

There was much he could answer to that. Praesi measurements were superior in almost every regard to those used by learned orcs and them alone – horns and fingers – while goblins were the finest metalworkers on Calernia and warbands were unfit for anything but raiding as a military formation. It would have been easy to dismiss her words as that of someone from the old order, afraid of change even when that change was for the better. Except Sigvin was not a fool. So he looked at the camp of the Split Trees again with fresh eyes. Hide tents, but it was rare for a tent to be made all of the same hides. Different hunting grounds, trade with other clans. And on the people the jewelry was of many styles, be it thick torcs of the eastern steppes, the silver piercings from the headwater clans or the looping earrings of the south.

The Split Tree Clan was traditionalist, Hakram had known that, but he’d not truly considered what that would mean.

Their wealth, their gains, were made in the traditional mould of orc clans since the founding of the Empire. To the Split Tree, wealth was something temporary. Won when the clan claimed good riverside land for a season and pottery could be made from clay, when good grazing lands allowed the clan to stay long enough for smithies to be raised and weapons of quality forged. Surplus was traded to other clans to fill needs, and when the clan was in a strong position it went raiding – either other orcs or humans. That stolen wealth was brought back and used to strengthen the clan, sometimes even to absorb smaller neighbours. If things went well for a few years, the clan grew.

Clans too large were unsustainable, so the largest ones would then split into two and head different ways.

It was a rough way of life, but it had worked. The harshness of the Steppes culled the weak but it also ensured that there could never be a kingly clan standing above all others: hunger bit victors just as deep as the vanquished. As a closed circle, the old ways of the Steppes really did work. Only now the circle was no longer closed. The Legions since the Reforms were not the same as the armies of the old tyrants, which had once a reign drafted orcs by the hundreds of thousands for a campaign and then sent them back to the Steppes after the war. The modern Legions kept orcs for decades, taught them Praesi ways and enriched them before sending them home.

And Hakram Deadhand had seen this same machine at work before.

“The Carrion Lord really is a magnificent bastard,” he admitted. “I had little sympathy with the moaning of Callowans when his works were improving so many of their lives, but I understand a little better now.”

Sigvin frowned.

“I don’t follow,” she said.

“You think what you’ve found is a coincidence, then,” Adjutant mused. “That’s understandable, as you never saw the same unfold out west. But this is happening on purpose, Sigvin.”

Because that was the Carrion Lord’s way. The Clans could not truly be a part of a stable Praes as they were, so the man had set to smothering the aspects of orc culture that weren’t compatible with the Dread Empire he envisioned: the raiding, the nomadism, the factionalism. And as was typical of that particular monster, he’d gone about it through a method that the people being changed would not fight because it benefitted them. Because Sigvin was right to see the Clans being made dependent on the south, being bound tighter, but she was missing something: most orcs were better off this way. It was why the Legions and the Carrion Lord remained wildly popular in the Steppes to this day.

The Legions introduced wealth from the outside instead of the same limited wealth being competed over by clans, which meant that the Clans could actually grow now. And the way to bring home that gold was war, which Hakram’s people loved, and it just so happened that it drained the Steppes out of the same youngbloods who’d be pushing for raids and fighting between clans. And it was a form of war that required training, which took time, so why shouldn’t clans move less? They could afford to now that they were wealthier, anyway. Which they would remain, so long as they kept sending warriors to the Legions. Then once those soldiers returned home, having fought side by side with each other and humans, they found that fighting with the Clans and the rest of the Empire lost its allure.

How many of your old army friends would you have to kill so you could steal cattle worth less than a few months of Legion pay?

Hakram sighed. This wasn’t Malicia’s work. It was not the Empress’ way to change a system when she already mastered it. Yet she’d likely recognized the trend and was not against reversing it, because orcs truly integrated into Praes were yet another power block she must handle. One that espoused military virtues she distinctly lacked, to boot. Shortly before the Liesse Rebellion, Malicia had forced the Clans to pay the tributes they’d withheld during the reign of Nefarious, which had had the effect of lowering orc enrolment in the Legions. This now seemed less like an isolated incident and more the like the beginning of a comprehensive policy that had just recently received its crowning jewel.

Malicia made lords of the Steppes, Adjutant thought, which seems like bringing us into the fold but is functionally the opposite. Her lords of the Steppes did not hold land. They collected the orcish tributes on behalf of the Tower, which was an additional layer of separation between Praes and the Clans. Gatekeepers of influence who, by the very limitations of their role – duties that would see them despised by other orcs, authority that derived directly from the Tower – could never rise to be a threat to her reign. Now that elegant little twist, the gift that doubled as clipped wings, had Malicia’s signature over it. And it explained why the forces behind the Blackspears were so willing to cut a deal with the Dread Empress.

“So when Troke makes cause with Malicia, your clan backs him because he’s not just looking to be a lord of the Steppes,” Hakram gravelled. “He wants to be the High Lord of the Steppes.”

Someone in a position to undo Legion influence, who by virtue of their title could stand between the Clans and the Empire and force a heathy distance. Sigvin bared her fangs at him, openly pleased.

“So you do understand,” she said, then slightly bared her neck in a display of vulnerability. “I had feared you might not.”

No wonder the Split Tree were good as sown to Troke’s side, he thought. Both the Red Shields and the Howling Wolves were heavily tied to the Legions and had no intention of changing that policy considering how it’d paid off for them. As far as the Split Tree Clan was concerned, the alliance behind Hakram was perhaps the sole coalition of clans they could not under any circumstances allow to win. Otherwise the Legions would sink their hooks into all the larger clans and the trend would grow irreversible. Adjutant pushed off from the marking post.

“Leaving already?” Sigvin asked.

“I need to think,” Hakram simply said.

About how this could be turned around.

About whether it should.

It took time to gather two hundred stones, enough that darkness fell.

At the edge of the great camp that’d risen up around Chagoro, Hakram Deadhand sat alone in the dirt with a bright moon hung high above his head. Before him lay only flatlands of long grass and the distant rising expanse of the Northern Steppes, a horizon of nothingness crowned by cold stars. And just the way he had when he’d been a boy, Hakram stacked stones. Seventy in a pile to the left. A rough estimate of the clans that backed Troke Snaketooth and his Blackspears, the orcs that stood behind the dream of a High Lord of the Steppes. Forty-six in a pile to the right, Dag and Oghuz and old loyalties. The promises of the Conquest, faithfully kept, and hunger for more of the same.

In between the piles stood a sea of undecided clans, smaller alliances that a day’s turn could make or break. Orcs with their ear to the wind, waiting to hear how it would turn.

Through this, Hakram had laid out the bare shape of the taratoplu taking place at the fortress of Chagoro. This was the game he had been playing since he came here, promises and sigils and duels. It was the game Troke Snaketooth had been beating him at, would keep beating him at. Hakram did not know the lay of this land the way the Blackspear chieftain did, the friendships and feuds and shared stories that bound the Clans together as a people. Which meant, in truth, that he had been playing the wrong game. So Hakram leaned forward to trace three symbols in the dirt with a finger of bone: a helmet, a skull and a fang.

The helmet he knew best, what it stood for. The clans that had tied themselves to the Legions, to the Reforms, to the empire promised them by the Carrion Lord. The chiefs who wanted to make some camps permanent, kept through all seasons. Only part of the clan would stay at first, for forges and drilling warriors and trade, but it would grow from there. Southern wealth pouring in, ever-closer ties to the empire, old ways abandoned in favour of more practical ones. Clans that heeded this new path would flourish, those that resisted it would whither and die. That path for the Clans had its roots in the alliance under Dag and Oghuz, a tie strong enough that repeated defeats had not shattered their faction.

The skull he’d only begun to understand today. The clans that saw ahead of them a world where the Steppes were swallowed up by the Empire, where orcs forsook Kharsum for Lower Miezan and began singing of emperors instead of warlords. Where the Steppes grew ugly towns like tumours, imperial colonies of greenskin legionaries in the heartlands of the orcs. Those clans wanted disengagement. Ties with the Legions weakened and a unifying leader – be they warlord or high lord – to keep the Tower at bay so the Clans could become as a nation. Because that was what lay behind Sigvin’s talk of culture: the Steppes as a kingdom within the Dread Empire.

That path had its roots in the backers of Snake Troketooth, but would not have great loyalty to the man. It had chosen him as a candidate because he could be influenced and served their purposes, not out of any love for the cheiftain

And the last, the fang, was somehow both the simplest and the most complex of the three. It was everyone else, the chiefs and clans who cared nothing for either sort of talk. Hunger had no philosophy, for all that the Wasteland liked to pretend otherwise. The great majority of the clans would follow who promised the best plunder, the most food, who allowed them to settle grudges to their advantage and earn glory in battle. Some of these had gone Troke’s way already because he looked like the winner and they wanted to be on the winner’s side. There was no vision of the future behind them save a gaping maw biting down on the world, and more orcs thinking this way than the other two put together. It was a path without intent, the Clans remaining as they were and letting Creation pass them by. Walking away from the end of the Age of Wonder, guests in their own world.

These were, Hakram Deadhand thought, the three paths now laid out for the Clans: integration, disengagement, abstention. Only they were all flawed, he thought, and so he turned to address the night.

“You would argue for the helmet, I know,” Hakram said. “Even though you refused your own people that fate and crowned Vivienne so she could reforge the broken shards of the Old Kingdom.”

Catherine would lean the way of the Legions because the Legions were as much her home as the land she’d bled so much for. It would change the orcs, she might argue, but would it be for the worse? Raiding put the Clans at odds with everyone around them, internal wars weakened them as a people and permanent towns would make life better for tens of thousands of orcs. It would be a greater good than evil, she’d argue.

“But there will be a price,” Hakram told the night. “We will become the Duni of the north. Good for fighting and labour but not truly Praesi. We lose everything that we are without becoming equals.”

Perhaps in one or two generations if the Reforms held that would become untrue, but that was a roll of the dice. Would the Reforms hold? Even if the Carrion Lord came to rule, as Catherine wanted, would his successors continue his policies? It was betting the fate Clans on trust in a Tower whose steps dripped with the blood of a thousand coups. Hakram’s gaze drifted to the left, where another ghost waited for him to argue with. There was not a doubt in his mind that Vivienne Dartwick would be on the side of disengagement, of the skull.

“You’d argue that the Split Tree are right,” Hakram said. “That Praes would ruin us and only distance can prevent it. A High Lord of the Steppes would keep away the Tower and let us strengthen ourselves, make our own laws and change on our own terms.”

But that, too, was ignoring some truths. Because even Sigvin, who cursed the Legions with her eyes, had not spoken of ending ties with them entirely. Engaging with Praes enriched the Clans in a way that isolation simply could not. Starvation was no longer decided by the year being good or bad, by a raid or a war having gone one way or the other. Already the Clans traded almost as much with humans as they did with each other, by the estimates of the Eyes, and ending that trend would starve and impoverish half the Steppes. The Clans could live without Praes but to grow, to thrive? The Dread Empire was needed.

As for the Praesi, the land the orcs lived in was a heavy hand on the fate of the people.

“I don’t believe we would hold, without either war or Praes,” Hakram told the night. “We are not Callow, Vivienne. Even at our peak, we were not a nation in the human way of it. We unite against something, someone – or when there is another way to gain aside from eating each other.”

How long would the closed kingdom that Sigvin dreamed of truly last once the war ended? How many clans backing Troke would stay loyal, when their bellies were full and their chests filled with plunder and there was nothing left to do but return home to the same old feuds? It was building a tower on sand. And that left only one path, the fang. Burying one’s head in the sand, failing to make anything of the great gathering at Chagoro. And so the night could only wear one face: golden eyes and dark skin. Akua Sahelian. Another who now sat at crossroads, the threshold of changes only dimly felt.

“I can break it,” the Adjutant said. “The taratoplu. I would only need to raise another two past forty stones to take the wind out of Troke’s sails, and I… know that it can be done.”

The aspect pulsed in him faintly. Find. If he went looking for the hammers that would bring down this house, he would find them. This he knew, sure as dawn. Hakram could prevent anyone from winning, play on greed and fear and hope. Had he not stood at the side of the uncontested mistress of that method for many years? And it was what he was meant to do, as the Adjutant, if he could not secure the help of the Clans for the Grand Alliance. It was better than letting them side with Malicia. And yet he did not rise.

“What is it like, Sahelian, where you sit?” he asked the night. “It is cold away from the fire, cold enough madness earns the ring of sense and certainties turn to sand between your fingers?”

Hakram had gotten a taste of what it would be like, losing Catherine. Losing the Woe. Becoming just another of those left behind, buried or forgotten. And while the shard of fear at the heart of that had been put to rest by the Grey Pilgrim as a city died around them, there could be no return to the way things had been afterwards. It was different now because he was different and she was different. Pretending otherwise did neither of them any favours. Now they both knew they could hurt each other in ways they could not, would not forgive.

There was no unlearning that.

“I don’t want to ruin them,” he admitted. “To give them a nothing-future, to rob them of the pivot everyone else was allowed.”

And this was something he wanted for himself. What a small, terrifying truth that was to be echoing so large in his mind. Because Hakram knew that, as much as he would like to blame the ghosts and the night, he was the only one here. And already he knew, deep down, that if he was not satisfied by any of the paths others would lay out for the Clans then there was only one answer left.

He just didn’t want to look that truth in the eye.

Instead he looked back at the camp, the torches lighting up the night around the tall Soninke fortress. What did he owe these people, anyway? Hakram had left for the War College and never looked back. Life in the Steppes had left him adrift, a leaf in the wind. It had been a long way from here, from this land of gnawing, that he had found a home. What did ten thousand miles of snow and the poor fools in it matter to him, that he should sacrifice for them? And it would be a sacrifice, he would not delude himself otherwise. He and Catherine had been bound by an oath under moonlight, and it would be the end of that oath. Even if it was taken again, it would not be the same.

So Hakram turned his gaze ahead, finding… nothing. Empty plains as far as the eye could see, bathed in white. The same kind of emptiness he had glimpsed in Scribe after she was cut adrift. He’d wondered, sometimes, if she had been like him from the start. If becoming one of the Calamities had been like someone blew colours into a world of grey, like finally she could taste and hate and want to be someone. Only it’d not been about the Calamities, had it? It’d been about the Carrion Lord, and the Carrion Lord had set her free of his service in an act of loving cruelty. Cat still thought Eudokia would turn on them, but Hakram knew better. No one would risk being scalded like that twice.

And had Hakram not, this very day, boasted in the privacy of his own mind that he knew how to learn from enemies and allies both? The Webweaver had been one and the other, at different times, and ever a warning since they encountered each other in Salia.

“A temple built on a single pillar will fall,” Hakram said, quoting an old Miezan proverb.

And he still did not want to ruin his kind. To make them less than they could be. There was a path to chart, he thought. One he could dimly make out in the gloom of the night. A way to take from the empire without being taken, to stand without standing alone. It would be dangerous and delicate, play great powers against each other and raise a banner that could not be easily lowered. But it could be done. Hakram just wished that someone else could do it in his stead. Yet the stones did not lie, he thought, looking down. They never did. In a game of diminishing returns there could be no winner, only shades of defeat.

And if not Hakram, then who?

Moonlight painted the empty plains pale, and the stones at his feet too. Adjutant – no, not that anymore he thought. Perhaps never again. He was not making the choice of that path. Hakram Deadhand rose to his feet, bathed in moonlight, with no one to pull him up. A western breeze rustled across tall grass, a shiver, and old words came to him. The Old Boast, which orcs had once sung blade in hand when the hands and blades were still theirs.

“I made an empire out of nothing

So,

Warring under the summer sun

Rivers ran red, the sky did weep

As I raised a city of clay

To rule men from far away.

But as my glory fades to gray

And rides to me my own red day

Now I know clay does not keep,

And that rivers, both ways they run:

So,

I made an empire out of nothing.”

Stillness reigned in his wake. Warlord, the wind whispered against the grass. The poem was an old boast, an old warning. Kingdoms came, kingdoms went and so much for their petty kings. People were never as important as they thought they were.

But if not Hakram, then who?

So he went back to the torches, to the camp.

To the work that needed doing.

114 thoughts on “Interlude: North II

  1. After the first Interlude: North, this isn’t too surprising. There were certainly signs that Adjunct wasn’t fitting, when there were question of what he wanted. There were still a number of doubts hanging in the air.

    Now, the question is, how will he follow through?

    And it does seem like we’re at the point in the story where the Woe are finding their new places in the world. Everybody’s struggling to find their place in the new age, and that includes the people trying to carve it out to begin with.

    Still, there haven’t been signs of Hierophant or Archer attempting to find a new role, and with the cascade of events happening, with the two major combat events on the horizon, and with just the Tower and Amadeus’s current stash of goblinfire…

    It seems the Climax of Praes and Cat’s new name is on the horizon.

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    • Well, the Ranger showdown promises character development for Archer if nothing else. With three of the Woe already on their way to new Names, it might just cascade.

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    • I’d say Hierophant already has his transition from Apprentice, and he already went through his character arc. I don’t see Archer transitioning to a new Name since her Name is about her skill rather than her position in a hierarchy.

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      • The only way I think she would change is if she took up the title Lady of the Lake, which would just about require Ranger to be killed. I think that is a bit of a longshot, but it’s the only major change I could see in ‘Drani’s identity. She’s already changed a ton since she joined the Woe -even since the Everdark- and none of it made her any less Archer.

        … That said I would love it if Lady of the Lake became a Name some time after Ranger dies. A mentor Role, but more hands on than Grey Pilgrim. An apprentice of the previous Lady all but mandated to transition in the same way that Squires become Knights.

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        • I love the idea of ‘The Lady of the Lake’ becoming a Name. However, this would have to be Archer replacing Ranger as the ‘head’ of Refuge as sort of a ‘Neutral’ Cardinal for those Names focused on excellence of a skill for the lack of a better term. However, I think it may refine down to ‘The Lady/Lord’. It would mess with Praesi convention around Named though!

          I do not know if that works with Archers professed desire to wander. Unless she decides to develop a ‘wandering school’ that doubles as a retrieval.

          If there was a concept of ‘mantles’ in PGtE (something that reflected the lesser epithets that Named accrue as ‘proto Names’ that further expand or refines a Named Role), I could see Lady of the Lake (or considering the geography of the Red Vales ‘Lady of the Pass’ being a mantle that those that followed in sphere of Named similar to Archer could take up as a mentoring Role.

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      • I don’t know about that — he seems unimpressed with gods. But then, there’s a bit of paralellism — the Dead King looked into the void, and found it wanting. Hierophant looked into the inferno, and he did not flinch.

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        • Mental Mouse: Pardon?

          As per Kairos Theodosian, Hierophant’s greatest Wish is Apotheosis. I’m assuming that hasn’t changed.

          Or am I forgetting something?

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          • His greatest wish IS apotheosis, but Kairos described Hierophant’s concept of it so deeply rooted in High Arcana that no one else could likely understand it.

            My personal interpretation of that is that Masego never really moved from the realization that caused his transition: the godhead is a trick of prespective.
            He doesn’t want to “be” a god as much as he wishes to “think” like one. To understand it all and master every single mistery that makes creation tick beyond the surface reality we experience.

            Functionally, they are the same thing, which is why it is not incorrect to say he is aiming for aphoteosis. It’s just that my understanding is that his actual goal is a little to the side of that.

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            • Shveiran: I think I follow your reasoning and conclusions.

              My own thought is we have no idea what Masego will look like after he achieves apotheosis. He might look the same. He might become almost entirely mental, but may create a body from time to time so he can interact with regular people.

              Masego’s path to apotheosis clearly has very little in common with Neshamah’s or Sve Noc’s. It’s much cleaner, you could say.

              It makes me wonder why Neshamah bothered with the death of Keter at all. Sve Noc at least had the excuse that they were trying to save the drow from extinction.

              It makes me suspect that Masego is much much smarter than both Neshamah and Sve Noc.

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              • Neshamah wasn’t trying for apotheosis, I don’t think. That was, I believe, a side effect. What he wanted was to be king forever. And he’s managed to be king for several millenia, so it’s almost worked out for him.

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                • If I remember correctly there were also a war going on, and his nation were losing badly. They had better mages, but their enemies were more numerous, used more modern tactics, had better trained soldiers or perhaps warriors and finally the used iron weapons and armor while Neshamahs people were still using bronze weapons and armor.

                  In short, the were being slaughtered and were facing total extermination.

                  So in a way the ceremony that torned him into the Dead King and killed off all of the country was a last resort. It snatched the victory from the enemy.

                  Now Serenity is interesting. We know it’s a plane of Hell that DK appropriated and turned into something akin to a utopia. The weather is perfect, the earth is rich, there’s no sickness, no dangerous animals, no wars or strife. And he populated it with people who has never wanted for anything or has known hardships. The are educated and taught about the many dangers and sources of misery that plagues creation.

                  So they live their lives in Serenity under the guidance of the Dead King being taught from the cradle that he’s protecting them from the horrors of creation, and once they reach a certain age their king will raise them as undead to spare them from the hardship of aging and so they can serve him forever. I don’t remember if it’s been stated what that is, but both 40 and 60 sounds familiar.

                  Now this sounds perfectly horrible, but for those living in Serenity it’s just the way it is. And they know the DK loves them all…

                  Something we don’t know is where he got the first of them from. While it’s been said that he fueled the ceremony with the lives of all living in the nation I can’t shake the feeling that with the amount of work he put into the creation of Serenity it might just be that he populated it with the remains of his own people.

                  So did he really do it all just for power, or was it the only way he saw to save something of his people?

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        • Well, he’s not particularly impressed with gods, but he’s not all that self-impressed either if you know what I mean. He just wants the thing, he doesn’t think it’s The Greatest Thing Ever. It’s just what he specificallly wants for himself personally.

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    • Masego already has his new place, and maybe had it since book 2: that of the mage staying all day in his tower and experimenting about the wonders of magic.

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    • Sure we have. Archer and Hierophant are gonna get married, when early on they were both loner types.

      Archer is gonna settle down in one place instead of wandering.

      Zeze is gonna accept another person in his tower, keeping him away from his research for bells at a time.

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      • Archer is not going to settle down “instead of” wandering. She’s going to get her own place then go wandering with it at her back as somewhere to come back to. She’s established this much.

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    • Cat’s new name is a variant of Empress or possibly Conqueror.

      Dread Empress is an option but I expect a variant we haven’t seen so far.

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      • There’s been talk in the comments about Cat becoming Warden of the East. She even have that line a while back: I’ll be the warden rattling the bars when you get uppity, something, something. I forget exactly how it went, but it was cool.

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  2. And so now Indrani is the only one of the Woe who’s name was not ultimately transient, a step to something greater. I wonder if that will remain true?

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  3. Cat gettin her efforts (or at least, her intent) swept out from under her on multiple fronts, it seems.

    I wonder if the continued hardship is just another methodology of ensuring her ensuing name ends up stronger for it.

    RIP to the Woe, though – lost 2 (3 if you count Vivienne changing to Princess), and now I’m worried about the potential fight with Ranger.

    Curious that Hakram seems disillusioned enough with Cat’s reforms to believe them not worth their weight for making a decision, though – yes, Cat isn’t infallible, but that future is something she’s striving harder for than almost anything else she ever has.

    Hakram the oathbreaker warlord….not a great end in a story like that, no matter how morally ‘lose the least’ aspect he’s trying to put into the narrative

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    • Weren’t the Reforms mentioned the ones that Amadeus used to give the orcs more rights after the Conquest? The ones Malicia is actively setting up to get completely repealed?

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    • Weren’t the Reforms mentioned the ones that Amadeus used to give the orcs more rights after the Conquest? The ones Malicia is actively setting up to get completely repealed?

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    • Hakram was talking about Praes’s Reforms. Cat’s have relatively little to do with mundane culture and rulership.

      This was not a broken oath. It’s more that the oath has lost power on both sides – Cat is no longer a Warlord, and so Hakram is no longer an Adjutant. It was grown out of, step by step, and so, in the end, was released.

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    • Cat isn’t losing anything here, except for Hakram’s personal labor and time spent with her. He’s not going against her, that would be stupid. He’s just forging his own path alongside her – but no longer literally side to side, and that’s what he mourns.

      Also, Cat’s been pretty insisting that the Woe does not lose members so easily. P sure Hakram will still be part of it under whatever Name.

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      • Yes, but also no, I’m afraid.

        Hakram is not just one of the Woe: he is the first soldier who ever swore to her, her staunchest supporter, the one who has been there since the beginning. Catherine has unquestioning faith in him, and that comes, in part, from the fact that Hakram highest aspiration has ever been TO BE USEFUL TO HER.
        I don’t want to diminish a beautiful relationship by drawing some parallel to a mistress/slave dynamic, but I think it has to be addressed that this relationship was built on that foundation: Hakram loves Catherine the way a knife loves a steady hand.

        That faith is not a small part of what they are. In Book 4, Hakram contradicting her in public shook Catherine to her core. In Book 6, the realization that Hakram wanted things made her uneasy, because she was suddenly no longer sure of what lines they moved by, and what her approach was supposed to be.

        Hakram transitioning is not really a change with regards to the WoE. Just like it wasn’t for Hierophant, or Vivienne.

        But his no longer being the Adjutant?
        Oh, no. THAT will have to be addressed.

        And that is why he knows this will cost them.

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        • You are right about a lot of this, but there’s the other part of their relationship: the reason WHY Hakram latched on to her personally. The ideological part, the fire she lit in him. He wanted her to succeed because she embodied the force he wanted to see in the world. There’s a reason he’s the only one of the Woe to ever really have talked her down from taking an evil-er path to a good-er option (the Helikean riders in Book 5).

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  4. Whew, this was deceptively intense. Hakram learning that his own people were being dismantled the same way Callow was, leading him to realize that there aren’t any paths that end up good for them, leading him to follow his Warlord’s example by blazing a new trail, through fire and blood. Dead the man, dead the hand, and dead the enemies who would rise against this new Warlord.
    I wonder if he really will break away from the Woe with this, or if he can still be a part of it. It actually sounds like he’s doing what Malicia did, leaving the group to become the leader of a nation.

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    • Malicia never left any group. She was never one of the Calamities, when they earned the title she was still a concubine plotting behind everyone’s back.

      I am 100% certain Hakram will still be part of the Woe.

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      • I imagine that if Cat was staying as the Black Queen, the Woe would fall apart, with Vivienne and Hakram transitioning into ruling Names, but since she’s becoming a Ruler of Ruling Named, the group itself will endure, even if the nuances will be different.

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      • “It was the royal seal below but there were fresher words, the ink a little smudged. No matter where you end up, Catherine Foundling had written in that ugly scrawl of hers, you will be one of mine. Sooner or later, I will come to collect.

        One does not simply walk away from being one of Catherine’s Foundlings.

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    • The Woe will leave ripples through all time and stories, every single member is going to rise to the pinnacle of a station, and lead great numbers of people to better futures, more well structured and balanced futures that limit the Game to only those willing to participate.

      Heirophant seeks to understand, percieve, break, wrest divinity from the puny beings who use their world for fun. Doing so, he leads the forces of magic research.

      ? (Cat) wants to judge, rule, control, limit, and rewrite the stories of their world into something safe for the masses, yet still useful for themselves and the gods. It’s why she wanted countries to not be run by names. Doing so she leads the forces of Named, of leaders of countries, and of Cardinal.

      Princess will eventually become Queen, probably, if not, it’s still a good Name. She will lead Callow.

      Warlord? Wants to be useful to cat, yes, but leading his people into the future is of use to everyone, not just cat. Cementing their future solidly in the new dynamic means that they follow Cats vision into the future side by side, not lagging behind, or fighting against. Doing so he leads the orcs.

      Archer, Huntress, and Ranger will likely disappear into the woods, and we won’t see what happens until a flashback interlude later, but whoever emerges (money’s on Archer) will be the pinnacle of the Role, not having changed names, just reached the peak of it. Taking Rangers role doesn’t have to mean taking her Name. Doing so, she leads a large contingent from Rangers place, as well as being an easy hand of death for Cat to send after anyone breaking the rules.

      ? (Akua) will likely be dread empress, unless she does the twilight city trap, either way she will serve a valuable puzzle piece for Cat. As twilight crown jailer, she gives fast travel to the masses and removes the world’s greatest evil from play, for a millenia at least. As empress she leads Praes. If Amadeus leads Praes, then the same goal is achieved.

      Cat already has a Name in the dwarven country backing her. She has literal (lesser) gods in the Drow. She has an ally in the Principate. The only people she wouldn’t have backing her (directly and obviously) is the elves, the goblins, the gnomes, and maybe the dragons, if there’s more than one left.

      I believe that even if not on purpose, Cat has placed a Name in power in every force on the continent to allow the ending of the age to pass all at once, rather than broken into pieces. To allow it to pass at all, she needs the support of all the nations, fighting as one to slay a rule breaking evil, an evil greater than the petty squabbles of countries.

      Whether the story continues on after that goal is accomplished, I don’t know. We may see the gnomes arrive in helicopters and give Cardinal a green letter for the first time, to tell them that they’ve gone in the correct direction for civilization, rather than progressing too fast.

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  5. Mm, new worlds forming up. More connections slipping away from Catherine as she grows into something bigger. It is indeed quite notable that the orcs finding a proper path would be rather risky, and charting out their own synergistic path rather fits the Age of Order. Groups strong but not quite strong enough, with distinct value held at a Cardinal point.

    I wonder then what path he may make as a Warlord, its been a long time, so perhaps some of it may be shifted. A grand war is still on the horizon too

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    • I imagine that Hakram’s plan is to turn the Clans into their own political entity. They already have enough Legion training and vets that they could form their own fighting force instead of joining up with Praes. If Hakram can get himself declare Warlord and then bring the full might of the Clans against Keter, he can leverage that to get formally recognized by the Grand Alliance. Sign on to the Liesse Accords and gain some legitimacy from that, as well as opening up some more trade routes.

      That would all thread the needle between keeping the Clans relevant and a part of the new age, but not having them just be another second class citizen of Praes. They could cut their major ties with Praes and stem the cultural bleeding that Black set in motion. But it also gives them an outward enemy to focus their energies on, in the form of Praes being shitty about losing their hold on the Clans. The Orcs’ culture is going to change, but that has to happen if they want to be anything more than pawns in the future. But I think Hakram can take guide that change in a way that doesn’t see the Clans losing their core identity.

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      • The problem with that idea is that the orcs and the Steppes don’t really have any resources for trade aside from sending their young to serve as soldiers for other nations, which would be rather difficult if they were keeping their troops as their own military.

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  6. Yeah I saw this one coming. I think all the characters in transitional states right now in Cat, Hanno, Hakram, Viv and Akua have some degree of mirroring with each other really. Though I don’t really think Cat and Viv are evolving too much as people right now like the other three. But the connections between Hanno and Hakram (as they were paired) are kinda obvious insofar as they both don’t have much interest in ruling or playing politics. But have kinda reached the point where they feel its all going to crap and if you want done right you have to do it yourself.

    I don’t think Masego is going to change Name though since he created that Name himself. I also don’t think Archer is either quite frankly. I suppose defeating Ranger could unlock something but honestly that seems more Cat’s pet project and maybe Silver Huntress then anything Cocky or Indrani are super into.

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    • Masego has had his moment. Archer’s will be found in her final meeting with Ranger. She doesn’t need to change because who she is works.

      IMO, the Woe as the were are done with their first tale.They aren’t a band of five anymore in the classical sense. Instead they will grow to encompass new Roles or go on to the greater path their name leads them to. Doing so just incidentally separates them. I don’t think this is typical of villains does anyone else? It’s the end of the heroes tales. Its the tale of the scrappy band becoming kings and queens to lead their folk into a new age while some disappear to parts unknown to seek the mysteries they always said they would when they went adventuring. The Woe as they were are gone. The bond will remain but they will not if that makes sense.

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      • But it could lead to nostalgia boost. The rare time they are all
        Together again and a threat comes up, they will kick ridiculous amounts of ass as it all comes back for a bit and they are a band of five to make you shit yourself in fighting them once more.

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  7. Culture shift for the Orcs too, good stuff.
    I wonder how much of the old name of warlord will shine through and how much it will change with the new age?

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  8. I don’t know why anyone could believe Hakram is slipping away from Catherine. They love each other.

    Hakram’s Role is changing, and so also his Name, but he’s still the same man. He’s still Hakram.

    I also don’t see why or how this change can mean he leaves the Woe. If Vivienne’s losing her Name didn’t do it, why would this?

    Hakram is merely reinterpreting Catherine’s wishes as per the situation he found. Catherine can hardly blame him for that.

    The only real issue is that Hakram and Catherine will have less time for and with each other, due to Hakram’s new Role. But villainy grants unending youth anyway, and there are always scrying rituals.

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    • Hakram and Cat will drift away from each other as a result of this because the original position was basically “siamese twins”. They will still be friends, but there’s no stepping around the truth that it will not be the same again and they will not give each other the security they used to. They’ll be too busy for that.

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      • This chapter is Hakram acknowledging the truth that Catherine has been struggling with since the arc where he got injured again. He won’t survive in the story she made for herself. Hakram has no place in it really. She knew it but could never admit it so she focused a bit to much on keeping him alive instead of being honest with him. It hurt them both in the end. The Woe mirror the whole heroic tradition right? This is Hakrams rise from his existential fall.

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        • Rejection Sensitive Dysphoria – basically extreme difficulty in dealing with rejection. (there’s more to it than that which you can look up if you care to. I really only know what it is in a vague way.)

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            • Her desire to be loved and having these moments of despair is why I started thinking the ‘Cat gets bound to Twilight as the seal on the Dead King’ because I can really see her making that choice as Vivienne comes into her own, Hakram establishes his powerbase, Idrani and Maseago are their own thing, and Akua straight up decks her with the proposed plan.

              However EE has said there will be one more ‘full band of 5’ moment, so that may not yet happen, since my theory is based on Cat at a low point making an irreversible choice. And while they are not ‘happy moments’, I don’t think one feels quite so isolated to make these choices.

              However, Cat may also make the choice on the basis that she ‘wouldn’t throw any of [her friends] under the bus’

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              • Also, minor note: I was thinking Akua chewing Cat out as a rejection of her offer was what I wanted, but I think Akua giving Cat a black eye and just being done with her is better, with no words exchanged. She still keeps to the Accords and all that because they are a better way, but she is done with Cat as a person.

                Maybe I’m harsh, but Cat has a tendency to be the moral equivalence of a stepping stone in mud at times: she gets people out of the mud and onto better paths, but she herself sort of stays down in the mud.

                She argued against Bonfire, but there is a log of civilian casualties here at Kala with the poisoning of the lake, for one.

                I liked Akua’s arc for it’s own sake, not necessarily how it directly relates back to Cat.

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                • RIP.

                  I honestly want Akua to take care of Cat? I feel like she understands and appreciates Cat on a level even the rest of the Woe doesn’t, not really. And I feel like she would be able to really see Cat’s self-destructive bullshit, take her hands and say “nope no more of this”.

                  …I just really want that.

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                  • I’ve said before when I mentioned giving the ‘bleak ending’ serious thoughts as likely strongly biased because I’m not necessarily in the best of places at times recently, so my predictions skew negatively here. Plus, I can really easily see Cat’s Name as being something that has grown beyond what the ‘system really expected (in the sense of authority/power of a single ‘piece’ on the board) which makes it easy to make her the hanging sword over an empty throne that is ‘supreme rule over Named’. Sort of like how Hierarch is still the basis of authority in the League that Basila plans around, even if she doesn’t expect him to come back.

                    If the Elves were more engaged with the current conflict, I could see a twist of turning the Forever King into the Twilight King, but I think the Elves would need to be around more than they have been to see that make sense. It would also end the Deoraithe exile though, which would be interesting since their definitive source of conflict would have been resolved by Cat, even if they despise her for keeping Akua around.

                    I do appreciate the _idea_ of Akua being the one to bring Cat back to herself. While they never really mirrored after First Liesse (you yourself pointed out that Second Liesse was between the Truebloods and Amadeus /Malicia, with the kids stuck in the middle), they are mirrored as being people who have done a lot of harm and are wanting the peace and quiet. Perhaps they can just be two distant figures at the heart of Cardinal.

                    If your prediction is correct, it might fit into Amadeus personal reflection of Akua as a ‘wild card’ he doesn’t understand, if we get a scene between himself, Cat, and Malicia like at Second Liesse. As I noted previously, Cat’s self destructive bullshit is something that in my opinion she learned from Amadeus, and I kind of want him to get an eye opener when it comes to ‘teaching should not come at the expense of the children’ lecture that he gave Ranger. I may agree with him, but it’s a bit rich considering the consequences of his own teaching style. Having Akua, of all people, pull Cat back from the brink would drive the point home.

                    I’m not saying this as a ‘break Amadeus’ plot point, but more because I do not know if he sees the bad side of what he has taught Cat really. His reflections of Cat is pride and where she has done better than he did.

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                    Sorry for the ramble, this ended up being way to many interconnected ideas at once (par for the course I guess). TLDR; I _like_ the idea, and I can see how it could happen. I just am not entirely sure if that is what will happen.

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                    • Amadeus was earnestly trying to teach Cat better than he knew himself, including the self-destructive bullshit. Too bad “do as I say not as I do” didn’t work out for him lmao. (In other words, I agree completely)

                      Oh I am not sure if that is what will happen either. I want it to, which is a completely different thing.

                      Honestly, maybe someone other than Akua needs to first slap Catherine out of her “I am forever guilty for Liesse and there is no forgiveness” mindset. She’s projecting on Akua like she’s a TV screen, but that is complicated by the fact Akua DID, uh, do that consciously, deliberately, uncoerced and with full awareness of her actions.

                      IDK, I love everything about this arc. I just want Cat to snap out of the “long prices” nonsense which she even ADMITS OUT LOUD is nonsense, jeez Cat!!!!

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                    • I think the Elves will probably be doing the Arcadia thing, probably doing the same shard-into-realm thing that was used to create Twilight. They already have the crown.

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                    • I wonder under what circumstances spring (with elves) and autumn (with fast travel, GP and an imprisoned DK) would merge.

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  9. I don’t believe Zeze’s name is changing until he dismantles the last wonders of this age.

    Archer though can easily transition into something bigger and better. She’s already quite different than what she used to be. As soon as she acquires the knowledge and intent for a new name she’s ready, and that can, and likely will, come when they confront Ranger.

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  10. Typo Thread:

    instead must rely > instead had to rely
    Adjutant did wade (should this be did not)
    only he > only him
    being this position > being in this position
    in, power? > in? Power?
    when she already > when she’d already
    the like the > like the
    good as sown > good as sewn
    Snake Troketooth > Troke Snaketooth
    more orcs thinking > more orcs thought
    fate Clans > fate of the Clans

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  11. This feels like a “The enemy’s gate is down” moment. A drastic, unthinkable action. A simple goal with finessed execution.

    Make war on Praes and tear the tower down.

    Or mass-migrate to Arcadia I guess. Lots of people to fight there and winter doesn’t really exist.

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    • Even if the Empire was completely destroyed (which it won’t be, since Praes needs to be mostly in one piece to fight the Dead King), there would still be the question of what role the orcs should play in whatever comes next – how do they keep the benefits of civilization without losing their culture?

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      • Where ‘civilisation’ means non-portable forges, trade in manufactured goods, exchange of people with the Legions, and probably some things that I’ve forgotten; many of which are inhospitable to nomadism and raiding.

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  12. So this definitely isn’t a betrayal on Hakram’s part. He hasn’t been “Adjutant” in truth for a long time, anyway. What it is is Hakram catching up to the rest of the Woe’s stories.

    Cat is pointed towards a position of supreme rule, Vivienne is to become Queen of Callow, Archer is likely meant to take over for Ranger as the Lady, and Hierophant is making steady and terrifying progress towards apotheosis. If Hakram didn’t make a move towards a crown of some sort, then he was dead.

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    • Burlyraven: The war against Keter has been good for Masego, I think. He’s learned so much from both allies and enemies like Keter and the elves.

      On the other hand, I wonder sometimes if Masego already has enough raw data to begin his ascent to apotheosis, and he’s only delaying to help Catherine and the other Woe, and for revenge against Neshamah for making him blow up Indrani’s head.

      Masego is basically a nice person but I believed him when he said he wanted to torture Neshamah.

      As an aside: This is probably a silly idea, but I wonder if Archer’s big advantage over her teacher the Ranger is that Archer has a sense of humor and Ranger basically does not.

      Another possible advantage is that Archer has suffered near-death and actual death, and I’m not sure Ranger has ever had either experience.

      Sometimes I wonder how deep Ranger can possibly be. She may actually be a kinda shallow person.

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  13. This was an excellent chapter. Hakram didn’t beat a fool when reciting ancient orc poetry, but the poetry was there and gods was it scary. Hakram the Warlord, huh? I was half expecting Juniper to go this route, but she is not here and she is not orc enough, besides. Her war is the direction of strategy, leading from rear and controlling it all, and she has no poetry either. Don’t tell Juniper I said that, though.

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  14. I might be confused.
    Didn’t Hakram have a detailed plan for future Orc society that he was working the kinks out of?
    I feel like this wasn’t addressed directly in this chapter, were they just a refinement for the helmet path? In this section Cathrine represented the helmet path but there was a whole thing about them not seeing eye-to-eye on this issue.

    We’re seeing Hakram adrift deciding to forge his own way for Orcs but I thought that was *always* his thing. The plans he made for the steppes were always separate from Cathrine’s, he put in a lot of careful thought into Orc future – was he being so naive that he needed a visit to understand some Orcs actually like the old ways? (rather than the smaller revelation that those have a good reason to support Troke)

    His realisation that he needs to take the mantle of leadership is dramatic and moving but It seems he also had a change of heart about Orc future and I don’t understand what it was exactly.

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    • He did not realize that orcs might have a point about liking the old ways and that the old ways were something distinct and valuable enough to be worth protecting.

      Also, he had hoped he would be able to nudge orcs towards the future he wants from Catherine’s side, without taking the center stage himself. Just prepare the conditions and then they’ll do the thing that’s best for them, right?

      I do agree that this has clearly always been His Thing. He just didn’t admit to himself that that means he’s got to do it himself.

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    • I think his plan was based on his experiences with orcs from pro-Legion clans. He’d already understood that side of his homeland, just not the perspective of the other clans, ones he hadn’t had that kind of contact with until this.

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  15. Troke Snaketooth’s plan of “make yourself a high lord so that nobody can interfere in how the orcs rule themselves” isn’t really a bad plan – Hakram admits that it’s similar to how Catherine protected Callowan culture – the only problem is that he’s on Malicia’s side.

    So Hakram needs to steal that plan out from under Troke – either backing him while finding a way to drive a wedge between him and the Tower, or setting up his alliance as “the same but better,” or maybe just killing Troke and taking over if that’s a thing orcs allow.

    (He also needs some way to ensure the new system endures past one High Lord and one Empress, which I really have no clue on, but that’s a problem for Future Hakram.)

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    • The problem is, the old orc culture is horrible and toxic in many of the same ways as the Wasteland’s Age of Wonders culture.

      The improvements to be found in the new way ™ are not minute. Reread Hakram’s musings on that path again. Yes, it will lose them some, but it will gain them so, so much.

      Hakram needs to find a middle way…

      …and steal Troke’s plan from under him 😀

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  16. You know, it’s in ne of funny. In any other context, any other story, this would be a happy thing. The triumphant rise of the self-doubting hero as they realize they are truly the best, maybe only, hope for the future of their people. The final actualization of their sense of self, duty, and resolve.

    But here it’s just sad, mostly because Hakram is the sort of person who probably feels he’d be better off without a sense of self at all.

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  17. I will not be surprised when Cat had this planned from the beginning. I believe that she knew what would happen if she sent Hakram to the Clans.

    Hakram is, and always be, part of the Woe. Once a member, always a member.

    Cat and Hakram’s relationship will change, it is rare when a relationship does not. Their priorities have changed, and have been for a while. Change hurts, but not always in a terrible way.

    They will always be friends, as only friends who have been through the fire can be. They genuinely love each other.

    Cat knew, or at the least hoped, this would happen in my opinion.

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    • JRogue: Agree. Catherine’s facility with Story probably means she anticipated this at least in part.

      There is a non-trivial chance she did not, though. Catherine has her blind spots, and love is a big blind spot.

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  18. Catherine Foundling, the Beast of Cardinal
    Warlord Hakram Deadhand of the Orc
    Good Queen Vivienne I Dartwick of Callow
    Masego the deity
    Indrani the Archer
    Warden of Autumn Akua Sahelian (aka Twilight Jailer/Gaoler, keeper of the Dead King’s prison)

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  19. It’s interesting how Hakram thinks about the Steppes, the land itself. Their “harshness”, the “land of gnawing” and “ten thousand miles of snow”, finding “nothing” when he looks out at the “empty plains” that he likens to Scribe’s hopelessness.

    He considers how the ever-present threat of hunger shaped the “closed circle” of the old ways, and how even proponents of the skull path wouldn’t completely break with Praes, lest the Clans starve. He summarizes the shield path as “the promises of the Conquest, faithfully kept, and hunger for more of the same.” The clans of the fang path would follow whoever promises better rewards, because “hunger had no philosophy”.

    We’ve seen throughout the story that hunger is at the heart of orcs; certainly, there’s a biological component to this (Ehioze’s Measure comes to mind), but I wonder how much of it is shaped by their environment, the Steppes. Limited resources and the constant threat of starvation would have a serious cultural impact, especially given that orcs have lived there for millennia.

    I also wonder how essential that environment is to the parts of orc culture that Hakram wants to preserve. The shield path was unacceptable because even fully integrating with Praes would see orcs be second-class citizens: “We lose everything that we are without becoming equals.” The skull path would fail, because they can’t thrive without Praes’s resources: “We unite against something, someone – or when there is another way to gain aside from eating each other.” The fang path offers no direction for his people, just blind stumbling towards irrelevance.

    What if the orcs left the Steppes? Better land would let them thrive on their own; better neighbors would let them integrate as true equals. Callow has been slowly growing more friendly to greenskins and has already transplanted a goblin tribe, the ravaged south could likely sustain much greater herds than the Steppes, and he’s got an in with the queen. Or somewhere near the ratlings, which would provide the Clans with a common enemy and a steady supply of meat (so long as they can get along with the drow).

    I don’t think it’s likely — narratively, we’ve already seen an exodus of the drow, and then only because they faced annihilation — but it’s interesting that Hakram seems to have no love for the Steppes. It feels like the orcs were left unmoored by the Miezans: so much of their culture lost, their holy sites razed, and essentially suborned to Praes ever since. What would they actually lose by leaving?

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    • They may lack their old holy sites, but they still have others- and even razed, a holy site remains a site, so even if their temples are fallen and the treasures looted, there’s still history there. The orcs can’t move to Callow because they don’t keep sheep, they’re herders yes but they follow herds of… something like reindeer, I think, for meat and fur and antler. If they left they’d lose the last things they have of being orcs, and in Callow they’d remain second-class citizens, and their obligate carnivory and cultural cannibalism would not see them welcomed there. The goblins are an insular people by choice, and so Callowans do not have to see or deal with their more questionable practices. Orcs do not have that option. Besides, there’s too many orcs. The only place they could go where they could all fit is Keter, and that has been promised to the drow.

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