Chapter 10: Parley

“Diplomacy is as sailing, catching the way the wind blows.”

– Ashuran saying

There was something deeply disorienting about waking up after having been knocked out. It wasn’t like falling asleep, there was this sense of… confusion, when where you were didn’t match what you last recalled. So when my eyes opened, I made myself breathe in and out slowly as I forced myself to be calm. I did not know this bed, or these sheets – silk – or this room around me, lit with magelights and open windows giving a beautiful view of Wolof spread out below.

I rose from the cushions I’d been leaning on, soft and plump and exquisitely embroidered, and to my surprise my limbs did not pain me. I could feel my left arm was tender, the skin pulled taut in that way it was after mage healing was used on flesh, but even the ever-present dull ache in my bad leg had been made quiet. My clothes were not the ones I had last worn, loose yellow cotton trousers and a matching robe patterned in green, but they were a comfortable fit. I padded onto the stone floor barefoot, finding that a beautifully carved cane of red mahogany awaited my hand. I tried it out and it fit perfectly, the spread wings of the ravens sculpted on the handle comfortably matching my grip. Leaning on the cane, I cast a more elaborate look around.

It was a square room, and though the floor beneath my feet was covered in tiles and my surroundings were panelled in wood I caught it was all stone beneath it. Ignoring the slippers – was that lion’s fur? – that’d been laid out for me, I ignored the rich furnishings of what was no doubt an elaborate prison cell and limped my way to the windows. Three large glass panels, open just slightly but enough that I could feel the faintest breeze coming through. I flicked fingers at them and was not surprised in the least when the illusion flickered and a flat panel of bronze covered by a book’s worth of runes was revealed for a heartbeat. The illusion resumed the moment my fingers ceased contact with the bronze, returning the false but beautiful view of Wolof under afternoon’s light.

I reached for the Night knowing what awaited, and I’d been right: I could not quite grasp it, layers and layers of wards preventing me from drawing it close. The Sisters reached out towards me as well, and though our metaphysical fingers failed to connect their presence was a manner of comfort.

“Is my mind intact?” I asked them in a murmur.

Andronike sent a sense of reassurance, and from Komena I felt only cold anger at the thought that mere mortals might have tried to meddle with their First Under the Night. I let out a soft breath of relief. My thoughts and memories were still my own, then. I remembered fighting in that secret passage, keeping close to the wall to prevent the mages from getting a clean shot at me, but after the first few lives I’d taken it was… something of a blur. I’d been knocked unconscious at some point, presumably, and brought here. I drummed fingers against my cane, letting out a small hum. Had I held long enough for Akua and Indrani to escape? Yes, I decided after a moment. I should have gotten them enough of a head start if the guards had needed to dig me out with swords.

The goddesses in me withdrew, as if coming close had been an effort, and I offered the illusion of Wolof a wan smile. I’d not planned for this little venture to end in my being a prisoner, but I could deal with the change of plans. If Akua had grasped what I’d meant with those few words, near the end, then my sappers were already digging at the foundation of my captivity. Why, I just needed to bet it all on the strength of the understanding of myself between a woman I hated as much as I loved – and who would, before the moon’s turn, betray me sure as the coming of the Last Dusk. Until then, though? My gaze swept the room again. My captivity came with a small rack of wine bottles at least, I found, not to mention bowls of assorted nuts and fruits.

I found a pair of books, too, atop a pretty cabinet. One was a book by a Mistress Adad titled ‘Great Works’, which a quick thumbing revealed was about ancient Soninke architecture. The other, to my reluctant amusement, was a Praesi highborn etiquette guide. Fair. Following the teaching of my Callowan forbears, I picked the book about architecture out of contrary spirit and limped to the table. Huh, was that a fully-stocked writing desk too? Nice. I picked up a bottle of wine on my way, refusing to take one of the gold-rimmed crystal glasses by principle, and wrenched open a bottle of what looked like a Nok red before dropping into a seat and cracking open the book.

It ought to tide me over before Sargon came to talk, I figured.

The time of the day displayed by the illusion did not match what my sixth sense told me of the passage of time. It would have been a clever trick to disorient me, otherwise. Before I saw either hide or hair of High Lord Sargon or Malicia – who would be coming sooner or later, I knew – I first encountered servants. Veiled and silent they came thrice a day to bring out delicious four-course meals, fill my wine rack, empty the enchanted water cabinet in the corner. Heated water for washing was in the morning, after breakfast, and not once did any of them even twitch at anything I said. I even shouted at the top of my lungs once, to see if I’d at least get a reaction, but nothing. They might have been deaf, I thought, or at least bespelled for deafness.

I found had little to do but eat, read and drink for a whole day. Though I got restless before the first bell had passed, in a way this was also… relaxing. There was only so much I could do from in here, and how long had it been since I’d had so few demands on my time? Still, I wouldn’t simply resign myself to it either. I inspected my cell but found no opening to it save for the hidden door the servants used, which led to a stone passage I only ever saw lead to a closed steel gate. I wasn’t going to be popping that open with a cane, I knew, though it might be worth checking if I could touch Night while in the passage. Somehow I doubted it, but why leave the question unasked?

On the second day of my captivity, before I could find a good opportunity to try the passage, a servant in Sahelian livery came. No veil on this one, and unlike the others he was feeling chatty.

“This one bears the words of High Lord Sargon Sahelian, Queen of Callow,” the man said.

“I’m listening,” I replied, cocking an eyebrow.

Sargon was asking whether I’d agree to have my midday meal with him, as it turned out. I was tempted to decline just to see what would happen, but I held back. I wasn’t sure if he’d left me to stew in the room for a day just to make sure I’d be inclined to talk, but if so I had to admit it’d worked. I took him up on the offer and was promptly afforded the services of a tailor, which I bemusedly agreed to. The clothes I’d been provided were comfortable enough, tunics in green or yellow with a Callowan cut, but I wouldn’t turn down free clothes. Deciding to indulge a whim I ended up wearing a soft yellow sundress, paired with a short frock in pale green and comfortable shoes. Alas, Sargon was warned well in advance so I did not get to see a look of surprise on his face but the momentary blankness was enough to have smiling as he sat across the table in my cell. He was not so ornately dressed as when we’d last met either, his white and red tunic rich and well-cut but otherwise unremarkable.

He was dressed in that way that those whose family had been rich for generations got dressed, when there was no longer a need to trumpet about the wealth.

“We will be having fey fowl as the main plate,” the High Lord of Wolof amiably told me. “One was caught last month a few miles to the south.”

“I’m going to assume we’re not eating an actual fae,” I replied, cocking an eyebrow.

He chuckled.

“We are not. The birds are descended from experiments of Dread Emperor Sorcerous’ that his successor loosed into the wilds,” Sargon said. “It is said he was attempting to infuse birds with the powers of Arcadia, but only ever succeeded with the basest of their kind. The first specimens were highly toxic, but not so their progeniture.”

“Huh,” I said. “They taste any good?”

“Delicious when braised and served with zaze sauce,” Sargon smiled. “I don’t believe you’ve ever had it before.”

The man kept a damn good table, I’d give him that much. The first two plates were warm herbal bread served with sauces and a spicy but refreshing broth, followed by the fowl-on-rice with the zaze sauce that proved exactly as good as he’d boasted it would be. It ended with a creamy, sweet pastry that tasted of eggs and cinnamon I found paired well with my wine. And none of it was poisoned, an additional point in its favour. The conversation had been enjoyable but light, the two of us pretending I wasn’t a prisoner in Wolof and discussing what I’d read in ‘Great Works’ – I suspected his enthusiasm there was not feigned in the slightest – and a few anecdotes about the city itself. All of it very tame.

When a servant brought me a pipe stuffed with wakeleaf and refilled my wine, though, I knew the real conversation was about to start. Sargon gallantly struck the match for me and lit it, himself indulging instead in a small cup of an amber liquor that smelled strongly of peaches.

“This morning I threatened to have you executed should your army not retreat,” Sargon conversationally said, “but your marshal declined rather rudely.”

“Juniper knows an empty bluff when she hears one,” I shrugged, pulling at my pipe.

Praes couldn’t afford to kill me right now. Much like I was pulling my punches fighting them, as I wanted the Empire’s martial strength mustered against Keter, they too had to pull theirs. If Malicia killed me, there was a very real risk that the western fronts would outright collapse – and much as she liked to pretend otherwise, the empress didn’t actually want the Dead King to want any more than we did.

“Sadly,” Sargon sighed.

I breathed in deep of my wakeleaf as he sipped at his drink.

“I have been advised to torture you publicly in order to force compliance, naturally,” he conversationally added.

I blew out a small ring of smoke, shaping it by making my lips pop. I did not answer. He chuckled, revealing that slightly crooked smile again.

“I know better than to attempt such a thing, of course,” High Lord Sargon said, “though you do not seem worried in the slightest.”

“I had my soul eviscerated by lesser gods once,” I idly replied. “Came out of it mostly sane. Not a lot of torture than can beat that, even if you get inventive.”

And neither Juniper nor Vivienne would fold at the sight anyway. They both knew I’d tan their hides if they did. All it’d win Sargon was my genuine enmity, which he was taking pains to avoid earning.

“I would not dare claim that I can imagine,” the golden-eyed man amiably replied. “You will understand, naturally, that holding the head of a host besieging my holdings prisoner is something of complicated situation.”

Meaning some of his people wanted me dead or at least with fewer things, and that refusing them while my army was camped outside the gates did him no favours. Amusingly enough, it could be argued that in several ways his position had been worsened by capturing me.

“Must be frustrating, having Malicia dictate to you in a way that goes against your interests,” I said.

He thinly smiled.

“Not executing you is in my interests as well, Your Majesty,” Sargon replied. “Greater implications as to the fate of Calernia aside, should I murder the most distinguished Queen of Callow in two centuries I will have heroes coming for my head every spring until I die.”

He sipped at his liquor, sighing.

“I expect several of my more short-sighted cousins are pushing for your execution in the very hope that the Woe will murder me in turn,” he admitted. “Yet I would argue that my greater frustration in all this affair is that I would much prefer to be at peace with you, Queen Catherine.”

“That’s easy enough,” I frankly replied. “Turn on Malicia. You’re only in my way so long as you’re one of the pillars propping her reign up.”

The dark-skinned man laughed, the merriment of it lighting up his eyes. Akua’s cousin, yet so little like her. Even at her most carefree she held something of herself back but Sargon Sahelian was… less restrained. He allowed himself to feel more genuinely, I decided. Would she had been like that too, if she’d not been raised to be the monster of monsters among this most terrible of families?

“I will be honest with you, Queen Catherine,” Sargon grinned, “as every report my spies have brought me insist that it is the approach you best respond to.”

The worst part of it, I thought, was that even knowing what he was doing I still found my lips twitching. Sargon Sahelian might be a monster, but he was a charming one.

“I find it saves times,” I shrugged. “By all means, my lord of Wolof, lay it on me.”

“I am not a good man, Queen Catherine,” Sargon indifferently shrugged. “So long as my city is left to me, so long as my domain is unmolested? I do not much care what happens to Praes, or even Calernia at large.”

Much as I would have liked to damn him for petty apathy while the world was falling apart a mere two nations west, I held my tongue. How much worse was he than Proceran princelings, in truth, or even the squabbling League of Free Cities? I doubted he was any better than them either, but I would not pretend that the careless disregard on display here was some unrivalled pit of evil.

“My support of Dread Empress Malicia rests on two pillars,” Sargon continued. “The first is that, for all her flaws, she remains the individual in Praes best able to deliver a resumption of order.”

She was at least half the reason order needed resuming in the first place, as far as I was concerned, but that was why he’d begun this by making his indifference clear. What did Sargon care that much of this was on Malicia’s hands, if she were still the woman best placed to ensure it wouldn’t spill over anywhere that mattered to him? I puffed at my pipe, blowing out a stream of smoke to the side.

“And the second is that she has your soul in a box,” I finished.

“Indeed,” he politely agreed. “I am loyal to her in the sense that a noble of the Wasteland is loyal to anything or anyone – that is, only so long as the balance of consequence and convenience is not greatly moved in disfavour of continued loyalty.”

The unspoken part was that an army outside his gates, on top of the messes that my presence kept heaping on his lap, was pushing on that balance noticeably.

“Which leaves one important question before this conversation proceeds,” Sargon Sahelian said. “Can your patronesses free my soul, Black Queen?”

I’d known that was coming. It was an obvious bribe to approach him with, a good way to flip a High Lord against the Tower without much military power needing to be exerted. Which had been why I’d first asked Sve Noc as much months ago. It’d not been a coincidence that I’d not made the offer.

“Not from here,” I said, “and not without a price.”

The Crows were sure his soul was being held in the Tower, and they weren’t going anywhere near that place if they could help it. I honestly wasn’t sure even a Choir would be able to bring the seat of Praesi power down – it’d taken the armies of two thirds of Calernia and entire battalions of heroes to get it done, last time.

“Unfortunate,” the High Lord of Wolof murmured. “It would have simplified this all a great deal. I am, alas, not eager to trade a single mortal mistress for a pair of immortal ones.”

“You’d find the payment much more agreeable than expected, I’m sure,” I easily replied. “But that is your right. We will speak again should an opportunity arise.”

“Of course,” Sargon said, inclining his head. “And so while we remain so refreshingly bound to honesty, I am compelled to ask-”

He leaned slightly forward, drink in hand.

“- what is it that you want, exactly?”

I snorted.

“There’s a broad question,” I said. “Right now? Vale summer wine. Or maybe the journal of the warlock your ancestors placed at the side Theodosius the Unconquered.”

“I can have the latter brought easily enough,” Sargon waved away. “And as you no doubt grasped, I mean to ask what is it that this entire Wasteland campaign of yours is trying to achieve. You’ve not the strength or inclination to occupy Praes, that much is plain, so what is it you do want?”

I set down my pipe, amused at the boldness, and smiled at him over the rim of my glass before taking a sip.

“Arguably, as one of Malicia’s backers you’re one of the last people I should tell,” I pointed out.

“On the contrary,” Sargon said, shaking his head. “Unless you intend to purge the empress’ supporters among the nobility, I am one of the individuals you most need to convince. Even if you kill the woman in question, Queen Catherine, what she represents does not disappear.”

“And what does Malicia represent, exactly?” I asked.

“A strong Tower with no taste for foreign adventures. Power being concentrated in Ater through the Imperial Court and the bureaucracy,” Sargon replied without hesitation. “It comes at the price of curtailing many of the old privileges and ennobling greenskins, but many still consider it an acceptable trade.”

“Nok was sacked,” I flatly said. “Thalassina is dust. Foramen is held by High Lady Whither, the Grey Eyries outright seceded, the Steppes are in civil war and two of the High Seats are openly backing another Dread Empress. Half the army that’s supposed to serve her deserted. You call this a strong Tower?”

“The Dread Empire of Praes turned back the Tenth Crusade with Thalassina as its sole permanent loss,” Sargon countered. “Foramen was brought back into the fold bloodlessly. Sepulchral’s rebellion has stalled and the only reason it ever gained grounds was that the Carrion Lord’s attempted coup – which failed, half the Legions staying loyal to the Tower even after decades of other loyalties being cultivated among their officers.”

My eye narrowed. They were blaming the messes on Black. Of course they would, I thought. He’s Duni, the nobles despise him and they’re not wrong about him having added to the chaos in the first place. I wondered how much of this was decades of hatred between my father and the aristocrats given voice and how much of it was opinions Malicia had seeded herself. It would hardly be the first time she blamed the unpopular parts of her reign on Black and the tactic tended to be a successful one.

“As for the Clans, Queen Catherine,” he continued, “that they would war on each other is only to be expected when some among them were raised above others. Strong Lords of the Steppes will emerge from the violence, able to ably discharge the duties that were passed onto them.”

I hummed. There was no point in arguing this with him. I wasn’t even sure he believed in the first place, anyway.

“Let’s say I buy that, for the sake of argument,” I shrugged. “She still needs to go. She’s been an aggressive ally to the Dead King while the rest of Calernia has been fighting for survival. She fucked us in the League and in Procer, and even before she antagonized every single other ruler on the continent the grab she made for the doomsday fortress that was made of Liesse made it clear she can’t be trusted to remain in power. Nobody wants the Tower with a weapon that makes Hellgates, Sargon. Nobody.”

“Considering all the nations so antagonized have been at war with the Empire for years,” he drily said, “one might argue she was in fact rather rest-”

“You’re being obtuse,” I flatly interrupted. “Even if there weren’t a hundred reasons to put her head on a pike, and you know there are, at the end of the day she had to die because we can’t allow the precedent. If the Grand Alliance doesn’t cut her head off then we’re telling the world that we can be backstabbed while fighting existential threats without there being consequences. And there’s not a single signatory that’s willing to swallow that, Sargon.”

“This is a compelling argument,” Sargon Sahelian mildly said, “largely for people who are not Praesi.”

I sipped at my wine to hide my expression. That was a decent point, actually. We didn’t actually have a lot to offer people who weren’t already rebelling against Malicia. The truth was that the people currently backing her reign would lose out when she got deposed. They wouldn’t gain from what I wanted to achiever here in Praes. One the other hand, the fact that those same people couldn’t give less of a shit that Malicia’s plots abroad had caused thousands of deaths and risked the annihilation of Calernia didn’t particularly endear them to me. They didn’t get to pretend they were being unfairly victimized after turning a blind eye to that. If you threw stones at bears for long enough, you got mauled.

There was no deep lesson behind that except that you shouldn’t fucking throw stones at bears.

“We’re a few knives in the back past lectures from your side, Sargon,” I flatly replied.

“Praes would be a silent place, if that were the case,” the High Lord laughed. “Though you have me curious now, I’ll admit. Who is it that you mean to replace Her Most Dreadful Majesty?”

I cocked an eyebrow.

“The Carrion Lord?” Sargon tried. “He is disappeared, if not dead. And Sepulchral is unlikely to remain a steady ally to your Grand Alliance for long, for all that she now courts your friendship.”

Abreha Mirembe being a snake was hardly news to me, but the first half of that was rather amusing.

“It never ceases to fascinate me,” I said, “how large of a blind spot you highborn have when it comes to Amadeus of the Green Stretch. It’s like we’re talking about different men.”

“Half the High Seats would rebel at the mere idea of Duni ruling over them,” Sargon said, eyes narrowed as he studied me. “Yet you know this, I think. And so I wonder if you do not play a longer game than any of us had considered.”

I leaned back into my seat.

“Oh?” I said. “What game would that be?”

The dark-skinned man raised his glass, the last wisps of amber liquor swirling.

“Mile thaman, Sahelian,” the High Lord of Wolof toasted.

I smiled and spoke not a word. If he wanted to believe I had come east to raise Akua Sahelian as empress, let him. He drained the cup.

“It would be an interesting time to live in, if you got your way,” Sargon admitted. “It is almost a shame you will not.”

“I’ve heard that before,” I said.

He looked faintly amused.

“I’ve a great deal of respect for your abilities, Queen Catherine, but this once luck was not on your side,” the golden-eyed man said. “There is little you can do from captivity.”

I met his eyes with mine, baring my teeth in a malicious smile.

“Before the week’s end,” I said, “I am going to walk out of the front gates of Wolof with everything I want. And the both of you are going to let me.”

So ended my first meal with Sargon Sahelian.

He sent the journal, as he’d said it would. Made for interesting reading, with a surprising amount of steamy bits between the battles and commentaries. Kojo Sahelian had gotten around and not been shy in writing about it. I sat and read and waited, knowing this was only beginning.

When Malicia came she did not bother with charm.

She knew better than to believe relations between us could be mended, I supposed. It was the following morning, shorty after breakfast, that she was announced by a servant in livery. I didn’t bother to study the last meat puppet she’d decided to wear in any great detail – what would be the point? She wore a woman’s form, Soninke and tall, and besides that I did not bother to take her in. I stayed standing as she stepped in, cane in hand as I leaned against the wall. The illusion of Wolof behind me showed an early afternoon, so the light came through at my back. It’d make it hard to look at me properly. The Dread Empress of Praes sat gracefully at the table, not waiting for my invitation, and set a single parchment scroll on the table. She said nothing, waiting. After a bit I snorted.

“You know, I figure I could play that game,” I mused. “Ignore you or insult you, the works. But it just sounds tiring.”

I pushed off the wall.

“Say your piece,” I simply said, “and get the fuck out.”

“Your manners have not improved,” Malicia calmly replied.

“Could I beat you to death with my bare hands before they came in to restrain me?” I asked. “I’m not sure. If you test my patience, though, we’ll find out.”

I’d lied, of course. If I was to kill her puppet, I’d definitely use the cane.

“It would avail you nothing,” Malicia said. “You were captured, Catherine. This particular game you have lost.”

“It’s Queen Catherine to you,” I smiled, all pretty and friendly and utterly false.

“If I gave you the courtesy, would you return it?” Malicia said. “I think not. Yet I will overlook your many and varied insults, as I have for some time, for you have once again made yourself into an important enough piece you cannot simply be ignored.”

Implying that I should treat her the same way. Good luck with that, I drily thought.

“I’m still waiting to hear what you want,” I said. “To be honest, this is being something of a bore.”

“We had a conversation, some years ago, that I believe you must have forgot,” Malicia said. “Not so long before Akua’s Folly. You asked me about Still Water for the first time.”

I did recall that, more or less. I’d warned her that if she’d been behind all of it then she had best watch her step from now on or there would be blood. We’d discussed politics abroad, too, but what did any of it have to do with this? It’d been the Hierarch and the Tyrant that’d been the thick of the talk, and one was pissing off an entire Choir while the other was years dead.

“I told you why Wekesa insisted on trials, that he believed they would revolutionize our understanding of rituals,” she prompted.

I frowned, scrounging through my memories. I had pretty good recall, but it’d been years and my Name memories weren’t as crisp since the Sisters had brought me back from the brink.

“I asked if it really had,” I slowly said, “and you replied…”

“That what he learned would allow us a fighting chance against the Dead King, should he ever wage war upon us,” Malicia calmly replied.

Ah, I thought. And there it was. The way she believed she could barter herself out of the grave she’d dug. She had a weapon, maybe even more than one, that she thought could win us the war. Cordelia and I might despise her, but we were pragmatic women at heart: we’d choose survival over hatred. But that went with the assumption that we needed Malicia herself to have those weapons. That my father becoming Dread Emperor wouldn’t get us all of it anyway without all that it would cost us to let an empress who’d knifed us at every opportunity walk away with a slap on the wrist. Malicia was no fool, I thought, and so she would have seen the flaw in that plan.

“So what did you do?” I asked. “What poisonous little precaution did you take so you could threaten us with it?”

She’d already done it before, after all, when she’d spread word that by the terms of her treaty with the Dead King so long as she lived the dead could not invade Callow. Taking her own life as hostage was a favourite trick of hers, the kind of signature that Name tended to take on after years of settling into their Role.

“There was no need for anything too elaborate,” the Dread Empress said. “My death would result in all the necessary knowledge burning green, that is all.”

Which just meant she had to be taken alive. Had she prepared contingencies for that too? Probably, but I figured there simply wasn’t a lot anyone could plan against having Sve Noc peel open your mind before rummaging about for the useful stuff. We’d just have to be quick and careful.

“It’s all on the scroll, I take it?” I asked.

“Indeed,” Malicia smiled. “Along with a possible solution to the Hellgates issue as suggested by a mage in my service.”

“Good,” I said, “good.”

I moved quickly enough that the cane caught her on the side of the mouth before she saw it coming, but though she fell it didn’t make her bleed. Ugh, she’d come decked out in artefacts. I tried to strangle her, but soldiers poured in and wrestled me down before I could get it done. She was ushered out, breathing hard, and I waved mockingly.

“There’s always next time,” I cackled right before the door closed behind her.

I read the scroll that very afternoon.

It was in Malicia’s interest ton exaggerate what her weapon could do, but she also had to know that Masego would be able to see through anything to egregious in a matter of moments. To my distaste, this might actually work. Wekesa the Warlock had been a brilliant man, and Still Waters had only been used in its most straightforward of applications so far. He’d believed that his creation would be able to turn the tide in two ways.

The first had been that soldiers fighting the Dead King would be made to ingest the alchemical compound and then prepped with the right spell so that when they died they would immediately rise as undead in the service of the Dread Empire. He’d believed that with the right dosages and sorcery it was possible to keep those soldiers largely the same as before their death, nothing like the mindless wights I’d fought at the Doom of Liesse. It would make armies that, even when slain, would rise against just as tireless as their foe and significantly better trained.

The second was more of a gamble. By modifying the alchemical compound so it could enter through the skin, Warlock had believed that necromancers could potentially usurp control of corpses from the Dead King. The strength of Still Water was that it wasn’t really a ritual, that the active magic was simply an ignition while the alchemy did all the heavy lifting. Which meant if it worked as Warlock had thought it might, we might be able to steal entire armies in moments. I doubted it would go that smoothly, but the prospect of finally having a way to turn the Hidden Horror’s endless numbers against him was deeply attractive.

And given that we were well past the days where anything but a direct strike on Keter could win us this war, what was written on this scroll could be an edge that made the difference between the life and death of nations. Malicia was not one to come to a bargaining table poorly armed.

What I read of the proposed solution for Hellgates was largely gibberish to me, and so likely meant for someone better schooled in magic to read over. The only part that was understandable was the one that talked about raising fortresses over the gates after the first rituals were done, to make sure they wouldn’t open again. That and the estimates for the number of mages that would be required, which was around two hundred per gate. There simply wasn’t anyone but Praes left who could field that many well-trained practitioners, especially since there would need to be some able to use High Arcana.

Another pointed reminder by Malicia that we needed her.

On the third day, mages sworn to Wolof came into my cell.

It was all done very properly and politely, but I was still bound while a dozen men and women inspected every inch of me with spells and tried to access the Night. One got bold and tried to see into my mind, but the Sisters took offence to that and melted his eyes. I complained about the smell after they dragged him out, mostly to fuck with them, but several of the mfuasa actually smiled and one cast a spell to clear the air. They left after a few hours, carrying back to Sargon Sahelian the answer he’d been hoping they would not give him.

They had not found a way to access the Night through me.

I decided that, since I had so much time to spare, I might have a crack at writing my memoirs.

You know, for posterity. Sadly after a single page about my years at the orphanage I got horribly bored and started sketching out the troop movements for the Battle of Three Hills instead. It was pretty hard stuff, memoirs, I was impressed Aisha had gotten so far in hers. In the end I dropped the subject entirely and instead wrote a scathing critique about the defences of the Vaults, with a particular eye about how easily heroes could have gotten through some of those. I doubted it’d ever amount to anything, but it did make me feel oddly satisfied.

It also allowed me to sharpen a quill until a weapon could be made of it and secrete it away.

On the fourth day, I had supper with High Lord Sargon Sahelian. The meal was delicious, he was a delight to talk to and he’d somehow gotten his hands on a bottle of Vale summer wine. Once more wakeleaf was brought to me and I duly indulged, leaning back against the very comfortable seat.

“I offered Princess Vivienne to ransom you back,” High Lord Sargon said. “She declined.”

“Yes, she would have,” I faintly smiled.

“You do not seem displeased,” he said, sounding wary.

My smile broadened.

“What is it you asked for – the artefacts or the books?”

A moment of silence.

“The artefacts,” he finally said.

Ah, it’d been Malicia’s idea then. The books would have been more important to him.

“When I named Vivienne Dartwick my successor,” I said, “I didn’t pick her name out a hat.”

And that was all I said on that. His polite sideways inquiries about my accepting my own ransoming for his library back were just as politely ignored.

One the fifth day there was something of an incident.

Or at least so I assumed, as around noon forty armed guards crammed themselves tight in my cell and wards were put up to prevent anyone coming in or out. I finished my meal and, because I was never one to miss an opportunity to be a wretch when it was on the table, I took up Kojo Sahelian’s journals and began reading them aloud with great enjoyment – especially the explicit bits, which by the looks of it made more than a few of these nice soldiers uncomfortable. An hour and a half later they left, but the guard remained doubled and from now on even the veiled servant came in flanked by an armed pair.

Idly I wondered who it was that’d tried to rescue me, and how close they’d gotten. It was only going to get worse for Sargon from now on. That was the trouble when you couldn’t kill your prisoner: people would keep trying to free them, knowing there couldn’t really be any consequences for it.

One the sixth day they were desperate, which I knew the moment Malicia’s puppet walked in.

Why else would she be here again? Four soldiers came with the empress, faces hidden by helmet, and they had shackles that I was expected to put on nicely. I had last time, when the mages had come to poke and prod looking for a way into the Night. I knew why the Dread Empress was here, though, and I wasn’t going to be anywhere as nice. I pretended to cooperate, at first then the quill I’d sharpened days ago went into the slight gap between helmet and armour and got the first man in the throat. Another I broke the neck of, smashing him into the table, but Malicia ran out before I could get my hands on her.

My cell, and for all the gilding it had never for a moment been anything else and never had I fucking forgot that, my cell was flooded with guards and mages. They got me after I nearly smashed the last of my table legs on scale mail and broke my hand on a helmet. The got the shackles on me and did not heal me. Again there were only four when Malicia came back, face a blank mask.

“Well,” I smiled at her through bloodied teeth, “there’s always next time.”

She went still for half a beat but it was enough. I might be the one bleeding, but I wasn’t the one afraid.

“This brings me no pleasure,” Malicia said, looking down on me. “It is of your own making.”

She did not speak a word, not with her lips anyway. The world pulsed with the echo of it anyway. Aspect, my instincts whispered. And in the instant that followed a power seized me by the throat. I gasped out, writhing in my shackles, as a will tried to wrest mine into submission. I was being ordered to do something. Deep inside me the Sisters stirred, their anger a cold and burning thing. They were jealous goddesses, my Crows. But it was not them that calmed me. My fingers clutched at thin air, but still they caught something. Fur, deep and matted and warm. I laughed, dragging myself up by pulling at nothing. Malicia took a step back, eyes wide.

I felt a great maw open by my head, fangs being bared. My Name had not taken kindly to being given an order. No, more than that. It was not one that recognized the rule of another over me.

Mistake,” I hissed at her in Mthethwa.

The guards were moving, but they didn’t get it. They moved to restrain my limbs, to push me down, when they should have gone for my mouth. My eye found Malicia’s and I grinned red even as she opened her mouth.

Be silent,” I Spoke.

Her mouth closed. The guards forced me down, but I laughed.

“You overstepped,” I told her. “I wonder, does it work only on this body or your real one too? How long are you going to be fighting-”

Finally one of them covered my mouth, shortly before I was gagged, but no matter. The damage had already been done.

It was almost over now.

The first time I’d heard about soulboxing, that evening I’d wondered why Dread Emperors did not force it on every High Seat at their coronation. There was, of course, an answer.

On the seventh day, after I had breakfast the veiled servants came and laid out different clothes for me. Black trousers, a black tunic, a black cape and a black eyecloth: all exquisite and embroidered with silver thread. And with them came a circlet of silver, an elegant crown displaying flying crows. Matching silver shackles too, little more than bracelets, but still a symbol of my captivity. I was helped into the clothes by attendants after being informed that I was to be give audience in the Empyrean Hall, and before long I was leaning on my cane and limping down the halls of the palace where I had been held all this time.

Forty soldiers armed to the teeth escorted me, in plate and capes. Ten mages kept an eye on me, amber stares unwavering and their magic so close to them I could taste it in the air. Limping across marble tiles I breathed in the air, stretching under my cape, and I felt Sve Noc reach out for me greedily. I let the Night billow out of me even as shouts echoed across the hall. Swords left their sheaths as the soldiers spun into a circle, runes of light filling their air as incantations reverberated. I closed my eye, smiling, and struck the ground with my cane once.

Shadows spun close, threading themselves through my clothes until it was not mere dark cloth I wore but darkness itself. My foes had thought to dress me, to measure me, but my patronesses had willed it otherwise. I opened my eye, studying my escorts. They were still as stone, but there was a scent in the air I was most familiar with. Fear.

“Ah,” I smiled. “Much better. Take me to your lord, now.”

And they did, wary but obedient. I’d thought the halls I’d run through at night had shown me the splendour of the enchanted ceiling for which the palace was named, but I had been wrong. The Sahelians had kept the heart of the wonder for where they received guests and supplicants, a great hall that was as another world. I stepped across the span of the noonday sky, clouds beneath my feet as my cane cracked against the enchanted stone. The Sahelians had aptly named their hall: I stood here as if I was striding the very Heavens, the sun above and the world below.

On the sides, hidden behind veils, people stood. Sargon’s court. Golden-eyed nobles even more beautiful than their clothes, lesser nobles of military turn and even those who wore their sorcery as their signature. Guards, too, and war mages whose eyes missed nothing. I advanced with my escort around me, all leading to the man at the end of the sky. It was against the laws of Praes for any but the Tyrant in the Tower to sit a throne, and so the Sahelians had followed the letter of the law: though Sargon sat a great seat of stone atop a dais, roughly hewn into the shape of roaring lions, further steps still led to a great ornate seat of gold where none sat.

That one was the throne, of course, which meant Sargon’s was a mere seat.

No sign of Malicia, I thought. Was she hidden, or had it struck even deeper than I thought when I Spoke? I looked forward to finding out. My escort led me to the feet of the thrones before spreading out, thin invisible barriers that could only be wards separating me from Sargon Sahelian. I stood alone in the silent court until a woman with a beautiful speaking voice broke the stillness.

“Her Majesty Catherine Foundling, Queen of Callow, First Under the Night.”

Sargon’s face was as a clay mask, all thought and emotion smoothed away. I hummed the first few notes of Two Dozen Snakes A Knot Do Make, casting an unimpressed look around. How many of the watching snakes were Sahelians, I wondered? Had to be at least a couple dozen. All of them hungry, waiting for the man on the lion throne to falter.

“Quaint,” I drawled out.

Oh, they didn’t like that at all. But that didn’t matter, because even as they murmured their disapproval and glared I kept close to me the answer to a question. Why didn’t Dread Emperors soulbox all their high nobles the moment they climbed the Tower? Sure they’d be hated for it, and it was certainly tyrannical, but what would most of those madmen have cared? They’d know that the greatest threat to them was the High Seats, that it was well worth the hatred of a few who would likely seek to kill them regardless. The answer was around me, watching the High Lord of Wolof rather than the queenly captive brought before him. The two dozen snakes that made a knot. The Sahelians were a family, not a man.

And none of them would tolerate Wolof being made a tool for the sake a single man, one whose seat they craved like a drowning man craved the shore.

“You are summoned to speak terms of trade, Queen Catherine,” High Lord Sargon said.

See, for all their many flaws the Wasteland high nobles they loved their family. Not their actual kin, the institution of the family. The High Seat of Wolof, here, and the power that came with it. They were willing to sacrifice a lot to preserve the power of their family, its importance. For all that the great bloodlines of Praes constantly murdered each other for power, they’d also keep a breeding program going for centuries – they knew how to think long term in a way that few actual royal dynasties could. It was bred in them, taught to them. They were Sahelians, and only the power of the Sahelians mattered. Nothing else.

I hummed, cane clacking against the floor as I moved and the guards moved with me – like minnows around a shark.

“What need is there for that, High Lord Sargon?” I replied. “If you seek terms, I already gave them when last we parleyed.”

“They were frivolously given,” Sargon said, voice thundering.

I laughed in his face. Just because he was charming, did he think I’d forgot he was my enemy? That I would safeguard his reputation anymore than I would some other leech’s?

“Then let me repeat them, since you have been slow in learning this lesson,” I drawled. “I want your treasury. I want your granary. And I want to walk out the open gates of Wolof.”

Now the thing was, Sargon didn’t want to take this deal. At the start, he’d not actually been worried about what I had stolen and put away in the Night. Sure it was missing right now, but he held me captive and he could wait out the conflict. When I was forced to make a treaty with Malicia, she’d bargain on his behalf for all of it to be given back. Except that they hadn’t counted on Akua. Beautiful, clever Akua who had heard me ramble a few sentences and understood everything I meant. See, we weren’t threatening to torch the library and the artefacts. That would have been bad enough, but it wouldn’t have lit a fire under them like this did.

Akua had reached out to High Lady Takisha Muraqib of Kahtan and offered to sell her the entire private library of the Sahelians. Because High Lady Takisha was a supporter of Malicia and the last Taghreb high noble in all of Praes, if we actually did sell those books to her Malicia wouldn’t actually be able to get them back later. It would be a guaranteed rebellion of the entire south of her realm. The Taghreb noblewoman would not doubt have been skeptical, but I was guessing that the Crows had gotten out a book or two for Akua and they’d been sent as a token of goodwill.

The step just past that had, naturally, been to make this known to Wolof.

I could see the layout of it in my mind, clear as if it were ink on parchment. On the third day of my captivity, I thought, Malicia had learned of the offer. It was why the mages had come to look at me, try to get at Night. On the fourth, Sargon had. It was why he’d tried to ransom me to Vivienne and probed my interest in such a deal. On the fifth day, the Woe had tried to free me. It had put the pressure on them, made it clear that sooner or later my people would get me out and they’d be even worse off. On the sixth day, I thought, word of the offer had spread through Wolof widely enough that Sargon’s situation had become dangerous. And so he’d gotten desperate, agreed that Malicia should try to force me to spit out my loot with an aspect. But that’d failed, badly, and so now here we were. The High Lord of Wolof, the man who’d usurped Tasia Sahelian, looked down at me with burning eyes.

And I knew what he was going to say before he opened his mouth, because if he didn’t he was going to die.

“Your schemes ran deep, Black Queen,” High Lord Sargon Sahelian snarled. “We will bargain. Arrangement can be had, should you sign the proper pact.”

“My word isn’t enough?” I grinned, badly faking surprise. “Oh dear. I suppose I could sign a pact, if you insist.”

The only bone I’d throw him, just enough that he could do this without entirely losing face. Humiliating him entirely would just serve to corner him enough he might do something stupid. He was already going to have a rough few months ahead of him. See, the reason that Dread Emperors didn’t soulbox all the High Seats was that no family strong enough to be one of those would ever tolerate being led by a pawn. The moment the High Lord went against their family’s interests, they got their throat slit. And what I’d stolen? It was the foundation of Sahelian power. The secrets that kept them one step ahead of everyone, that kept the finest mages of Praes in their service.

And instead of burning them, I’d threatened to sell them to the High Seat that was the second best at magic in the empire.

The artefacts that kept their rivals wary, their enemies from picking fights? Akua had offered to sell them to Dread Empress Sepulchral, demons and all. Even Malicia had to have found that an unpleasant surprise. No matter how many spies she had in that camp, three boxes holding demons and enough materials to make a dozen more artefacts was going to be trouble.

And so the Sahelians were looking at Sargon looking at me, because not a single one of those golden-eyed monsters was willing to ruin the power of their centuries-old family to keep High Lord Sargon in his seat. He could accept my terms, or he could have his throat slit before one of his cousins accepted them in his stead. And Malicia would bend here, not just because otherwise the other woman claiming to be Dread Empress would buy a terrifying arsenal but because if she didn’t bend then Sargon would die. And she would not have the soul of the next High Lord of Wolof in a box.

“One day, Black Queen, this day will come back to haunt you,” High Lord Sargon coldly said.

I eyed him up and down, then snorted.

“I beat Akua Sahelian,” I said. “Should I now tremble at the shadow of her shadow?”

On the seventh day, I walked out of the gates of Wolof with everything I wanted and they let me.

133 thoughts on “Chapter 10: Parley

  1. Holy hell!

    Tall about subverted expectations with this chapter. I expected a decent period of the whole Captivity trope (which I am not particularly a fan of, since it feels very reductionist for the story).

    Instead I get a chapter which fully showcases Cat’s awesomeness…..and not with a complicated plan, but with sheer nerve of a very simple one.

    And, hey, Akua FTW (never thought I would be saying that 18 – 24 months ago)

    Brilliantly written, EE.

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  2. BLESS

    Interesting how certain Cat is that Akua will betray her – and continuously non-specific in how exactly that will happen. And fascinatingly contrasted with Cat’s reaction to the body and Intercessor’s meddling with it.

    And Cat’s thoughts about Scribe being “I am going to be betrayed very soon, the question is once or twice” sure do suggest that it’s not something she’s specifically agreed with Akua upon?

    I want this.

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    • “And so the sound of my fragile mortal shell being ripped into signaled it was time for everyone’s favourite Wasteland game: backstab, help or both. Akua had grown on me, rather like the bubonic plague, so I was going to give her the benefit of the doubt and put my money on ‘both’.”

      My money’s on ‘both’ this time. I think there are enough hints that the seeds of the story for Akua claiming the Tower are there, and that’s one avenue for a backstab to happen. With Amadeus’s current plans unknown, it’s difficult to gauge just what might happen.

      Of course, even if Akua claims the Tower, the redemption-eqsue arc in play means it’s difficult to know just what she’d do with that power in the short term.

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          • It has to be both, there’s no way she just backstabs and leaves it at that. There’s no way she survives it.

            Which is why this is such a big question. What the fuck does anyone have to offer Akua that makes this worth it? What can she get?

            She knows enough of Cat’s plan to know the level of madness required to pull a betrayal in the middle of all this. Hell, she probably expects Cat knows she’s gonna be betrayed.

            What the heck is she looking for?

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      • Last chapter.

        > And there was the deeper game here, the one I was beginning to glimpse. The Intercessor, who had outed us in the fortress but not gotten us captured. The Bard had made sure that Sargon would cover the treasury and the granaries, figuring out one step of me that it would leave me only one place to go.
        >
        > That the Intercessor too had wanted Akua to be in this room, at this moment, sent a shiver of dread up my spine. Did she know something I did not? Had I made a mistake? Or did I, for once, better understand the nature of the woman we were dealing with than either my opponents? My fingers clenched, then unclenched. None of us would know the answer to that until the very last moment, I suspected.

        https://practicalguidetoevil.wordpress.com/2021/04/02/chapter-9-vault/

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    • I’m thinking it’s part of a story beat. Akua is in the position to have everything she once wanted (Or at least a lot of it) and wavers. And then realizes how utterly empty it is, how it doesn’t outweigh the doubts and the guilt like she thought it would, and she turns back, more resolute then ever. Cat knows she’s going to have one last fling with Evil, so she’s arranged things such to control it and make it part of the story that leads to her success.

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      • Why not one better, set Akua up to have one last chance at full evil, and having trained her to evaluate things like a real mature and rational adult, able to understand not just the self-centered greed of evil but also the selflessness that is friends and doing good for others, Akua makes the choice for good not because Good forced her, and not to spite Evil, but to actually break the cycle, and choose to do something for the good of others for its own merit, and not as a narrative ploy.

        As in, she thinks to herself, what a wonderful world. And you know, stuff like that.

        Turns out, it’s possible to be a good person and not one of the Good. Just because you are bad guy, does not mean you are bad guy.

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      • I don’t think she can arrange backup plans, because that would ruin the story aspects. She is counting on controlling the story, not on controlling Akua directly.

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  3. Utterly magnificent, Catherine was more regal than anyone in that city without once being anything other than rough and utterly unconquerable.

    And malicia has realised that Catherine can Speak to her. And that attempting what she had has nudged Catherine even closer to her rebirth.

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    • Though now of course we have to wonder: when will Akua betray her.

      Everyone loves the story of a reformed villain tempted back to Darkness… Only to realise their folly and once again take up the arms of Good in a glorious self-sacrifice.

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        • A betrayal in line with expectations? In order to cement a piece of the story? Or even as a killswitch (Cat’s new name being way too controlling)?

          I like it.

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        • That’s interesting – a way for the betrayal to cement a story thus actually helping Cat’s plans.

          I was thinking of a killswitch with Cat thinking her new name actively jeopardizing her Accords

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          • I think before the month is out, Catherine will act in such a manner as to force Akua to choose between Catherine herself and the values Catherine has taught her these last few years.

            Forcing that moral dilemma on Akua and ultimately having her pick what is right over the person she loves will firmly cement the story of Akua as having internalized those lessons.

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      • I actually hate that trope. Self-sacrifice is stupid and weak and guilt only shackles society or religion casts to restrain greatness and make all equally average.

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        • Geez, ain’t that a bit much?

          You can like what you like, obviously, but really, self-sacrifice is stupid and weak? Guilt is only a shackle?

          I’m quite aware that society or religion may impose guilt on the individual that has no goal save making them easier to control; that has happened and will happen.
          But let’s be real, that just means that sometimes you may feel guilty about the wrong things.

          It doesn’t mean that guilt itself is a bad thing.

          Guilt is the feeling you get when you think you have done something you shouldn’t have.
          Can you honestly tell me you can think of no actions that you believe people should feel guilty about committing?

          Rape? Genocide? Burning hospitals for orphaned puppies?
          No limit whatsoever? All greatness that shouldn’t be restrained?

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          • *Can you honestly tell me you can think of no actions that you believe people should feel guilty about committing?*

            No. I do not feel myself so superior as to arrogantly believe people should feel guilty for this or for that. Instead, I despise people who feel entitled to tell others what they should or should not feel guilty about. Even if they do not realize it, THAT is true evil.

            Greatness is just a word, but it means people who aren’t completely bound by the restraints of their time and age, those that accomplish great tasks, be they Vikings or Prophets. Both show greatness of a kind, and I admire them both, for they have dared to go further, to go beyond most people around them.

            Now, there ARE certain actions I have done and I wouldn’t repeat, but I never ever will feel guilty about having done them, because they are an important part of my history and life, and more importantly, they will never go away. Instead of trying to repel or delete my past, which CAN’T BE DONE, I accept and make it fully part of myself, and I learn from whatever actions didnt result in the objectives I intended them to, but I fully understand that they have granted me knowledge and experience and for that I’m grateful, for that is truly what life means: TO EXPERIENCE THINGS.

            …and yes, burning hospitals for orphaned puppies and all the consequences of that action would result in a miriad of new experiences for myself and for others, so if those experiences are something you seek, then it is ok with me, far from me to want to IMPOSE some form of guilt upon you. Those are just more shackles and never result in anything good for the guilty, only suffering.

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            • What a hollow point of view. What happens when someone wants to physically impose their will on YOU and you aren’t able to stop them? Just accept you can’t change their will?

              There’s trolling, and then there’s trolling yourself…

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              • What do you mean, what when someone wants to physically impose their will on YOU and you aren’t able to stop them?

                The same that happens to you, I reckon? Suffer their will? I probably would try to mentally transform the experience into something pleasurable to me rather than traumatic, but I realize everyone has a limit to that ,too.

                But why do you ask how I would act against something I can’t change? When you can’t change something, what IS to do but to accept it?

                Or do you perhaps think that suffer to the max and become traumatized by choice is a better option? Isn’t THAT a much hollower point of view?

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                • If somebody traumatized you, would you really NOT want them to at least feel guilty about what the fuck they did to you?

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                    • But that won’t undo your trauma in anyway or help you. What does it matter if someone feels bad for murder if they already killed the person Then feeling bad doesn’t bring anyone back or make anything better. What’s done is just done you can either decide to get vengeance or MoveOn but the person who harmed you isn’t obligated to feel guilty about it. And if you really want them to that’s pretty much just for the sake of your revenge. Which is perfectly fine but you shouldn’t pretend that it’s moral or anything

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    • It’s funny how much will Cat has been able to impose on The Story of Calernia, post Squire. Gives me a sense that Names end up shaping your behaviour whether you like it or not. I mean, maybe just Tyrant forced his will on his story, and not his name?

      It also illustrates the bind Malicia is in. From a story perspective, she knows that the best way out is to throw her lot in with Black (if not the Alliance). And she knows how names and stories work. And yet, she can’t (won’t) do that without her pound of flesh. Dread Empress practically forces her to.

      Makes me almost feel bad for Ally. Almost (Rip Ratface….)

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        • That ship has sailed, I’m afraid. Even if Black could still trust her, no one else would be in favour of her surviving.

          If the story is to be about how unrestrained actions bring grave consequences, it cannot brook her getting away with what she pulled.
          No ifs, no buts, she has to go.
          It doesn’t have to be gruesome, but it has to be definitive.

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        • Sadly, there will definitely be no Chancellor again. Amadeus fought to unmake Praes as it is, but I winder, if he has a vision of what it could be. I am a tad afraid, he is too focused on getting out of the circle, to think much about the after.

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          • Amadeus had talked back during Book 4 about how you should never wage war without an eye to peace that comes after it.

            I do trust he has some ideas, we just haven’t heard them yet.

            (Beyond the obvious foreign policy beats)

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            • It’s the epigraph written by Grem iirc. Black’s take on what comes after stuck in my memory as “after that we can learn, grow, and become something more than a snake devouring itself. Anything more is unnecessary, anything less is unacceptable.” So, I don’t think he has much of a plan, but not because he fails to see the necessity, but rather, it shouldn’t be up to him. All he really cares about is passing that particular hurdle.

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  4. Cat’s name is playing with power in a whole different ballpark holy jumping crows.
    To order the Dread Empress and ACTUALLY GET HER TO SHUT UP.

    WHAT.

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      • Cat’s logic in re Akua is likely this. It’s Cat’s Name. The story beats that have led this far by logic lead to a sudden inevitable betrayal. It’s the Plot of the story that drives this forward or at least that’s her take on it Genre Savvy wise. I think Cat hopes Akua won’t betray her and maybe even believes Akua won’t betray her subconsciously. But both story logic and Name forces her to believe otherwise.

        There a reason that people refuse names like Cordelia did. Names grant power, but unless you are very careful you lose yourself and fall into the tropes for your Name.

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        • Cat’s Name can’t cause Akua’s betrayal if preconditions for it aren’t met. Manipulating coincidences is one thing, but like, there’s a reason Cat’s not expecting a betrayal from IDK Hakram…

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    • This was already foreshadowed in book 5, when Hanno referred to Cat as the “most prominent villain of their age”. The same sentiment is repeated by others in book 6, meaning Cat is already widely recognizes as being higher than Malicia.

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    • Well, we know Bard stuck Cat in a sacrifice situation, it is yet to be seen whether or not the outcome of that sacrifice situation was planned for or not.

      Likely Bard wanted her to sacrifice her subordinate, and run around doing bad story decisions, but instead Cat sacrificed herself and trusted her friends, and turned the situation around for her own benefit.

      If Bard planned for all that, then Cat getting everything she wants in Wolof has to also help the Bard accomplish something, because otherwise it would’ve been easier to just sabotage the efforts to free her. I mean, Bard is much better at story crafting than Cat is, so it shouldn’t be that hard.

      We will find out. Either something terrible has happened and oh no, you couldn’t stop it, or this is secretly Bard’s plan all along to undermine her efforts elsewhere.

      Some have speculated that Bard wishes to perish, and that therefore she is secretly helping Cat, but I refuse to believe that story could exist or happen without there being a hidden twist or ulterior motive, therefore Bard can’t *really* want Cat to succeed in her story, and we know she doesn’t, so she has to somehow subvert the efforts here.

      Obviously it’s silly to speculate on what, since we will find out in a few weeks anyway, the same time the characters do.

      It is entirely possible, on another note, that the outcome of the sacrifice play doesn’t matter at all, since if Bard hadn’t intervened the entire “sneak in” bit could’ve gone off effortlessly and without a hitch, and this is just a delaying tactic to get the dead angel going.

      It’s also entirely possible that Cats infiltration was always going to fail and Bard intervened to ensure it would fail controlledly and in a way that ensured the continued survival of the characters.

      Who knows.

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      • I’ll point out this has to have influenced Malicia one hell of a lot, with the unsuccessful attempt. IMHO it’s very plausible for Bard to have seen that one coming (the readership certainly did), and for THAT to be the desired next step in whatever her scheme is.

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        • If nothing else, it spooked Malicia. People who are spooked don’t necessarily make the best/most rational choices, or they retreat to regroup and rethink, which she really can’t afford to do with Cat Right There.

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      • I think its more Bard is in the pit with Cat. Arsenal wasnt a situation with enough related consequences/situations to be good enough proof that Cat is worthy of the Role Bard has had for so long. So she cant hold back, the Gods want a full on contest to see who is better. For her to perish Cat must prove the superior iteration of a agent to intercede for the Gods.

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  5. “We had a conversation, some years ago, that I believe you must have forgot,” Malicia said. “Not so long before Akua’s Folly. You asked me about Still Water for the first time.”

    Oh shit. When she said that, I thought Malicia meant to remind Cat of that time she mentioned she had three or four world-ending doomsday devices in her Tower from which Still Waters was but one.

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    • Threatening a captive monarch that you’re going to release a doomsday weapon is such a trope that it would be trivial for the Gods Above to destroy you. It’s like something the Tyrant would do, except without the massive amounts of ham to make it not end in your inevitable death. Further, at this point everyone is far beyond the need for petty threats. Cat knows the score, that Malicia can’t use the real bad stuff without eventually leading to a story death. Malicia knows that Cat can’t be bluffed like that anyways at this point, so she skips the pointless and frankly crass monologue.

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    • In addition to what others already said, IIRC Malicia also said that two of those doomsday weapons were inherited, and the fourth was “dependant on Wekesa being alive to function”.

      So she is already down to two plus Still Water, and the two were weapons the previous Dread Emperors had and didn’t use.
      Which isn’t something to sneer at (they are still judged by Malicia to be doomsday weapons) but they likely have very steep costs BESIDE the obvious downfalls of a doomsday weapon.
      Otherwise, well, Nefarious would have used them on Callow after the Wizard of the West broke his power, even if the Chancellor couldn’t access them during the following Civil War.
      Somehow I doubt that rapist would have balked at destroying Callow if he couldn’t have it, so there must be some reason why he didn’t use them.

      Possibly these two need massive sorcerous, Named skill to use? Which he didn’t have after the Wizard broke his power? If so, Malicia couldn’t use them too.
      Though I guess Nefarious still had a Warlock, so there is a flaw in the thory; then again, Praes being Praes, maybe he simply didn’t trust someone else with that amount of power.

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  6. Typo Thread:

    rack, empty > rack, and empty
    shrugged (appears 4 times. might want to reword some)
    I found had > I found I had
    have smiling > have me smiling
    King to want > King to win
    High Lady Whither > High Lady Wither
    that the Carrion > the Carrion
    achiever > achieve
    said it would > said he would
    shorty > shortly
    Name tended > Named tended
    ton exaggerate > to exaggerate
    to egregious > too egregious
    cooperate, at first then > cooperate at first, then
    The got the > They got the
    give audience > given audience
    sat a great > sat on a great
    sake a single > sake of a single
    flaws the Wasteland high nobles they > flaws, the Wasteland high nobles
    reputation anymore > reputation any more
    not doubt > no doubt

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  7. And once again Cat Speaks to tell someone to Be Silent or Shut Up. And this time someone who has an aspect of Rule.

    I wonder if she may have permanently muzzled Malicia’s ability to Speak. That I think might be the most terrible potential consequence of her order, taking away Malicia’s big gun.

    EE, please let Catherine’s Name manifest so we can know what it is. I’m begging.

    I’m guessing the one who sought to free Catherine was Archer. Can’t have been Adjutant; he’s not swift enough, and he’s really too bulky. Hierophant would have been much louder. Akua was probably busy doing diplomacy with Takisha and Sepulchral.

    I suspect one advantage the Woe had was the Crows could reliably let them know how Catherine was doing. They didn’t have to worry about whether Catherine was dead or being tortured or mind controlled. The Crows would always know.

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    • Well, we know her name is extremely powerful, since it is taking so long to make/manifest/carve, and we know it has to do with ruling/sitting in judgement over named/names, we know she’s morally pragmatic, instead of Good or Evil, we know even the Good respect her, even if their gods don’t, we know the Evil…. Well, I’m not sure how they feel about her, and the individuals are individual in their feelings.

      I for one am not witty enough to hypothesize Names for her, but it would be funny if she was Pope Catherine Foundling, First of her name, Judge of Named, Ruler of Footrests.

      I dunno, it’s something Cardinal related, we know that. Cardinal sin? Pope? Bishop? Churchy things are Good though, so. Some sort of Teacher? Professor is too small, they exist in world, I dunno. Principal? Headmaster? I said I wasn’t witty.

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      • For a while now I’ve been thinking it might be something like Wandering Judge, or synonyms to that effect. It’s definitely a position of authority over others, possible Named in particular, and it’s not likely to be a rulership Name given that it’s coming in the lead up to or the aftermath of abdication. She also got set up as a foil for the Grey Pilgrim, whose position is now vacant and relied heavily on wandering/mobility.

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    • Muzzle Rule? Now THAT would be game-breaking. For a ruler to lose her power to command her subjects would crush her in multiple ways, especially one who rules a snake pit like Praes.

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  8. Dammmmmnnnn…. that gambit was cold, and I love it.

    And….I do feel a bit bad for Sargon. It was nice spending time with a character who was charming, and seeing our narrator be pampered, and like… he never ASKED for any of this bullshit, with soulboxing and all that jazz.

    Also, she is taking the GRANARY of a city. A city which has seen famine and starvation far too many times.
    That’s… fucked up.

    Also, it is kinda fabulous seeing a chracter who was nothing but a footnote 3 books back, and then having them as a legit important character for a little story arc just here.

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  9. I was definitely expecting a long drawn out version of Egwene al’Vere’s captivity from The Wheel of Time. This was much more well executed!

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    • Eh, I rather liked Egwene’s captivity arc. But it’s not like Cat’s being held captive by an order that she’s part of, so slowly subverting it from the inside wasn’t really in the cards.

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  10. OH DAAAAAAAAAMN!!!

    All that from a last-minute plan she barely had time to vocalize?!

    What’s really blowing my mind is that every piece of this feels justified: we’ve never so explicitly seen the delicate balance of internal High Seat family politics before, but it all follows logically and neatly from the ample context we did have (families hoard power through knowledge, artifacts and breeding; they compete with the other High Seats for influence; while members are loyal to the bloodline, they’ll knife each other in a second; etc). And this is *exactly* the kind of equilibria Cat has been learning to recognize and exploit since some of her earliest lessons with Black & Malicia about the overall balance of power in Praes, how to effectively rule Callow, etc.

    Masterfully done, ∞/10.

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  11. This was great. I love the Beast Cat visualises as her Name, it makes me wonder how other characters see theirs. Amadeus has a clockwork machine, always ticking,but I don’t think we know anyone else’s. Might just be a thing Amadeus started, so no one else actually thinks about it.

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    • He’s also the only other mortal we know of that is able to recognize Stories, so it’s entirely possible that others just don’t have the level of awareness it takes to notice. Even after all these years, Cat still has to shush everyone when they start triggering a “tempting fate” flag.

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      • He isn’t the only one, he’s simply better than most.

        Admittedly, several we knew were aware of the patterns died in the past years, but I’m prettu sure several more were taught during the war.
        After all Catherie, Hanno and Tariq can’t help but teach others. Even their last reunion before teh battle of Hainaut included meaningful story fu bits.

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  12. This? This chapter right here is why we all adore her. Everything about this chapter is the distilled essence of the being, the entity, that is Catherine Foundling, Queen of Callow. Sowing chaos to bask in its warmth, using the ashes of her antics to forge exactly what she wants, and dominating her opponents in a way that none of them could ever have conceived of, punishing every mistake in a way similar to how Saruman punished the Deeping Wall for having a drain, with all the shock, trauma, and astonishment. And then, when she comes to analyze the situation, she beholds the whole of it and laughs. And walks away with everything she wanted, her foe thanking her for the opportunity to give it to her.

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  13. You know what I really liked?

    So far, we saw the High Lords and Malicia try to oppose Cat and making a good show of it.
    Cat brings the orcs around, she has Named superiority but not enough to batter everything down, Nim leads a commando to inflict strategic losses while also unwittingly entering a Pattern of Three, Wolof has good enough defenses it can’t be breached without major losses, then there was a surgical strike for Vivienne, then the sabotage of the infiltration which lead to Cat’s capture.

    And one might read all that as “Malicia actually has a shot at it”. There is enough resistance the Empress might actually win.

    And all that is ripped away in this chapter, because we see that there is no possible endgame for her.
    Really think about it: you caught your enemy and she has no defense whatsoever.
    And you come to the realization that you literally can’t touch her. That having her in your clutches helps you not at all.

    Her mortal allies won’t stop coming if you hurt her. Her immortal allies cannot be hurt through her. She can’t be coerced to give back what she stole because she physically cannot without a third party’s permission AND you’d need to give her back access to the Night for that to work, and good luck with that.
    If you kill her, the world power you BADLY need to keep your “ally” in check collapses, and you end up the only neighbor of the Kingdom of the Dead. For a short while, because remember: you don’t have enough food to survive without trade, and Keter won’t trade you food. It will let you die in a Civil War and then invade whoever wins to finish gobbling up Calernia.
    And we saw how trying to use Name shanenigans against one of the top three story-fu black belts in the continent ends.

    I guess it… sunk in, you know?
    How there is no winning for Malicia anymore. She is trying to buy her way out of a corner, but there aren’t really any takers.
    It must be terrifying, from her point of view.
    She can’t kill her enemy or really see her lose, or she’ll lose as well.
    And she know, so she won’t stop coming after you because there isn’t really anything meaningful for Malicia to threaten her with anymore. It doesn’t matter if the Empress could blow up Callow because she can no longer afford to: any further escalation would either collapse the Grand Alliance or further cement Malicia as its enemy, and both are lose conditions.
    If Catherine wins, she’ll want her head; if she loses, Malicia has already lost too.
    She is stalling, trying to weaken Catherine to that narrow point where she is weakened enough she needs Praes but can’t take it by force, and it just… won’t work, because Catherine is not fighting a war. Much like she couldn’t stop the Saint or Pilgrim with strategical necessities, she can’t now be stopped by Malicia’s sabotage.
    It just doesn’t stick.

    Truth his, the last possibility Malicia had went into smoke at the peace conference. When the Dead King got serious about the war.
    Keeping by his side through three years of apocalyptic conflict against the whole continent kind of ensured she could only choose which way she’d lose, in the end.

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    • “Catherine’s not fighting a war.” She’s just doing a fetch quest. “Oh, the world is ending and you need to go to Keter to stop it.” “Sure, but I could use some xp, so I’ll do this ‘close the Hell Portal’ sidequest first. The end of the world won’t happen until I trigger the event anyway, so I might as well do everything I can beforehand.”

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      • On one hand, I feel tempted to say that’s not how it works at all.

        On the other… godsdamn it, it kinda does, doesn’t it?

        Damn it, I can’t unsee it now.

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        • Eh. I think that only works if there wasn’t a timer on the Hellgates that would keep ticking while she was running against Keter.

          It is an XP grind, but that’s not how Cat’s viewing it, so the meta meta plot doesn’t really apply.

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          • Sure, there is that.
            But even out of Arcadia, in a narrative-driven world a timer only ever runs out when it is dramatically appropriate.

            And Cat sets the narrative.

            So really, in a way, dadycool is kind of right

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    • But it’s not just a good thing. Malacia might decide that if she’s going to lose anyways, she might as well go down swinging. After all, if she’s dead, she’s too dead to care that the Dead King is eating the continent.

      Malacia can still do damage; so far she’s refrained from anything too egregious because she doesn’t want the Dead King to win either, but if she really really believes there’s no way out, I doubt she’ll bow out quietly.

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      • Which is exactly what I think the Bard wanted when she got Cat captured. A mad Empress who would break the world and in the process give a reason for the use of the Angelic weapon.

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    • The thing is that Malicia never planned on defeating Cat, she’s been planning to hurt Cat until she become indispensible to Cat, and than trade her services for her suriviva (and continued rule as Dread Empress). To her that makes a lot more sense than just being an ally and trusting faithfulness will be returned.

      It reminds me a bit of Japan attacking America in WWII. Japan never had a strategy for victory through war. The plan was always to inflict such a hard blow on America that America would “obviously” choose to negotiate a peace, at which Japan would return a bunch of things (though not the Phillipines), and leave Japan ina position to defend her new posessions in SE Asia. When America instead took the position of “unconditional surrender or death” as the only terms they would accept, Japan had no back up plan, no way to actually fight and win the resulting war.

      Japan would have been better off attacking the Dutch, British, and French holdings and left the Americans alone. That would have left America in the perfect position to completely eviserate Japan’s logistical lines, and inflict a terrible defeat on Japan – but American domestic politics, probably meant that America wouldn’t ever do it, depsit the perfect position to win easily.

      Japan just couldn’t tolerate putting itself in that position of vulnerability. Just as Malicia could never accept the vulnerability of a defacto independent Callow, even if de jure it was allied with Praes. So she attempted to secure a position of power that would ensure Callow couldn’t betray her, and ended up instead making herself an implacable (and unappeasable) enemy

      Of course, knowing Malicia’s backstory it’s not surprising that she would make such a choice, but it does have a aura of inveitable tragedy to it, like all the best villians do.

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      • I started thinking about how Malicia could plausibly personally get out of this without a big Amadeus Ex Machina if, idk, taken over by a ghost of alt!Cat or something.

        And I keep running against the mind control issue.

        Malicia cannot be trusted around people who arent the specific handful of Named powerful enough to throw off her influence. Even Amadeus, if still un-Named, would have to personally trust that she wouldn’t plant hooks in his mind without his awareness. And while I could see him taking that risk, literally no-one else would think it justified. Because the trick with the Legions’ officers showed that she cannot even be relied upon to follow obvious self-interest in mutual non-fucking-over. She’s just… a scorpion that stings out of habit, and from an outside PoV there’s at this point no situation you can put her in and be reasonably confident she won’t wreck everything from it.

        Save for personal attention of the sort Cat bound Akua with, and that was half self-inflicted – Akua’d been the one to take her own soul out of her body.

        The mind control wrecks it all, and Malicia’s demonstrative unwillingness to follow any ethics around it whatsoever.

        I do think there’s still routes for her to survive, but only at outside parties’ mercy, because to lose Rule she needs to be beaten and broken. Catherine-style calculated surrender will not work, because it’ll keep her a potential of a Name. Someone needs to bring her low enough she just… doesn’t have any power at all, anymore, and then decide to spare her.

        (Contrast this with how GA looks at Cat holding their collective fates in the palm of her hand and philosophically shrugs “eh, it’s probably going to be fine”)

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  14. Man, you are a really good writer. This is the kinda of thing I expected from a published book, not something found mencioned in a comment on a isekai web novel. Never have I seen such good worldbuilding, to be fair I don’t read much world focused books.

    Serious, good job. I going to your’s patreon now, finnaly got mine second salary this month.

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  15. Hm wonder if one could do similar things with devils or demons as they did with the fey fowl. Finding the right species would be troublesome since you are basically trying to steal materials with specific dimensional rules/intrinsic qualities like cells stealing genes.
    Cat has a fair point on precedent, regardless of anything else the Grand Alliance will be wary of allowing a malfactor like that to stay. Now Cat just needs to get a carrot for her stick. Or at least Black needs to destabalize things so that she can aid implementation of the carrot.

    I am glad to see that I was right in the methods they could use Still Water. Does make me more curious about how well Alchemy could be used to affect souls or help induce things like the Gift.

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    • Malicia has kind of wrecked any possible carrots, because here’s the thing: Amadeus’s allegiance was the greatest carrot she could have ever had.

      And she just threw it away on paranoid impulse. A sequence of paranoid impulses. A sequence of decisions that just. Really set on fire any possible idea that she might be a rational agent one can bargain with.

      If she cannot be trusted to not fuck over the guy who literally put her on the throne and supported her there for four decades while also being her personal friend and someone she’s described as “part of her soul”. She cannot be trusted to not fuck over anyone in any circumstances.

      Where the definition of “fuck over” goes allll the way between “allowing a city to be turned into zombies on a slight miscalculation of consequences of an action”, “openly supporting an omnicidal lich because surely it’ll be fine” and “planting mind control hooks in officers of her own army out of paranoia”.

      That’s a really fucking wide spectrum, partially strongly characterized by being kind of bad at predicting destructive consequences of one’s own actions.

      …yeah. Bad.

      Cat has good reasons to go for her customary shitty wine / sword combo on Praesi nobles. There’s no genuine carrot left for her to possibly offer.

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  16. Hm wonder if one could do similar things with devils or demons as they did with the fey fowl. Finding the right species would be troublesome since you are basically trying to steal materials with specific dimensional rules/intrinsic qualities like cells stealing genes. Better said you are trying to fuse materials compatible with other rules of reality. It seems that creatures generally need to have less modifications for a successful transplant(which actually makes the Praesi’s interbreeding make more sense given humans are apparently quite flexible about mixing other things into themselves)

    Cat has a fair point on precedent, regardless of anything else the Grand Alliance will be wary of allowing a malfactor like that to stay. Now Cat just needs to get a carrot for her stick. Or at least Black needs to destabalize things so that she can aid implementation of the carrot.

    I am glad to see more in the methods they could use Still Water. Does make me more curious about how well Alchemy could be used to affect souls or help induce things like the Gift. Presumably the principle of the method it could be used for a host of things like affecting agricultural cycles or affecting water density as well.

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  17. This was transcendent. This was beyond. The writing in this chapter alone places EE alongside the best writers of today. Amazing story building and insight. Her last line; “Should I now tremble at the shadow of her shadow?” is a truly chill-inducing line.

    I am overwhelmed by this, and someday, when these books have been turned into paper and are sold, I will buy every one of them and give them a place of honor on my book shelf.

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  18. So…. you know what scene the initial talk with Malicia reminds me of?
    The 5 way discussion at the end of the princes graveyard.

    GP: “How well you have tied us up with the strings of our own necessity”
    Cat: “Do you resent me for making this a victory for people other than myself?”
    Saint: “CUT OUT THE ROT! I HATE YOU ALL! BURN MOTHERFUCKERS!”

    And Here:
    Malicia: “I can give you everything you want. Here’s some sweet rituals for fighting DK”
    CAT: ” ohhh… woe is me… how neatly you have tied us up with- lol, nevermind DIE BITCH DIE”

    And its like…. I’m starting to realize that that trick… that TECHNIQUE of making herself two useful not to negotiate with… she learned that from Alaya.
    And also…. it kinda feels like if we thought Cat was clever and good for doing it previously, its a bit weird for calling Alaya wicked for doing it now.

    Hell, there’s even a similarity with Saint being like “Look, you weren’t attacking us, but your Allys with the Black Knight who has been rampaging around the Procean countryside burning shit. And your an evil shit, we can’t let you set a precedent here”

    It’s just… there’s a LOT of parallels here. We’re just on the opposite side of the conversation this time. Saints side of the conversation. :/

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    • The difference is that, you know, the Empress helped the Dead King to devour the world for years.
      This isn’t protagonist bias at work.

      Are there similarities? Yeah, sure.
      Do the differences change the context meaningfully? Absolutely yes.

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      • I mean…. Cat had been helping and supporting Black’s attempts to burn shit down. The fact she didn’t always APPROVE doesn’t change the fact that he was an ally to her, and very dangerous.

        Probably the bigger difference was, at that stage Black wasn’t CURRENTLY setting fire to shit, unlike Nessie up north.

        The differences change the context, but I don’t think they change them as much as you seem to imply.

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        • I’m sorry, are you implying that there is no substantial difference between the conquest of a single nation (a conquest that didn’t really involve a culling of the population or any great restriction of its citizen’s freedom, which isn’t speculation but a plot point since that is WHY it worked for decades) with the END OF LIFE ON A CONTINENT?

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    • With the difference being that Catherine has been an actually TRUSTWORTHY ally to everyone she’s ever allied with for as long as they kept their end of the deal.

      While Malicia has fucked over, in sequence, everyone who has ever allied with her. Her alliance with Amadeus ended with her setting fire to it. Her alliance with DK was conceived as one she’d betray as soon as she deems it convenient from the very start.

      Catherine isn’t saying “you can’t play with us because you’ve played with the mean kids”. Catherine is saying “I tried playing with you, cost me a city, I watched while my father KEPT trying to play with you, you just ignored his goodwill without a blink, what the FUCK are you expecting at this point”.

      Malicia is, in fact, a neat illustration of why Laurence had reacted to Catherine the way she did. I mean – I’ve always been sympathetic towards Laurence. She was factually wrong, but she had good fucking reasons to make the predictions she did.

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  19. Realized something a few hours ago.

    This is probably the first time in many decades that Malicia has had her will usurped, been subjected to another’s Speaking. The last time it happened was probably when she was still the concubine Alaya, and the one who did it to her was probably Dread Emperor Nefarious.

    I don’t think even Kairos Theodosian dared to Speak to her. Then again, Kairos never showed any aptitude for Speaking.

    So Malicia may have experienced some degree of flashback to trauma from Nefarious following Catherine’s command to Be silent.

    Note this is not certain, because not every Dread Emperor has Rule as an aspect or knows how to Speak, but it’s quite likely, no?

    So even if Malicia didn’t hate and fear Catherine before, she surely does now.

    Of course, there are huge and very peculiar differences between Nefarious’s relationship with Alaya, and Malicia’s with Catherine.

    For one thing, Nefarious was basically Alaya’s owner. She was his concubine and sex slave. He had all the power.

    Here, Catherine was Malicia’s prisoner, and yet Malicia failed to command or even frighten Cat, and Cat succeeded in commanding and frightening Malicia.

    Akua used to say that any Sahelian agent that has been in the same room with Malicia must be assumed to be compromised. Now the same axiom must apply to Malicia if she ever meets Catherine again.

    Is there anything more unlikely and oxymoronic than a vulnerable, helpless Dread Empress?

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    • Yikes. Especially considering that exact trauma and resulting need for control is what led to her Rule aspect becoming such a focus for her … damn. This just got real pathologically personal for Malicia didn’t it?

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      • Yeah. That’s why though I can appreciate why that scene is impressive from Cat’s perspective, Cat commanding Malicia to be silent made me feel cold.

        There have been studies that show that people from traumatic backgrounds very often describe the purpose of power being to keep yourself safe. Is it a wonder that Malicia developed the ability to bend the will of those around her without speaking a word?

        And Cat broke that illusion.

        I don’t like Alaya, but I do find her so very tragic. She was pulled into the Tower, and thought that the only way to be free of the Tower is through to the top.

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        • Honestly, considering how far Alaya spiraled on her current coping mechanism for feeling safe, maybe Cat breaking that illusion will actually do her some good. Like, maybe she’ll find her way toward survival after all.

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          • Issue being people with trauma need to feel safe while also having a change in perspective to really get post traumatic growth. Maybe Amadeus could do something for that former portion but otherwhise such people tend to just lash out in self-destructive ways.

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            • Malicia is already lashing out in self-destructive ways. The first step when a kid is swinging a bazooka around is taking away the bazooka. If Alaya’s ties to her Name weaken, she has potential to ACTUALLY achieve safety.

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    • > Is there anything more unlikely and oxymoronic than a vulnerable, helpless Dread Empress?

      If the Empressness is a temporary condition, then I would think that they all go through a phase like that. It’s a bit like Outside Context Problems in the Iain M Banks culture novels.

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  20. Honestly the fact that Cat can Speak to Malicia is *terrifying* and says a lot about her Name.

    Malicia is one of the most matured Named on the continent, with the single most established history of any ruling Name, with a Name designed for Speaking, with an aspect designed for Speaking, and so much concerted practice into that aspect that she apparently transcended any prior recorded ability with it (Speaking without speaking).

    And Cat, without an aspect or even a fully formed Name, no-sold her. And then Spoke to *her*. There’s presumably a trick to it, some narrative reason Cat had to wait for Malicia to Speak first.

    But this …

    This is like a no-Name no-aspects claimant out-wrestling Heracles and making it look easy. And the writing made me buy it. I am in awe.

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    • It’s probably because Cat’s nascent name is meant to usurp Malicia’s. So Malicia’s reign is on the way out while Cat’s is on the way in. Bad portents for the Dread Empress, eh?

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      • Eh. Usurp has weird connotation here. She’s not about to climb the tower.

        Probably more accurate to say that she has made so much of her persona being unwilling to bend to rules she disagrees with that she managed to make it important enough to her Name that she not be overuled. Especially not by Malicia.

        Even just thinking about this little arc, Cat’s has taken pains to establish that she will not listen to Malicia and that they will never meet in anything but her own terms. At every opportunity, as soon as she has the information she needs, she gets rid of Malicia.

        When they first do a parley, before the campaign truly begins she immediately kills the puppet. When it becomes clear the scroll has what she needs to know, she attacks the puppet and removes it from her rooms. Even the Sisters refuse to allow control over their chosen one.

        She’s playing the narrative real good here.

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        • Yeah, Cat just establishing early and often that her highest priority is brutally killing Malicia as soon as she is able to and as often as she needs to is a hell of a thing. Like, even with the detachment of having it not be her own body, having someone *repeatedly* kill you in brutal fashion can not be pleasant. She killed her a bunch in Keter, killed one here earlier, made several attempts on the other one here, and has made it abundantly clear that she’s going to keep attempting it with the, ‘there’s always next time’ line. I feel like that story groove of, “Cat kills Malicia,” is getting worn pretty deep at this point. Combined with Cat just no selling her greatest strength and turning it back against her, Malicia might finally grasp what Ime’s been trying to tell her for years and start being very scared of what Catherine Foundling is going to do.

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  21. So who is betting before the books and artifacts are returned they at least used night to copy the books? Or maybe heirophant already somehow read them all?

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    • Yeah, no way they get to give those back without Masego having read through all the interesting ones lmao

      That or they have to get something real cool to show him because it not he’s gonna be pouring for the rest of the book.

      (Maybe everyone is being real careful about not telling him what has been stolen?)

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  22. When Malicia tried to compel Cat, I was reminded of the bit from Family Guy where Peter opens a can of whoop-ass. If you haven’t seen it, look it up, you’ll get what I mean 😉

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  23. Cat’s new name is Named that’s it. That’s the play. One of her Aspects is just Speak.

    A generic name for an all-powerful Odin stand in. It’s what the vagrant impersonator would have wanted.

    Vivienne also gets the Heiress Name in the same paragraph.

    I will not be taking criticism. Thanks.

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  24. Hm. I recall that Cat has described her Name as a “beast” in the past, but I think this is the first time she’s described it as having “Fur, deep and matted and warm.”

    I am not sure how to interpret that, since her new Name is clearly something with considerable authority as well.

    “Queen of the Beasts?” It doesn’t have the right ring to it.

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    • Makes me think of the expired member of Black’s band of five very time it fades towards that description.

      Just hoping Cat doesn’t get killed and skinned.

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      • Yeah I think there’s a risk there. Even in stories where the beast garners sympathy, there are few cases where the beast survives.

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    • I mean back in Marchford we got a note visual representation IIRC and I’ve definitely been imagining it with fur.

      I don’t think it implies she will have much to do with literal beasts, more that her name is something Primal vs Malicia’s gloves/tapestry or Amadeus’s ticking machine.

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