Chapter 21: Amadeus’ Plan

“Is there not a stark absurdity to what a battle truly is? Thousands of strangers on two sides of a field, prepared to slaughter each other because half a dozen men on either side told them to.”

– King Edmund of Callow, the Inkhand

Seen from the above, it was easy to understand why General Sacker had agreed to the cease-fire.

The Rebel Legions were like a bottled rat, now that the Black Knight had called for a retreat of her own army. Juniper had wasted no time surrounding their position in the valley, turning all engines on the tightly-packed ranks, and Sepulchral’s own army had hit them in the back even more brutally at my order. Sacker’s troops defending her camp had collapsed under the combine pressure of mage cadres and Nok wavemen, archers who lived up to their sharp reputation. It’d been a bloody business, feeding levies into Legion fortifications, but we’d caught the rebels unaware and the disparity in numbers had them collapsing in short order.

The camp was ours now, the parts we hadn’t torched anyway. That’d left the Rebel Legions surrounded between steep hills, stripped of supplies and room to maneuver as the noose tightened around them. To annihilate Sacker’s army, nothing would be required of the Army of Callow save that it hold its own palisades while at a generous advantage. All Juniper needed to do was wait while Sepulchral hammered at the Rebel Legions from behind with her great numbers and fresh troops. The rat would be pressed against the bottom of the bottle, squeeze so tightly nothing was left but ground flesh and blood. So when the offer had come from Juniper, it’d only been natural that General Sacker accepted a cease-fire and talks.

Zombie the Seventh took nothing more than the pressure of my knees to be guided into a gentle downwards glide. The creature – she wasn’t a hippogriff, not exactly, but given the similarities I was currently leaning towards ‘hippocrow’ – had proved to be eager and obedient after I’d raised her, perhaps because the Sisters had taken a personal interest in the process. Komena in particular had felt intrigued, enough to lend a hand to the process. Regardless, my latest Zombie had proved to be a very good girl indeed on top of being even quicker in flight than I’d thought she would be. Turns could get a little tricky, mind you, but Zombie clearly relied more on Creational laws than magical ones when it came to her flight.

Compared to my last flying mount, anyway.

The no-man’s-land between our position and that of the rebels had been cleared for the duration of the talks, legionaries returning to hide behind their walls, and the empty space made it all the easier to pick out the delegations. Juniper didn’t seem to have brought any officers with her, but she’d been wise enough to bring Indrani and Alexis as bodyguards. There wasn’t a lot that’d be able to get past those two. Sacker, on the other hand, had with her two men with the painted insignias of senior legates on their armour. There were half a dozen regulars with them, but they might as well be decorations for what it mattered.

I landed half a hundred feet away, Zombie’s arc smoothly turning into a run and slowing down as we approached. The Mantle of Woe trailing behind me, sword at my hip and yew staff lowered, I brought my mount to a halt before the delegations.

“Marshal Juniper,” I smiled. “Congratulations are in order.”

The Hellhound scoffed, but I could see the pleasure she was badly hiding.

“Could have gone better,” Juniper said. “But we can save that talk for the camp, Warlord. There are more pressing matters to settle.”

“So there are,” I agreed, eye turning to the three top officers of the Rebel Legions.

“Black Queen,” General Sacker blandly said. “Greetings.”

Someone had remembered my warning, I noted. Good. I’d been completely serious.

“Sacker,” I said.

“The legates with me are-”

“Irrelevant,” I bluntly interrupted.

The human of the pair, a middle-aged Taghreb, looked furious at that. She didn’t speak out, though. The orc seemed to take it in stride, which raised my esteem by a notch.

“Either you can speak for your entire set of legions or this conversation is pointless,” I said. “I did not come here to indulge in petty games.”

“I can speak for our men,” General Sacker flatly said.

A look to the legates – the light caught in her fake eye, reminding me I was not the only woman here to have lost one – served as both a quell and confirmation. Neither gainsaid her.

“Good,” I smiled.

“We’re willing to surrender,” the old goblin said, “under certain terms. Guarantees need to be made that no soldiers will be harmed. Regular food and water. We’re willing to sit out the rest of this war if-”

She was serious, I realized. How many soldiers did she have left of the thirteen thousand she’d begun the day with? Couldn’t be more than eight, after the beating they’d taken. And she still thought she was in a position to strongarm me. I’d been too soft on these people, I suddenly realize. The Rebel Legions had taken my coin and grain before selling me down the river without a second thought, and the way I’d just taken it had made them think I was easy pickings. I’d held back, out of a desire to maintain the armies of Praes for the greater war and out of respect for my father.

It was long past time I stopped.

“Archer,” I said, “nock an arrow.”

I heard a chuckle and did not need to turn to know she obeyed. I met Sacker’s eyes evenly.

“You seem to have some grave misunderstandings about the nature of your situation,” I said. “So letme be clear: if I tell Archer to fire that arrow eastwards, Sepulchral’s army will resume its attack.”

The goblin scoffed.

“You’d lose-”

“I don’t give a shit how many of them we lose,” I coldly said. “I’ll spend her entire army if that’s what it takes to break you.”

I harshly laughed.

Terms?” I mocked. “You’ll sit out the war if? I didn’t come here to negotiate with you, Sacker. I did that once before and you fine fellows me in the back. We’re past making deals.”

I struck my staff against the ground and the sound rippled out, dust flying up.

“You can surrender unconditionally,” I said. “Or Archer will shoot that arrow and I’ll fucking kill you all.”

Sacker’s face tightened, her ever half-closed eyes opening fully. She studied my face and whatever she found there had her hesitating. She turned to Juniper.

“And you have nothing to say to this, Marshal of Callow?” she pressed. “Your men will be the ones spent for this madness.”

Juniper’s face hardened and she bared pale fangs.

“Every sack of grain your soldiers ate, every crate of steel you used, could have kept some of my legionaries out west alive,” the Hellhound growled. “And what did we get for it? Be careful now of calling on sentiment. You might not like what you let out of the cage.”

Sacker flinched. Juniper had been as a niece to her, once. Maybe she still was in some ways. But personal ties cut both ways. She turned her eyes back to me, knowing better than to ask for anything out of the likes of Archer and the Huntress. Hells, of the two Alexis would probably be the hardliner. She had that traditional heroic disregard for the lives of anyone that might be considered to stand under Evil’s banner.

“Many officers will balk,” General Sacker told me. “If you do not offer guarantees-”

“So let them balk,” I shrugged. “We can have this conversation again in half a bell, when I’ve put another few thousand in the ground.”

The genuine indifference in my voice, I thought, was what got it through to her I wasn’t bluffing. I absolutely wasn’t. I’d just make sure that the household troops from Askum and Nok were the vanguard for the assault instead of the levies, to keep the casualties of the attack where they deserved to be. The goblin sagged.

“An hour,” Sacker said. “Give me an hour to talk the officers into it without bloodshed.”

I glanced at Juniper, who looked like she was biting down on the answer she wanted to give but did not have the authority to. No objections there, then. I might as well give the rebels a little more rope, lest the noose turning into an outright hanging.

“An hour,” I agreed. “If I don’t have your formal and unconditional surrender by the end of it…”

I did not finish the sentence, or particularly need to. Sacker and the legates left, tails between their legs, and returned to their lines.

I got my surrender before the time had passed.

“We are now victims of our own success,” General Zola sadly said.

No one in the war council – our usual, save now with the addition of General Jeremiah Holt – argued with that, because it was the honest truth. We’d forced the Rebel Legions to surrender and the Loyalist Legions to retreat to their camp in northern Kala Hills, but we now had fresh problems on our hands. Namely, seven thousand eight hundred and seventy-nine prisoners of war that we needed to keep an eye on. And keep under a roof, fed and with enough water to live. We were effectively being forced to supply a second army of prisoners and our supplies would be stretched to a breaking point if we did. Much of the Rebel Legions’ own foodstuff had been either burned or looted when Sepulchral’s forces took their camp.

Some of that I could get back from them, but I didn’t want to take too much. The Praesi law that undead could not hold noble title meant that Abreha Mirembe’s hold on her own army was painfully fragile, holding mostly because the soldiers from Nok were going to stick around as long as it looked like Isobe was still going to inherit Aksum. Otherwise those forces would be marching away by now, leaving behind them a vicious Aksum civil war. No, I had to leave Sepulchral some of the goods. Asking back for half was reasonable, I decided, and I’d set Vivienne to arranging it.

“I prefer the troubles of a great victory to those of a great defeat,” the Princess in question snorted. “We have supplies enough to push back the issue for a few days without it denting our reserves too much. We can keep our attention on more pressing matters.”

Juniper cleared her throat.

“Speaking of,” the Hellhound said. “Pickler, what is your timeline on the work?”

After the surrender came and the rebels laid down their weapons, there were only a few hours left before sundown. Since it was clear there’d be no more fighting for the day, Pickler had taken to bettering our position in anticipation of tomorrow. Companies of unarmed prisoners had, under the wary eye of our own legionaries, been set to taking down the enemy’s fortifications: tearing down their palisades and filling their trenches.

“Our palisade will be the only one standing come dark,” Sapper-General Pickler said, “but the trenches are harder work. Maybe half of it done in time, if we’re lucky. I gave orders to focus on the road, it’ll be easier for us to move troops across if we need to go on the offensive.”

“Can goblin prisoners not be put to work in the dark?” Brandon Talbot asked.

I grimaced at that and wasn’t the only one.

“They’ll run,” I said. “And do just that if we’re lucky. They’ve a lot more goblins than we do, too, so even if we put our own goblin legionaries as overseers it’d be a major risk. Better to just left the work unfinished.”

“Agreed,” Juniper said. “It is only a precaution, regardless. I don’t believe that Marshal Nim will be going on the offensive. Her losses appear to have been extensive.”

I cocked an eyebrow.

“We got casualties estimates for her too, now?”

The tall orc nodded. With the casualties taken in the early skirmishes around the region, the desertion of the Thirteenth and the mauling the Eighth had taken during the night our guess had been that the Black Knight had been fielding an army about sixteen to seventeen thousand strong. How many were left now, though?

“At least five thousand and a half dead,” the Hellhound said. “Tentatively we’re pegging her current strength at eleven thousand.”

I let out a low whistle. With the Thirteenth as last moment reinforcements, this morning we’d fielded around fifteen thousand men. Our butcher’s bill had us at twelve thousand eight hundred and twelve soldiers now. Almost thirteen thousand strong. Gods, even Sepulchral had lost more men than we had: her twenty thousand had, between civil war and battle and desertions, tumbled down to maybefifteen thousand now. Gods. Our total losses had been less than half of those of every other army on the field individually, not even put together.

Juniper had, over the span of an afternoon, not upended the balance of power so much as murdered it and buried it in a shallow grave. Weeping Heavens. I found my glass of water, emptied it on the ground and leaned back my seat to grab a bottle of aragh. I poured myself a finger, then found a few grins and cups headed my way. When everyone had their own in hand, I solemnly raised my cup.

“To the Hellhound,” I said, “and the Battle of Kala.”

It was with rowdy cheer my toast was taken up, drinks going down and being poured anew. I met Juniper’s eyes and grinned, enjoying the dark flush to her cheeks. Aisha even talked her into a cup of her own. I laid back into my seat, enjoying the warmth of the tent, and breathed out weeks of worry. They could be put to rest, for a few hours. We’d earned it.

After all, for all the troubles of victory I’d rather be in this tent tonight than any of the other three.

With morning came the time to make the difficult decisions.

The Black Knight still had a sizeable army holed up in Kala Hills, but so long as Sepulchral remained on our side the threat was mitigated. None of my general staff had an appetite for trying to force that camp immediately, especially not when leaving the Legions in it would make them wither on the vine. We’d poisoned Nioqe Lake and Nim herself had poisoned the main wells in the region, so in at most a week their water situation was going to start getting dangerous. Only the scale of the losses they’d taken in battle would prevent it from being an issue even earlier. Taking into consideration our numerical advantage – we had the Loyalist Legions outnumbered almost three to one – and our fortifications in the valley, it would be suicide for the Black Knight to attack us. That meant we had enough breathing room to handle our own internal troubles. The most urgent of them was, unsurprisingly, what to do with the several thousand prisoners we’d taken.

“We can’t handle feeding them for the rest of the campaign,” Aisha said. “And even if we could, we need to begin marching on Ater soon. There is no practical way to bring that many prisoners with us on the march.”

“We should keep the officers of tribune rank and give the Fourth’s Justice to the rest,” Brandon Talbot advised.

Gods, that stupid name. It was what some of my men had taken to calling the punishment I’d given the Helikean cataphracts after capturing them back in Iserre: broken fingers and being stripped of equipment.

“This is a wild land,” Aquiline said. “It would be kinder to simply kill those warriors than to maim and release them. The sword will hurt less than claws.”

“It would be a death sentence to release them like that,” Vivienne agreed. “Ideally we would ransom them instead, but they’ve managed to burn every bridge they have. There’s no one left who’d pay for them.”

“Amadeus might,” I objected.

“He can’t afford the price,” she frankly replied.

“We should seek to recruit soldiers instead,” General Jeremiah said. “It would make up for our losses, and the Army of Callow has expertise in assimilating legions.”

I rather admired the entirely unashamed way he said.

“That was my thought was well,” I admitted, “and Juniper’s too. How did that go?”

The Hellhound sighed.

“Malicia poisoned the well,” she said. “Most of the rank and file are convinced we assassinated two of their three generals just before making common cause with Sepulchral after a coup failed. Maybe three hundred volunteers, and I wouldn’t trust them right off.”

Fucking Malicia. I might have given the order to kill Mok, sure, but I wouldn’t have been sloppy enough not get blamed for it afterwards.

“They might not be willing to fight for us,” Vivienne said, “but they might be willing to fight against the Black Knight.”

She paused, choosing her words.

“We could offer some of the soldiers freedom in exchange for serving as the first wave of an attack against the camp in the hills.”

I chewed on that for a moment. Juniper looked on the fence, but the idea appealed to me. Sure it’d be putting troops we didn’t trust all that much in our order of battle, but it’d also soak up casualties that would otherwise thin my own ranks. And, even better, I wouldn’t be expected to keep feeding those soldiers after they went their own way.

“We’d have to limit the numbers,” I said. “Else we’re just releasing an army into the wilds.”

“Organization will be tricky,” Juniper said. “I’ll want to position them so if they turn against us it won’t lead to disaster.”

That wasn’t a no, and after a round of debate the idea was adopted. Aisha left the tent to begin organizing it. That didn’t entirely solve our prisoner problem, though, since two thousand at most was what I was comfortable arming again. The arguments went in a circle. No one thought we should feed the prisoners or keep them with us, but most of the measures that’d make them no longer a problem for the rest of this campaign also effectively consigned to death by Wasteland. Everyone agreed, at least, that we should keep the high-ranking officers as prisoners. Execution was floated as an option – by Talbot – but even those that didn’t balk at killing prisoners thought it might lead to mass unrest among the imprisoned soldiers.

“Even arming half of them would be a mistake,” General Zola argued. “With that many soldiers, which we agreed would be needed to survive the Wasteland, they have enough men to begin seizing the private armories of nobles and towns. They would rearm and pursue us.”

“We don’t know for certain that they would,” Juniper grunted. “But I take your point. I don’t want to leave that force at our back either.”

And that was the crux of the issue, really. We all wanted to march on Ater, where the war on Praes would be brought to an end, but we needed to clean up house first. That would mean dealing with the Sepulchral situation, later today, but also tying up all our other loose ends. Marshal Nim’s army needed to be decisively broken or made to surrender, and after that was done I didn’t want Sacker’s army nipping at our our heels when we moved south. Hells, to be frank I didn’t want them involved in that siege at all. They’d not proved to be trustworthy enough to be allowed to, and they’d failed to be victorious enough to force the issue their way. I could just see them stumbling into us at the last moment and fuc- wait, no.

“We’re looking at this wrong,” I said. “Juniper, how long do you expect operations in Ater to last?”

“Two months at most,” she said.

Longer than that and we’d be forced to make a deal anyway. Procer was already buckling, if we wanted there to still be a west by the time we returned we couldn’t tarry.

“So we strand them,” I said. “We keep the officers and arm enough they should be able to survive the Wasteland, but we take all their mages. If they don’t have any access to the Ways…”

“Even at their fastest possible pace, they’ll arrive along after the dust is settled in Ater,” Juniper finished, tone considering.

“Best we end things with the Black Knight before that,” General Jeremiah pragmatically advised. “Still, seems a sound enough plan.”

Not the most elegant way to deal with prisoners, but we didn’t have time for elegance. A round of agreements, some more enthusiastic than others, saw the matter settled.

“We’ll be receiving Sepulchral this afternoon,” I said, “to confirm the terms of our cooperation. Once she agrees to lend her aid to an assault on the Loyalist Legions, I believe we should begin preparing for an attack.”

“Agreed,” Juniper growled. “We have the numbers to properly squeeze her now. I want to swing part of our force out east around Kala Hills and encircle her. The same paths they used to ambush us there can be turned against them now.”

The discussion grew animated after that, commanders pitching in for a plan to either force a surrender out of Nim or crush her army irreparably, but I excused myself eventually and Vivienne did the same. We needed to get moving if we were to be ready to receive Sepulchral.

Abreha Mirembe wasn’t exactly my creature.

You could barely tell even she was dead, since it was poison that’d done her in and she’d been pretty ghoulish even before biting it. I’d raised the would-be empress as undead through use of the Night, but that didn’t exactly give me control over her. I could move her limbs, sure, and inflict pain on her soul. But I couldn’t control her mind, save through coercion. She’d showed me deference since her raising, but that wasn’t the effect of the Night so much as the knowledge that I could send her back to the grave with a snap of my fingers. I was uncomfortably aware that the ties binding me to her were not meaningfully all that different from those binding Malicia to Sargon Sahelian.

I’d soulboxed a High Seat too, it just happened that said box was their own corpse.

We kept the audience private, as small as it could be. That meant two people on our side, Vivienne and myself, and three on hers. High Lady Abreha herself, her designated heir Isobe and the niece that’d tried to usurp his place, Sanaa. Considering the only reason Sanaa was still alive was that she had enough supporters among Aksum’s army and vassals that her death would caused armed reprisals, I expected relations between her and her aunt to be frosty. To my surprise, Sepulchral now seemed to be favouring her over Isobe and takin no pains to hide it. Praesi. Abreha must have decided that a closely-fought coup was a sign of talent and begun to reconsider succession. Isobe was displeased by that undercurrent, by these talks and most of all by me.

“Rumour in the camp is that he blames you for this,” Vivienne murmured into my ear.

I blinked at her.

Why?”

“He lost a lot of face in front of vassal lords and household troops when you and Lord Tanja humiliated him,” the Princess said. “He’s been saying that if not for that more would have stuck with him instead of turning to Sanaa’s camp.”

That might be partially true, I thought, though ironically enough Razin had probably done more damage than I did. It was a little much to blame me for his own failure to gather a solid core of supporters, though, especially when he’d been the one starting with a – oh Gods, I’d been spending too much time with Praesi if the decisions of someone like Abreha Mirembe were beginning to make sense to me. Best get this over with. After half-hearted courtesies we got to the meat of the talks, which was defining what Sepulchral’s position would be going forward.

“I want you to formally renounce your claim on the Tower,” I said.

“That cause is lost,” Abreha conceded. “Yet renouncing it will have costs for my supporters. I’ll not lay down arms only to have a puppet ruler installed in Aksum.”

“We can understand that concern,” Vivienne diplomatically said. “I assure you, neither Callow nor the Grand Alliance intends to intervene in your matters of succession.”

The old woman laughed.

“A nothing promise,” she said. “You will have to do better than that. You want my army for your siege of Ater, and I want sturdier assurances in return.”

“We could always offer our services to Malicia instead, should you-”

Sepulchral’s hand slapped Sanaa across the face. I hadn’t even made her do that, so I cocked an eyebrow.

“Count this a favour, girl,” Abreha said. “There are some people you don’t threaten unless you’ve made the decision to go through with it. They’ll just kill you if you do.”

Sanaa liked furious and humiliated, but to her honour she appeared to be listening. Huh. Maybe I wouldn’t be having a little conversation with Scribe about her, after all.  I had no intention of leaving the High Seat closest to the border of Callow in hostile hands, but if she could learn that made drastic steps unnecessary. Vivienne cleared her throat.

“Assurances of what nature?” she asked.

“I want it confirmed by whoever climbs the Tower that I’ll legally keep my title until the end of the war against Keter,” High Lady Abreha said, “with all attached rights, including that to designate my own successor.”

I traded a look with Vivienne, who nodded.

“That could be arranged,” I said. “I take it it’s a formal Grand Alliance demand you’re looking for.”

The old woman grinned.

“I want it written in the treaty that settles this dance,” she confirmed.

She really was an old fox, I thought. That way no matter how ended up ruling the Dread Empire they couldn’t actually try to oust her afterwards without bringing down the Grand Alliance on their head. She was using a continent-spanning coalition as the guarantor of her succession. If nothing else, I had to be impressed by the sheer gall.

“I can’t formally agree to that without speaking with Cordelia Hasenbach, though I expect agreement on her part,” I said. “That said, I have half the Majilis of Levant in my camp at the moment and they’ll back those terms so I’m comfortable giving you a provisional approval.”

They were amenable to helping us against Marshal Nim with just that, so it was brisk business afterwards. They departed some hours after and I caught Abreha as she left, away from the others so we could have a quiet conversation.

“So what is it you’re actually after?” I asked.

She looked surprised, like she had no idea what I might possibly be implying. It was just a little too smooth to be believable. I cocked an eyebrow and she smiled.

“Who knows how long you war will last?” she said. “It might be a different empire, by the time the dust settles.”

“All about staying in the game, huh,” I said.

Abreha Mirembe cackled.

“It’s the very thing, Black Queen,” Sepulchral said. “Perhaps even the only thing.”

We spent three days recovering and planning our offensive against the Black Knight, whose army had further fortified its position in Kala Hills but not since moved. There was some trouble with the prisoners, people trying to flee in the night, but we’d disarmed them and the Wasteland was not kind. Those that got out did not get far, and bringing back the mangled corpses to display them soured the appetite for that kind of adventure. Our count of recruits rose to around four hundred but came to a hard stop after that, with further efforts yield nothing. Aisha’s efforts to make ‘volunteer companies’ that would fight against Nim were more successful, though, reaching close to the two thousand that I’d been willing to allow.

The rebels might despise us but they were scarcely fonder of the Black Knight, who had spurned their offer of joining forces in favour of remaining loyal to the Tower, and many found freedom in arms in the wake of fighting ‘Malicia’s dogs’ a rough but fair deal.  Juniper and the general staff were putting the finishing touches on our plan to break the Legions with as few losses as possible to us, aiming to push the deaths on Sepulchral and the volunteers as much as we could without being too obvious about it, but I flitted in and out of those meetings. Most of my time was spent with Scribe and Vivienne, scrambling to get a read on the situation in the rest of Praes.

We still couldn’t scry properly, but that was a regional effect. Sending mages further out and then arranging messages being carried by horse worked, well enough that Cordelia was able to send her assent to High Lady Abreha’s terms and secure her alliance to us. I enjoyed the relative light demands made by this on my time, but the relative sense of safety was ripped out of my grasp without warning on the morning of the fourth day after the Battle of Kala. Even if Masego hadn’t immediately come for me I would have known something was up: the amount of power I could feel coming out of the Black Knight’s camp was like a lit beacon to my senses.

“War ritual?” I bluntly asked.

“No,” Hierophant immediately ritual. “And it is two rituals. One of them, the smaller, is making a gate into the Ways.”

I blinked.

“You told me the Ways wouldn’t be usable for a few days still,” I slowly said. “That they were still too fragile for large troop movements.”

“They are,” Masego said. “Which is why I believe the other ritual is meant to stabilize them in some way, or at least accelerate the process of that recovery.”

“That can be done?”

“I cannot,” Hierophant reluctantly admitted. “At least, I have not yet grasped how it might be done. It is possible that either Akua or other talented mages have found such a solution, however.”

“So they’re trying to slip away into the Ways,” I pressed.

“That seems likely,” he agreed.

Fuck. And that would mean facing this same army again, only holed up behind the walls of Ater. I could think of few things I wanted less. Juniper was of the same opinion and we hastily mobilized. Hierophant probed with spells and figured out the stabilizing ritual would need to finish before they could begin moving out, so we had a few hours to spare at least. Enough that we arranged for the volunteer companies to be armed and put in front while Sepulchral’s army deployed on the plains below the enemy camp. It all took long enough that Masego confirmed the stabilizing ritual was done by the time we began to march in battle formations, which meant I was now fighting the Battle of Maillac’s Boot again only from the other side.

We couldn’t even muster our whole army for the attack, since at least three thousand had needed to stay behind to keep an eye on the prisoners, so this was going to get messy. Taking a fortified uphill Legion camp with only hasty preparations? We sent the rebels and the volunteer companies as the first wave. To my distaste, I saw that Abreha had sent in her levies first. I could understand the sense in that, professional soldiers didn’t grow on trees, but it would be a slaughter. Still, horns and trumpets sounded. There would be blood. Soldiers marched up the hill, and atop it a thin crest of legionaries formed a shield wall of their own. Steel glittered under the sun, a sea of it.

It was an accident when it happened. They began singing, on one side and the other, with just a few beats of difference.

“Boot goes up and boot goes down –

There goes their callow crown.”

The Legionary’s Song, most people knew it as. Some called it Swallow the World instead, but they were fewer. The legionaries which had been named rebels began to sing it, moments before the legionaries that had been deemed loyal did the same. There was a beat of hesitation, steps slowing, and the songs melded.

“And no matter how high the walls

We’re all gonna make them fall.”

The couplet ended to the sight of the legionaries that’d been climbing the hill stopping. No arrows followed, no devastating barrage of spells or munitions.

“They can send us their pretty Knight,

Their killer all decked in white,

Only now we’ve got one too –

And he always gets his due

.

They got a wizard in the West

But now matter how he’s blessed

We got a Warlock in the Tower

Who’ll use his bones for flour

.

Let them keep their priestly king

Cause no matter how sweet he sings

We’ve got an Empress black as sin

Who’ll take his throne with a grin.”

It was a happy song, or at least meant to be. And yet somehow the tune that the wind carried all the way to me was mournful. A lament.

 “We’re the Legion and the Terror

They’re in the right but we’re meaner

So pray hard boy, and pay your toll –

We’re gonna swallow the world whole.”

Atop the hill, legionaries looked at legionaries down it. And someone, some faceless man or woman, threw their shield on the ground. Their sword. And something hung in the air, a weight, as armies that had been savaging each other for weeks looked at each other. Someone in the volunteer companies threw down their own shield, and then it was like floodgates had opened. Shields and swords and helmets fell to the ground. And then, in the most damning of silences, the soldiers left. Nim’s, the rebels, even some of mine – the Thirteenth most of all, but had I not devoured legions before? The Army of Callow spat back out some of those sons and daughters.

Even some of the levies bolted, melting into the river of deserters.

“-Majesty, Your Majesty,” Brandon Talbot called.

I glanced at him.

“What should we do?”

I looked atop the hill. How many of her men had Nim lost? I couldn’t tell, but it was not few. Same for us, and somehow I knew that when I returned to camp prisoners would have joined the flood as well. We’d all brought armies here, waved banners and played games. Won and lost. And after two weeks of brutality, an army was walking away. Could I really blame them? What were any of the people here fighting for? Even those of us with causes had dragged them through so much dust they could hardly be recognized.

“Nothing,” I finally said. “Nothing. Let them go.”

Even the Black Knight what few had left to flee with. We would meet again in Ater, to end it all.

A song and then silence: so ended the Battle of Kala.

95 thoughts on “Chapter 21: Amadeus’ Plan

    • “-Majesty, Your Majesty,” Brandon Talbot called.

      I glanced at him.

      “What should we do?”

      “Nothing,” I finally said. “Nothing. Let them vote.”

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  1. How do you kill a story? You make sure that no one wants to tell the story ever again.

    This is why Amadeus is deliberately absent. He cannot be the figurehead of a movement, because that would just put a fresh head under an old crown.

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    • The only way to fight an idea is with another idea. If a story isn’t told anymore, it’s lost. And if a story is lost to living memory, it dies forever.

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    • Yep. This wasn’t a pivot to transfer a crown from one Emperor to another. This is the death knell of an ideal. Specifically, the Praesi ideal that power is worth any cost. These soldiers have finally realized that there is a cost too high to pay. They will not kill each other for the power of their masters. They have refused to kill their brothers and sisters, and that decision has much larger ramifications for the country as a whole. The people are fed up, and that tends to be what finally kills dynasties. It might take a while, but this was the first nail in the coffin of Praes as a country

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      • I love this ending as the conclusion of the Legions fighting to be an institution which mattered. They eventually mattered the most not by chosing whose wars to fight, but by chosing to not fight at all.

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    • I kind of wonder if, based upon the chapter title, Amadeus somehow purposefully helped arrange the large conflict between a bunch of Legion (or Legion-like) soldiers, with the intent of making the soldiers reject continuation of the conflict (which might also have something to do with why Catherine might object).

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  2. What the hell happened here? Can someone help me understand? Specifically, about the positions of the Armies in the beginning of the battle:

    I though the Four Armies basically formed the four sides of a square, with Sepulchral’s army holding the half-road, then the Army of Callow and Nim’s Army who each had a corner with the half-road facing each other, and Sapper’s Army opposite Abreha’s closing the square.

    So how did the army of Nok hit the back of Sacker’s Camp? Does the half-road curve around the entire valley?

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    • Not a square. THere’s a map on discord, but the simple way of describing it is this:

      SS | NN
      SS | NN
      ___ NN
      RR\____
      RR/ CC
      __/CCC

      (S = Sepulchral, N = Nim, R = Rebels, C = Callow)
      (Only the fortification lines are obviously double except those around Sepulchral who didnt make her own and just got fortified against by Rebels and Nim)
      You can see the corner between R, N and C which was the “box” from the last chapter.
      S and R are situated IN hills – Moule hills, to the west.
      Kala hills are to the east, and are partially shared by N and C, though they also hold part of the valley between Moule and Kala hills. The half road goes through the west of the valley, next to Moule hills, approximately where the fortification lines are – I don’t remember how exactly it intersects, but the Rebels’ fortifications definitely fuck with it.

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  3. So, did the Legions basically look across the field at each other and collectively go “We’re the Legions of Terror. What in the hells are we doing?” Based on the title, I’m guessing songs like this, anthems, are in a way a failsafe to avoid division among the ranks of Legionaries or something. The moment any of them start singing it, they look at the armor on the other side, look at the armor on their neighbors, and come to their senses. A victory for one Legion is a victory for all Legions, a defeat for one is a defeat for all, and when victory for comes at the expense of another, all are disgraced.
    This goes deeper than a Command or Rule, this is a belief, branded into the very soul of everyone who ever marched beneath an Empire Banner.

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  4. I love that this is Amadeus’s plan and he isn’t even present.

    Also… kind of hate how ruthless and cynical Cat was being with the rebel legions. This chapter is a victory, but in many ways, the villain of this chapter is her.

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  5. The title for this chapter makes total sense. What is Amadeus about, when it really comes down to it? He is about saving Praes from destroying itself, the endless cycles of war and violence that is slowly killing the Empire.

    We know that Praes is no stranger to civil wars, but what Amadeus instituted with reforms was a new Dread Legion, one that comes together with modern military disciple and tactics. What holds a professional army together is not so much force and fear but instead love, that of holding together for the sake of ones country yes, but deeper down for that of the man and women next to you.

    These armies are all offspring of that institution. They have all served with that distinction for decades, sometimes together in battle but more generally as that of legionnaires.

    They threw down their arms because the song reminded them of who they are, of the fact that they are brothers and sisters in arms fighting each other for no reason that is comprehensible to the rank and file, for goals and dreams that speak of something virtually indistinguishable from each other.

    So Amadeus plan of the reforms comes to fruition in the most obvious of ways, Praes cannot eat itself if the people doing the fighting refuse to fight, recognize each other as brothers and sisters in arms, and work together to say “no” be it to Marshals, Queens, Names or Gods.

    Amadeus’s plan comes to fruition not from the last few chapters or books, but from decades of hard work and reforms, changing the spirit of an entire nation, and the stories they tell

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    • He didn’t enact this plan last week or last month, or last year. He put it into place 50 years ago, its only now that we see the damn thing.

      He wanted Praesi to be more than a snake, cursed to forever devour its own tail. This… this is part of that. This isn’t Amedaus’s plan, this is his *PLAN*. His goal, his ideal, his hope.

      The fact that Cat, nor anyone else in her camp even considered peace talks with the loyalists says… a lot.

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      • And it explains why he speculated this might put them at odds. He’s removing quite a bit of her power and leverage here. A lot of things are uncertain now, including if even he will have any control of this group (though odds are good), and, if they are making their own decisions, how much of them can be put towards the war that follows this. But he’s been prepared for the possibility Cat will kill him for a long time, and at worst he’s taught her one final lesson this day.

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        • I expect Cat’s army is left much bigger than Nim’s as a result. She’ll have kept all the Callowans at the very least, as well as Levantines.

          The real issue is Sepulchral – or rather, those UNDER Sepulchral. Sepulchral herself is far too interested in what Cat and the GA have to offer her. Still, the issue is manageable.

          The Loyalist Legions… have been reduced by FAR.

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          • Sepulchral’s army is not really an issue. I would bet on the remaining Loyalist Legions over her host even now. The armies of Old Praes are just not very relevant on the modern battlefield.

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              • Depending on the composition of said forces, I’d be wary of favouring Sepulchral even then, but I figure Nim has something like seven or eight thousand left to Sepilchral’s maybe fourteen. 2 to 1 is more than enough for the Legions to wipe them out.

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      • There are three ways Cat an Co could have initiated talks with the loyalists:

        1) Initiate talks with Malicia through Nim as an intermediary. The reason Cat is unwilling to do that has been spelled out and illustrated in the Wolof arc. Malicia cannot be trusted and Catherine is aiming to remove her completely. There are no talks to be had there, no compromise to be found. Malicia wants control, Cat wants to strip control from her. Any delay on that goal puts Procer further into the pit.

        2) Initiate talks with Nim and try to convince her to make a separate agreement from Malicia. The writing was on the wall that this wouldn’t happen, as whatever reason there was for Nim not turning with the Rebel Legions, would still be there and likely strengthened as Malicia was given time to shore up her defenses there. This is playing her game. We saw how it went with the Rebel Legions.

        3) Find another leader or leaders and have talks with them, separate from both Nim and Malicia. This is exactly what they did and how they got Thirteenth to defect. There are no other pickings for them there, no-one else will be willing to defect from Nim AND Malicia and have separate talks.

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        • Nim rebuffed the Rebels while she had strong military power. Now she is in a weaker military position, and hence might be persuaded to talk.

          And more to the point:
          It doesn’t matter if your chances of success are low. Yes, given what we’ve seen, I’d put Cat’s odds of GETTING anywhere with talks at 10%.
          But that’s 10% odds of thousands and thousands of people not dying. And they didn’t consider the possibility of diplomacy and then discount it… they just didn’t even talk about diplomacy. None of them did.

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          • Well, mostly because diplomacy had failed them already. Malicia will never abdicate, Cat will never tolerate non-abdicated Malicia. There was no place for diplomacy on the battlefield. It would be just an empty gesture.

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            • Malicia isn’t here. Nim is here.

              And no- screw that. Diplomacy isn’t something you try once, or twice and then go “Oh well, guess that didn’t work”.
              If you are in a position of diplomacy being costly then yes, I agree, think twice. But Cat has an enemy, who she hasn’t spoken to yet, pretty much entirely at her mercy.

              This is a great time for diplomacy! It’s cheap! You have all the leverage! The person who was previously being the main issue (Malicia) isn’t here, and Nim is here, so talking to her will provide you with 8 megatonnes of information, even if she doesn’t surrender. And you aren’t even giving up that much information yourself, since Akua ALREADY spilled all your personal intel.

              Besides which, when it comes to diplomacy “It might not work” isn’t a good enough reason to abandon it. “It probably won’t work” isn’t even a good enough reason either.

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              • That really, really depends on the specifics.

                I agree in principle, but let’s get real: Catherine is trying to save the continent from an undead invasions.
                She cannot, should not afford risks beyond a certain level of stakes, because a mayor setbacks may collapse the war effort. Ultimately, what stops Nim from going back on her word?
                How can a deal be guaranteed?
                What stops the Marshal from simply backstabbing her once they are in sight of the walls of Ater?

                It’s not that she dislikes diplomacy. It is that uncertainty is just not an option. That’s why even beating the Legions meant a problem. Can you afford to leave them, just because they promise not to fight you again?
                She didn’t want to kill them all, but if they can’t be trusted there wasn’t a long list of alternatives that were acceptable in this situation.

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              • You can’t negotiate with someone who does not have the authority to negotiate with you, or with someone who does not have legal authority to uphold the terms you ask for. If she truly negotiated with Nim for surrender, that would be no longer diplomacy, that would be subterfuge. And she knew better than to attempt it. By this point both Cat and Nim know each other well enough to disperse with superficial hypocrisy of “attempting to negotiate”. If other side truly had a change of mind, they would’ve send envoy themselves.

                Besides, diplomacy never was a particularly strong suit in Catherine’s arsenal.

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          • 10%? More like 0.00001%, and much higher odds of her LOSING something as a result of the negotations. 100% chance of losing time, which is a very precious resource to her right now.

            They didn’t talk about diplomacy because all the interests have essentially been laid out and seen as incompatible.

            Like, what do you imagine for those 10%? What do you think they would have agreed upon?

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            • 0.00001% you say? so you might call it…a one in a million chance?
              A one in a million chance is a sure bet, everyone knows that!


              More seriously though: Cat hasn’t TALKED to Nim yet. She has no way of knowing how loyal/disloyal Nim is, and she has Nim outnumbered, with the chance to dehydrate her out. Nim is in a VERY weak military position.
              We the audience have seen things from Nim’s point of view, but Cat hasn’t. So yeah, when talking about a general I have never spoken to in person, who is at a huge strategic and tactical disadvantage, in a country that is already at civil war, I *would* put the negotiating odds higher than 10% that they can be negotiated with.

              And they only had the sharp time constrain once the portal opened. A portal that ZEZE of all people described as “Huh, I didn’t know you could do that”.
              Before hand they were all like “Well, we could starve them out, but that would be a pain in the ass”.

              Hell, she could have even just flown up on a horse with a megaphone, yelled at the opposing army and said “If you want to fuck off home we won’t fight you.”… which is pretty much what happened, despite Cat’s best efforts to the contrary.

              You talk as if Cat had no choice but bloodshed, but thing is, the text *directly shows* that there was a peaceful solution available… by showing peace happen on the page.

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              • Well, Cat is not you, and have correctly figured out from her myriad of sources on Nim’s character that she is not going to make a deal to dethrone Malicia, which is a basic prerequisite of any possible diplomatic resolution.

                Asking soldiers is not the same as the negotiation with the loyalists and probably wouldn’t work besides – that was a decision the soldiers needed to come to on their own, without influence from any of the leadership.

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              • I am not talking about HOW Cat could have talked to Nim. I’m asking WHAT KIND OF AGREEMENT do you think they would have come to?

                Do note that Nim could have initiated talks at any point, too, and Cat is well known for being willing to talk with whoever is willing to talk to her. Except Malicia personally. The line was pretty clear. Nim chose not to step over it.

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  6. “It was an accident when it happened.”

    Yeah, right. Pull the other one; it’s got bells on. Cat just doesn’t want to admit that she got outplayed by someone who actually cares about keep the Praesi Legionnaires alive.

    I wonder how many plants Amadeus had in each army. One for each would be enough for this result, but some redundancy would both make the song more likely to start up successfully, as well as provide some insurance should they die in battle.

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    • He didn’t need plants. Seeds of distaste for civil war and narrative causality is more than enough to cause this on their own. It’s not like this is the only way it could happen, after all.

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    • Not a single damn one. He wasn’t counting on something like that. He was actually doing something his daughter taught him. Riding fate instead of avoiding it. Brother fights brother, a moment of recognition of this fact and two forces realizing the best move in this game was to stop playing any game that set them on each other. You don’t need redundancy for the inevitable.

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    • I do not think there were plants.

      Amadeus’s “plant” is the entire Legion culture. He trusted in what it was and what it would do in his absence, because he’s someone who could rally them to anything, but he needed them to make their own collective decision. Any ruling system is secretly a democracy (c) TGAB.

      Amadeus didn’t NEED plants. He just believed that this would happen. The SPECIFIC way ti happened, that those specific legionaries started singing first, was technically an accident, but it’s an accident the same way a thunderstorm lighting a forest on fire after a prolonged dry spell is an accident. You cannot predict when and where it will happen, but you can predict that it WILL.

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  7. Praes is in the middle of a revolution, and it’s the quietest one the nation’s ever seen, despite it taking so much blood to make it happen. I highly doubt they’ll be a good nation at the end, but the people are starting to realize just how many of the old ways are worthless. It’s going to take a messiah to really cement the story, though, and I still think that’s Akua.

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    • It’s interesting. First, when we realized the song has always been about her, it seemed a foregone conclusion. Then it seemed to be strongly conveyed that she didn’t hear the song anymore, that she didn’t want this nearly enough to ever be appropriate for the name. But I’m convinced again. She doesn’t want to be Empress of this Dread Empire, and so she can’t be. But maybe what’s going to emerge from it’s ashes of the fallen tower will be what she’s always been meant to be part of.

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  8. Damn, a leaderless Legion, banded together through bonds of brotherhood that overcome mere hierarchy across every side of a battlefield, and then fleeing into the desert? That is one powerful Chekov’s gun to unexpectedly pay off at the story’s last moment. I wonder who Amadeus is going to aim that Silver Bullet at?

    But yeah, a lot of people commenting on how Amadeus’ story has been of how the common folk of Praes are sick and tired of tyrants and their games, and now there’s a masterless army of Praesi patriots released into the wilds. Ol’ Amadeus might genuinely be aiming at actually bringing down the Tower for good.

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    • I mean, reforming the deserters as an army seems to defeat the purpose in my book. This seems kinda a statement that people are sick of being used as army fodder – regardless of by who. My read was that he is trying to change the whole system – adding an army doesn’t do that…

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      • They are sick of fighting for anybody else. That doesn’t mean they aren’t willing to fight for themselves. He’s not proposing to take the Empire, he’s proposing an END to the empire. That whatever comes next will not be this with a different name after “Dread Emperor/Empress”, but something new. The system has to go down, and everybody in the system just happens to be over here guys, so… how bout it? (it will be a choice. It will have to be a choice or as you noted, the story will be damaged and they will fail). It will also be a choice if they do anything after that anywhere else. And that’s where Cat’s going to have a problem with all of this. Cause Amadeus does not end this with them marching to fight the Dead King on his say-so. There will not be a well oiled magic machine that can be lent out to Cat for helpful magic assistance. I mean maybe those things will be attainable, but she’ll have to ask, as he did. And at this point, I also suspect at the end the leader of this new system will be a woman who’s become something that’s incidentally completely useless for Cat’s current Dead King plan. The Hopeful Empress Akua or somesuch.

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  9. So he’s broken the whole ‘Armies at Beck and call”, at least in Praes.

    Am I crazy in thinking he is gonna try breaking the rule of three next (for the Black Knight, that is?) What happens in case he kills Arthur and Nim both during their third fight?

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    • Why would he do that? It seems like an odd thing to care about as it’d be on the whole irrelevant to his plans. I can’t really see why he’d have any inclination to kill the New Squire at all, and by contrast has several reasons to kill Nim, so unless he wants to save both instead it seems like staying out of this is the best thing to do. Besides, the way fate works, he’d likely meet his own destruction at their hands by trying to directly interfere in such at fated fight.

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  10. Typo Thread:

    combine pressure > combined pressure
    squeeze so tightly > squeezeed so tightly
    suddenly realize > suddenly realized
    letme > let me
    fellows me > fellows stabbed me
    Askum > Aksum
    to just left > to just leave
    maybefifteen > maybe fifteen
    arrive along > arrive long
    barely tell even > barely even tell
    takin no > taking no
    Sanaa liked > Sanaa looked
    how ended > who ended
    you war > your war
    immediately ritual. > immediately replied.
    “I cannot,” > “It cannot,”
    Knight what few > Knight, with what few she

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    • I get that. But I find the timing fishy. They fought each oöher for weeks after all, but now They suddenly Just realized fuck this?

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      • It’s because the balance is broken that this happen.

        All the leaders on Legions side have either surrendered (Sacker) or are retreating (Nim)

        The fight that was about to happen wasn’t one for a cause, it’s basically two groups of sacrificial soldiers about to clash.
        The loyalist put these soldiers to delay while the ‘more important’ assets escape.
        Catherine put these soldiers there to reduce damage to her ‘more important’ army.

        And for the soldiers themselves, fighting each other doesn’t further the cause they believed in.
        The loyalist killing any rebels wouldn’t hurt Catherine.
        The rebels killing the shield walls won’t hurt Malicia or even Nim because clearly they don’t expect these guys to survive.

        Once they realized this, that there’s neither a cause or reward to the fight, they just stopped.
        And hey, at this point even if they get executed for desertion, at least they won’t go out a crab in a bucket.

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        • Admittedly, the whole thing was a bit overly dramatic for my taste, but this is a reality where stories are the laws of physics. Overly dramatic things are a matter of course.

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            • Notably, Christmas (and other) truces didn’t happen in the middle of one army charging another with them breaking into song and then dropping their arms and walking off.

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              • Notably, the armies in Christmas and other truces also were from actual different countries and not prisoners made to charge their former comrades they’d spent the war hoping would be their comrades again.

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                  • Most civil wars, At Least That I Know Of, have a clear division between the troops as well: either ideological, or more often, ethnic/geographical. Tribe A fighting against Tribe B might be a civil war by measure of borders drawn on the map, but it’s a fight against outsiders from the point of view of those fighting.

                    This is how Proceran and Praesi civil wars normally work: geographical divisions making “us” be people from one principality / lordship and “them” be people from elsewhere.

                    But the Legions are not organized on a geographical basis. They are not divided in this way, they are a big mixer. Orcs, ogres, Taghreb, Soninke, goblins, Duni find themselves on all sides of the conflict.

                    The Legions absorbed into the Army of Callow at least have personal bonds with outsiders who are not Legion, giving them SOMETHING of a distinct identity to unite around, though as we can see in the text, it’s a fairly weak tie and plenty of them desert as well.

                    The Rebel Legions and the Loyalist Legions? The line on who deserted and who didn’t was drawn by the commanders’ choices. Hell, Sacker’s people didn’t eve desert per se, they were with her since she got left on the inside at the Red Flower Vales! And all of these people did not come prepared to fight each other – the loyalists came to fight Callow and Sepulchral, the rebels came to join loyalists and fight the same, hopefully. The political decisions about not doing so absolutely did not echo in the popular sentiment, and Cat’s move to pit them against each other finished the job.

                    Civil wars generally are based on a division between people fighting them. The only division here is “happened to be assigned to the other Legion”.

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                    • > The only division here is “happened to be assigned to the other Legion”.

                      As was the case for every civil war in a state with a professional military.

                      But anyway, you are trying to convince me of something that I already accept – I am not arguing that the Legions refusing to fight each doesn’t make sense. What I am saying is the way it happened, with the musical number suddenly breaking out, soldiers dropping their weapons and walking off into the metaphorical sunset was a bit too dramatic for my taste. And arguing about taste obviously not going to lead anywhere.

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                    • Soldiers singing happens quite a lot. Soldiers singing the same song that turns into a lament that stops the battle, not really.

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                    • I mean… the battle stopped because… oh, I already said all of this.

                      My point is, war is dramatic, inherently. Saying that something that happened in a war is dramatic is saying water is wet. Literally all of it is life and death, life and death of a lot of people, too. There isn’t really a hypothetical non-dramatic version of this moment out there, even if they hadn’t stopped and kept charging without a song it would ALSO have been dramatic and cinematic, if in an entirely different tone.

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                    • I am of the opinion that war is actually a rather mundane affair, but that’s neither here nor there. My point is, it’s possible for even understandably dramatic thing to be overly so to one’s taste, and that was the case for me with this scene. Nothing more.

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                    • @agumentic: When was the last time a civil war broke out in a country with a professional military which wasn’t some kind of coup by the military against a civilian government (thereby pitting soldiers against civilians, rather than soldiers against soldiers) or otherwise aggravated by ethnic, geographic or religious factors? The fact the Sudanese civil war resulted in South Sudan being established as a seperate country, Boko Haram in Nigeria is made up of Islamic extremists, and the Yemeni civil war’s main factions are being funded by different foreign backers means I can’t actually think of any.

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  11. This is fascinating in many ways; Malicia and Black’s ideological divide is manifested in a new way here. Malicia has a rather Praesi-centric view of the world. Even her book, which in essence decried the Age of Wonders, was not criticized for lack of pragmatism by Akua – meaning that Malicia did use Praesi ruthlessness as a guiding light behind her philosophy (else Akua would note it). Her position as a ruler in Praes probably greatly reinforced that.

    But like all very elegant ideologies, even when seemingly pragmatic, the real world has a way of becoming a place where people still act like people always do. There are of course exceptions to this within the story, but in all cases the people and the leader share a symbiotic representation. The Tyrant and his madness were a representation of Helike just as much as the other way around. Likewise, The Girl Who Climbed the Tower ends with the rise subsuming who the person was in the first place – Malicia became another Dread Empress by trying to be a different kind of Empress, but she was shaped by Praes too much for shaping it into anything too different.

    This has always been the point of contention between Amadeus and Malicia. Amadeus would have killed all the high lords and then let Praes consume itself for a generation for something new to rise up instead. The Tower would suffer, there would be less influence of the Empire on recovery, and in all likelihood, the person leading this would not be the person there to something different. Instead, he adapted his plan, and found an acceptable successor to his vision in Cat.

    It wasn’t quite the same, but he understood that Praes, as a villainous nation, always eventually pays for its successes, and instead looked to control that price from the get go. Civil war for a generation followed by integration with Callow and turning into something different might have worked. It may have been a theoretical big enough sacrifice to appease Below into making it happen. Malicia instead tried to grasp first and then use the price as a weapon… but that’s just making her a pale imitation of the Dead King.

    And now we finally see the seeds of all that manifest. As the escalation around these crazy and powerful few continues, as Named and High Lords and whatnot want to tear each other to shreds, the Legions now see this as an internal affair between all of those crazy people. Nim had it *almost* right, the Legions are indeed not tools for political squabbles.

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  12. This is a great chapter. And Sepulchral is vicious, cunning and I really quite enjoyed her speaking with Cat. I wonder if she’ll try sticking around, placing herself as her heir’s advisor or something, if she can’t lead herself after the end of the War. Or if she’ll get assassinated again.

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  13. I just caught up after a year of this story basically consuming my every waking thought, and I have to say EE — this entire saga is absolutely phenomenal, and probably the best thing I’ve ever read.

    Some authors are great at world-building, some are great at coming up with a concept (the whole idea of Named is so cool, unique, and well-executed), some are great at developing well-rounded characters and getting their readers invested in and deeply caring about many of them, some are great at constructing believable dialog, some are great at fight scenes and choreographing battle and action scenes, some are great at politics and scheming, some are great at making you see both sides of many issues, and some are great at making you think about profound philosophical and moral issues. Hell, some might be great at a few of these.

    You, however…you somehow manage to be absolutely extraordinary at ALL OF THEM. I’ve subscribed to your Patreon, and though I know that you say this is the last book in the series, I really hope this isn’t the last we see of Calernia and its Named.

    It makes me genuinely sad that I’ll never get to read this for the first time again.

    Just an appreciation post from a now-loyal reader. Keep up the great work, EE. You deserve whatever eventually winds up coming out of this.

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  14. I just caught up after a year of this story basically consuming my every waking thought, and I have to say EE — this entire saga is absolutely phenomenal, and probably the best thing I’ve ever read.

    Some authors are great at world-building, some are great at coming up with a concept (the whole idea of Named is so cool, unique, and well-executed), some are great at developing well-rounded characters and getting their readers invested in and deeply caring about many of them, some are great at constructing believable dialog, some are great at fight scenes and choreographing battle and action scenes, some are great at politics and scheming, some are great at making you see both sides of many issues, and some are great at making you think about profound philosophical and moral issues. Hell, some might be great at a few of these.

    You, however…you somehow manage to be absolutely extraordinary at ALL OF THEM.
    Although I know that you say this is the last book in the series, I really hope this isn’t the last we see of Calernia and its Named.

    It makes me genuinely sad that I’ll never get to read this for the first time again.

    Just an appreciation post from a now-loyal reader. Keep up the great work, EE. You deserve whatever eventually winds up coming out of this.

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  15. PracGuide is the uncontested best “page-turner fantasy web serial” IMO.

    I think one of the most noteworthy things about it is that I was able to enjoy re-reading it (as someone who almost never enjoys reading or watching something a second time).

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