Chapter 33: Clean-up

“Of course I don’t step on people’s throats using my own heels. Have you seen how gorgeous these boots are? I’m not getting blood on these beauties: it takes at least two princes to get the right amount of skin, and duke leather just isn’t the same.”
– Dread Emperor Nihilis I, the Tanner

We’d had to put the entire main avenue to the torch, no two ways about it. While Robber took cared of scorching the earth where Heiress wanted to make camp, my men were stuck with the clean-up. Corpses of my legionaries and the Silver Spears both were stacked on great pyres that would burn until morning. I had one made for Hunter alone, since he’d earned at least this much from me. Anyhow, I suspected Archer would want his ashes to bring back to Refuge, whenever she came back. Necromancers could make some truly terrifying things out of the ashes of a hero, with a little time and imagination, and since I had none of those in my employ better they went far beyond the reach of my enemies. Handling the corpses was grim work, but it wasn’t the worst of it. Apprentice still had enough wits about him that he could serve as a detection device for corruption with the right spell, so I had Ratface appropriate a guildhall and rotate all legionaries who’d been within sight of the demon through it.

A dozen times, I patted a man or a woman who’d served me with nothing but loyalty on the back and sent them to a backroom where a sword was driven through their back.

I would have done it myself, felt like I needed to, but I was too godsdamned tired not to screw up the job. Of all the things to have happened tonight, that one left the foulest taste in the mouth. It was Sergeant Tordis who ended up bloodying her hands, though most of her line stepped in at some point or another. Casualties to demon fuckery were less than I’d feared: the trick it had used to make a new form seemed to have killed most of the affected. There was, of course, another problem. Apprentice himself might have been touched by corruption, and could not be relied on to check himself. None of my other mages knew the spell, and Masego was the only one who could teach it to them. I had records kept of all legionaries who’d been exposed to the demon even after the… purge, just in case. I’d need to have them looked over by another mage as soon as I could manage. I could feel myself falling asleep on my feet, but there was still too much to do.

Hakram wasn’t waking up, so I’d had him moved to my rooms until he was back in action. My healers assured me this was a case of pure exhaustion, and for what it was worth Apprentice cleared him of any trace of corruption. Coming into his aspect when in range of the demon hadn’t had the consequences I feared, much to my relief. Of course, unlike me he didn’t try to fucking force it. Robber came back half a bell later, as I dipped a torch in bucket of oil standing in a darkened street.

“Boss,” he greeted me, creeping out of an alley on silent feet.

I’d heard him coming but I was too tired to bother. I shook off some oil onto the paving stones and grasped the haft of the torch more firmly.

“Report,” I ordered hoarsely.

“The munitions we had stocked in the manor went up by accident,” he lied baldly. “By the time Heiress’ boys got in place to put it out, the place was a burnt-up husk.”

I smiled thinly. There was no pretending I hadn’t given this order out of pure spite, but I did not regret it. Akua had crossed a line by meddling with demons, by setting one on my legion. The only reason we had a truce was that forcing a battle with her right now was too risky.

“Tribune, listen to me closely,” I rasped. “As long as those fucking Proceran mercenaries and their paymaster remain within a day’s march of us, there will be accidents.”

The moon cast its light on the sapper’s face, sharp needle-like teeth and malevolent yellow eyes making my soldier a scarier sight than the devils ever had been.

“There’s all sorts of accidents,” Robber mused. “I wonder what kind might happen to them?”

“Supplies will be poisoned,” I ordered harshly. “Beasts of burden will be crippled. Any men who wander the city alone or in small enough groups will end up dead in an alley. If they so much as stack two stones on top of each other, I want them pushed down and on fire.”

“Hare anulsur,” he murmured in Tahreb.

War of vultures, it meant. The tribes of the Hungering Sands had never matched the Soninke kingdoms north of them in numbers, but never once had they been successfully invaded: Soninke hosts wandering into the desert found only poisoned wells and and nights full of knives, until all that was left of the enemy was a trail of corpses for the vultures. He’d understood my meaning perfectly.

“We’ve been at war since the moment she let the abomination out,” I snarled. “Time we started acting like it.”

There was no need to tell him not to get caught, and that if he was I’d have to deny I’d ever given him this order. Goblins understood the ways of quiet war better than humans ever could. With my free hand I opened the shutter to the only lantern lighting up the street and used the candle inside to light my torch. With heavy steps I walked to the pile of firewood Tordis’ line had stacked up, engraving the faces of the twelve legionaries on it into my mind. Gods, they look so young. I threw the torch.

“Your deaths are debt,” I whispered as the flames spread. “And I will have a long price for them. I cannot give you much, where you are going, but I can promise you that.”

I turned away, Robber falling in behind without a word. Dawn was but a bell away, and I needed to get some rest: Creation wouldn’t stop spinning just because I was exhausted.

My entire body ached when I woke up.

All available beds had been taken by my wounded, so I’d ended up passing out on a chair in one of the empty rooms of the Fifteenth’s command centre. I tested my bad leg by putting weight on it and had to bite my lip to stop from screaming. Fuck. Well, I won’t be running any time soon. My armour was in a messy pile on the other side of the room but putting it back on seemed like a masochistic endeavour, so instead I carefully rose while putting as little weight as possible on my wounded foot. I felt filthy, and probably smelled like it too: a mix of old blood, sweat and grime. There was no washbasin, unfortunately, and going on a quest for a bathtub was a luxury that would have to wait. The only upside to how I felt was that I was too tired to be hungry. I bent over with a hiss to pick up my sword belt and strap it on, tightening it sloppily. My ponytail had turned into a tangled mess while I slept, but that was nothing new: at least it had stopped growing since I’d become the Squire.

I pushed the door open and limped into the wider chamber. There were only a handful of officers there, spread among a few tables and talking in low voices. Through the windows in the front I could see the sun had risen, and that was as much as I took in before a hush fell over the room. Every single legionary was looking at me in utter silence. I kept my face blank, unsure how to react. It wasn’t fear or resentment I saw, but something else I couldn’t quite identify. Aisha’s voice rang out suddenly.

“Back to work,” the Taghreb girl barked. “Azim, put the herbs in the pot. If I catch any of you gossiping you’re getting a double shift helping the sappers.”

Aisha was perfectly groomed, looking like she’d just walked off a parade ground. It wasn’t because she’d not been in the thick of it, because some of the other staff officers I could see were looking distinctly haggard. I even smelled a touch of perfume on her as she came closer, offering me an arm to lean on. I pushed away the gesture a touch too harshly, regretting it immediately as I hobbled to a chair on my own. She didn’t seem particularly offended, at least. I suppose that being as close to Juniper as she was, she knew a thing or two about dealing with rudeness.

“Aisha,” I grunted. “What time is it?”

“Half past Dawn Bell,” she replied, sitting on the edge of the table.

I noted with tired amusement that she was as close to me as she could be without my feeling irritated at her closeness. I wasn’t sure whether that perceptiveness was a result of her aristocratic origins or something unique to Aisha herself, but it was appreciated nonetheless.

“Hakram up yet?” I asked.

She shook her head.

“Apprentice said he’d be out until noon, at least. Something about drawing too deep on his Name,” she paused, then raised her voice. “Azim, if that pot isn’t on its way I will have you strung up.”

A harried-looking Soninke officer ran towards us with a very nice porcelain pot I’d see Aisha use for tea before, nearly dropping the matching cup in his haste. The Staff Tribune dismissed him impatiently after he set it on the table in front of me. I raised an eyebrow in her direction.

“Masego left me herbs for when you woke up,” she explained.

I offered her a grateful nod and poured myself a cup of a brew smelling just like the one Apprentice had made me before the battle. I noticed her twitching at the sight of my pouring my own cup, which got the ghost of a smile out of me. No doubt the aristocrat in her balked at the idea of the highest-ranking person in the room filling their own cup, but she knew me well enough by now to have noticed I disliked relying on people for things I could do myself. The effect of the herbs didn’t kick in immediately, unfortunately. I spoke up again to keep my mind off the burning sensation in my leg.

“Where is Masego, anyway?”

“Room next to yours,” she said. “He didn’t last much longer than you, and informed me that if anyone disturbed him for any reason they’d spend a week of their life as a toad.”

I snorted. Whether or not he could actually do that was debatable – metamorphosis was a branch of sorcery that consumed a hideous amount of power for even the smallest changes – but coming from the Warlock’s son the threat would be enough to give anyone pause.

“No one can find Archer,” Aisha continued, “and Juniper’s sleeping the battle off somewhere on a rooftop.”

Surprise must have shown on my face, because the lovely Staff Tribune elaborated.

“She always does that after a fight,” she explained. “Lets her mind rest.”

As far as vices went, that was a rather mild one. Not that I should be surprised: the Hellhound was one of the most temperate people I’d ever met. Hardly drank, disapproved of gambling and I’d never heard of her being involved with anyone. Robber kept insinuating she was sleeping with either Aisha or Hakram, but then he’d also composed a ten-stanza poem about how Nauk had fathered half a dozen calves during our march to Callow. The tribune’s words had to be taken with a grain of salt, was what I was saying. I hummed, finishing my cup and pouring another. The taste of the brew was bitter but it soothed my throat, and already the pain in my leg was receding.

“Heiress?” I finally asked.

“Hasn’t made a move,” Aisha informed me. “Set up her camp around the ruins of the manor and put up a palisade. There are regular watches, but none of her men have set foot in the city.”

That was fine. I was willing to be patient: night would fall eventually, and unlike Robber’s men hers did not see in the dark. Wooden stakes would do little to impede goblins with knives and a mandate to spill as much blood as they could get away with.

“And so ends the Battle of Marchford,” I murmured. “We got so close to a real victory, Aisha. So damned close.”

The Taghreb’s face went inscrutable, then she let out a soft sigh.

“Ma’am,” she said, then stopped when I gave her a look. “Catherine,” she corrected herself. “Look at that orc over there, the woman with the lily jutting out of her breastplate.”

The sight of a broad-shouldered orc frowning down at paperwork was almost comical, I had to admit.

“That’s Lieutenant Asta,” Aisha continued. “When she went for water, around dawn, a five-year old boy walked up to her and have her that flower. Thanked her for saving his mother from the devils.”

I met Aisha’s eyes and saw she was smiling softly.

“That’s happening all over Marchford, right now,” she said. “Callowans are pitching in to help legionaries clear debris off the streets. Half my staff was ambushed by old women bringing them sweetbread and lamb stew. Catherine, a fortnight ago these people thought we were worse than the plague. Now children are bringing us flowers.”

She rested a hand on my wrist for an instant, then withdrew. Such soft skin, for a soldier.

“That look on their faces when you walked in was pride, Squire,” Aisha told me. “We’re proud of what we did here. The Fifteenth took a stand and we were bloodied for it, but we won. And that makes all the difference.”

“We didn’t get the demon,” I replied tiredly. “Heiress did.”

The Taghreb aristocrat shrugged. “That may be true. But the stories that are coming in aren’t awe about her taking care of the threat. They’re about three villains and a pair of heroes, standing between the Fifteenth and a demon. They’re about you and Hakram forcing back a monster the size of a guard tower with nothing but swords and shields, about Apprentice making a new sun in the sky to scour it clean. Maybe in the Tower they’ll care about what Heiress has to say, but not those of us who were here. We know, and more importantly we’ll remember.”

I looked away, feeling my throat choke up. How tired must I have been, for this to bring tears to my eyes? Aisha was kind enough to pretend she wasn’t seeing anything and I forced myself to finish my last cup of herbal brew. I took a few deep breaths, enjoying the last few moments of peace I’d be getting for a long while. The Battle of Marchford might be over, but I still had another war to fight. The same war that had begun the moment I’d laid eyes on Heiress, and made the mistake of ignoring because I hadn’t seen her since. A prickle at the edge of my senses chased that peace away in the blink of an eye. I immediately rose to my feet, much to Aisha’s surprise.

“Lady Squire?” she asked worriedly.

“Trouble,” I hissed, as a door behind me slammed open.

Masego hopped out, robes askew and his braids an unwholesome mess. His eyes were red and bloodshot.

“Fucking Hells,” he snarled. “Really? Right after the demon?”

“Focus, Apprentice,” I spoke up, forcing my voice to remain steady. “What exactly is this?”

“Something’s coming from Arcadia,” he replied, and I only now noticed he wasn’t wearing his spectacles.

I had a dozen urgent questions, but none as urgent as this one: “Where?”

His fingers lit up with red light and he traced a few runes in the air, muttering under his breath as they rearranged themselves on their own.

“Where we fought it,” he replied, and didn’t have to specify what ‘it’ was.

I felt calm settle on me. We could handle this. We’d have to.

“Aisha, evacuate the whole sector,” I ordered. “Send word to whichever commander is awake, I want the Fifteenth on combat footing immediately. Surround the place. Mages are to make sure nothing gets out.”

She saluted immediately, and I turned to Masego.

“We’re going,” I said, and it wasn’t a question.

“I thought Fae could only come into Creation through gates? You know, like the one in the Waning Woods,” I said to Apprentice as we hurried through the streets.

“Powerful enough fairies can create paths,” he explained, rubbing at his eyes.

The morning sun wasn’t doing either of us any favours.

“And Marchford is in a unique situation,” he added.

We turned a corner. The street was empty, Aisha’s runners having taken care of making sure there wouldn’t be anyone caught in the crossfire. It would take longer for the legion to be in position, though. We’d be without backup for the beginning of the fight.

“Elaborate,” I gritted out when it became obvious he wouldn’t.

“Slower,” he panted.

I resisted the urge to point out that I was the cripple between the two of us. He’s running drills with Hakram after this, Heavens burn me if I lie.

“Demons damage Creation,” he told me as we cut down our pace. “The separations between Creation and a realm as close to it as Arcadia will be running thin right now. Maybe forever.”

“Well that’s just fucking wonderful,” I cursed.

Fae inside a bloody city. Just what we needed right now. And I couldn’t even use all of my legion against them: at least a third would have to be watching Heiress’ army to be sure they didn’t backstab us at the first occasion. Which they damn well would, because Akua was the kind of insane megalomaniac who used existential threats as catspaws. Sometimes I understood why Black had wanted to put all the Wasteland’s nobility to the sword after the civil war.

“Are we sure they’re going to be hostile?”

“Fae aren’t hostile, Cat,” he got out. “They just like their games and don’t understand the concept of mortality. They’re basically souls given form – inside Arcadia they can’t die.”

I paused. “But in Creation they can, right? Right?”

Apprentice cleared his throat. “That’s, uh, a matter of academic debate. The most popular current of thought is-“

Masego,” I barked.

“Sure,” he replied, looking as pained by the lack of precision as he was by the act of running. “Stab away, that’ll work.”

We cut through the plaza as fast as we could and arrived at the head of the avenue just when something tore open. Blizzard poured out of an opening I couldn’t see, impossibly thick. Winds howled as frost spread across the ground, an empty ruined avenue turning into the eye of the storm faster than I could unsheathe my sword. I grimaced.

“Well, that’s promising,” I muttered.

Masego whispered something under his breath and a moment later I stopped feeling the cold. I shot him a grateful glance, and together we strode forward. It was hard to make anything out in the spinning snow, but as we got to the edge of the blizzard we saw a silhouette approach. A man? Maybe not, the features were too fine to tell and the long hair could have belonged to either gender. If Fae even did gender, which I wasn’t sure they did – some were supposed to be shapeshifters. Tall, with impossibly clear blue eyes and hair that looked more like flowing darkness than anything materially possible. Those eyes, I noted, were wide and showing white. The Fae looked at us and hesitated, then jerked.

No,” it called out in a voice that was like velvet made sound, even when taken by terror.

Something dragged it deeper into the snow storm and there was a scream, then a sickening crunch. I licked my lips nervously.

“Suddenly I’m not too sure about going to have that look,” I admitted.

“You’re the commander,” Apprentice croaked out. “If you favour a tactical retreat, who am I to argue?”

We never got to make a choice, as the blizzard continued to expand and enveloped us a heartbeat later. I kept close to Masego and brought up my sword. The visibility was the real problem here, not even my Name sight could – the cold touch of steel against the back of my neck stilled my heart.

“Wekesa?” my teacher’s voice prompted.

“She’s clear,” Warlock replied, still invisible. “Though someone took a butcher’s knife to her soul.”

“Your son?”

There was a long pause.

“Also clear,” Warlock finally said.

The sword came away from my neck as the tear in the distance closed, the blizzard dispersing to reveal the sight of the Black Knight in full regalia save for the helmet. He offered me a sardonic smile.

“So,” he mused. “I’m given to understand you’ve had an eventful few weeks.”

43 thoughts on “Chapter 33: Clean-up

    • not necessarily, having to look into your only son for demon stuff wold make lots of people pause then look over everything twice. maybe he just took longer to totally make sure

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    • Masego isn’t infected and Warlock didn’t take any longer to check either. It just seems the way because of Black’s impatience.
      Warlock started to look into Cat before Black prompted him for an answer thus the time needed to check out Masego seemed to be longer.

      If Apprentice is infected, then his possible roles in the story would be a corpse, a new antagonist or dangerous experiment that needs constant containment and supervision. The first would screw up Warlock’s legacy (and who’d inherit the name then?), the second seems like overkill in the current situation. The third has the option of perhaps granting him new powers, but he is powerful enough already. It would just be more complications and drama.
      Cat has been battered, bruised and nearly broken. She’s crippled in more than one way and she already buried a friend. Killing another, weakening her legion further… that doesn’t accomplish anything but take things from seriously grim to almost impossible to survive. I’d expect that from a Wildbow story where the protagonist suffers more and more until they break, become a monster and suffer some more until the next breaking point… but not from this story.

      It’s difficult to tell from that brief scene but while there is a chance of corruption, I think it’s very low. Cat already made plans to have everyone double-checked, as long as she still does that (and continues checking on Apprentice), things should be fine.
      I also don’t think Wekesa can lie that easily to Black.

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      • I would honestly guess that he would know better than to try and fight corruption. If Masego got hit, Wekesa would want to finish him off for everyone’s benefit including his own. Mind, he would then make sure that Heiress got about the same treatment as he threatened Cat with if she killed Black, because he is still Wekesa’s son.

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      • Can confirm, if this was wobblebibble this would be chapter two and chapter ten would end with half the world destroyed and at least half the main characters dead.


  1. The Black Knight returns, and at his side stands Warlock! What fate lies in store for Heiress, when they find out she unleashed the demon that brought them here? Find out next week, when An Occupational Guide to Evil returns!


  2. While Robber took cared of scorching

    dipped a torch in bucket of oil
    in a bucket

    her and have her that flower.

    The visibility was the real problem here, not even my Name sight could – the cold touch of steel against the back of my neck stilled my heart.
    If this is supposed to be a break in thought, you want an em dash like so (adding a newline might also help):
    sight could— The cold touch

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    • A dozen times, I patted a man or a woman who’d served me with nothing but loyalty on the back and sent them to a backroom where a sword was driven through their back.

      They served Catherine with loyalty on their backs? Remove “I patted” and add “were patted” after the word loyalty.

      walked up to her and have her that flower
      Change have to gave.


      • A dozen times, I patted a man or a woman on the back [ who’d served me with nothing but loyalty ] and sent them to a backroom where a sword was driven through their back.

        There, fixed it while keeping the basic sentence as is, too. No chance from active to passive necessary, either. Of course, both work fine, and yeah, the original is a bit awkward, even if everyone still understands (after only a short pause) what is / must be meant. 😉


      • Might even make it something like ” and drove a sword through that very back”, seeing as “back” is in there twice in two adjoined sentences.


  3. I wonder… Just how did these polished stories about the gritty, determined Fifteenth get such a wonderful shine in next-to-no time to get from rumour mill to flowers and “have some cake, officer”? I suspect a certain Minstrel’s been lending a hand to make sure Akua loses the overall story war, even if she manages the odd political gain back in the Tower. 🙂

    Black most certainly will pick up on it, regardless.


    • There where also the recruited troops from Marchford.

      They where there and saw.
      Also the 15th did the preparation and more important the cleaning up.

      Akua just made camp, she is just the newcomer.


      • My point is… spontaneity happens, but it usually doesn’t take a form like that quite so quickly without a bit of help. 🙂

        Yes, all the building blocks were there. I get that. But, grease on the wheels… 😉


    • Honestly, I think the truth might have something to do with it. They really were the (note the lower-case) heroes of the hour, and no matter what anyone can or cannot prove Akua did, she oozes slime at anyone who meets her in person. But I wouldn’t put it past Almorava to be deliberately helping Catherine get the upper hand, given how much of a wild card she is. And the comment about being “plot relevant” when she started interfering with the Fifteenth seems to me as though it implies that she considers Cat the protagonist. A main character is always plot relevant, and all of Cat’s subordinates have already been established to be supporting characters relative to her. Hell, the one other Named among them is explicitly important as her aide, rather than her protege. Considering that bards are supposed to be supporting characters helping the plot along, and Hunter got himself killed in the second act, that really only leaves Archer as an alternative protagonist, and somehow I doubt she’s the one.


  4. “The munitions we had stocked in the manor went up by accident,” he lied baldly. “By the time Heiress’ boys got in place to put it out, the place was a burnt-up husk.”


    I am content.


    • “Stand” – going Gandalf Style
      “Thou shalt not pass” for here I “Stand”

      Him being the right deadhand and bodyguard of his Warlord this seems fitting.


  5. I don’t think Warlock is stupid enough to A) lie to motherfucking Black Knight B) think that he could, even in theory, fix whatever demon did. He is a calamity, and you don’t get to be a calamity by making novice villain mistakes. Apprentice is completely clear of demonstuff.

    Also, Badass level in that town just quintupled. Twice in a row. A certain Akua won’t know what hit her. Something tells me that using demons is punishable by a death sentence, carried out on the spot, and Black has the power to do it.


    • If his student-son Masego CAN fix it by “taking a butcher’s knife” to Cat’s soul, why the HELL should the effing WARLOCK HIMSELF not be able to fix such a thing with (implied) MUCH more finer tools (and knowledge and experience) at his disposal?


  6. Just to make sure I understand, did Black and Warlock come through the portal? Or did they happen to arrive just as the portal opened?


    • To me it looks like they forced the Fae to make them a portal to arrive faster than they could have otherwise. Basically, they are cheating like successful villains. 🙂


  7. Black Knighrt and Warlock in town? They will be a problem for Akua, sure, butbten bucks says her real problems will stem from a certain quiet villain who was underestimated by Heiress.

    After all, who else would be better at unraveling plots than the ultimate bureaucrat?


  8. Finally good shit comes out of this!, cath after being the (metaphorical) hero here will finally get something to her name apart from “that girl who likes goblin fire”.

    And yep, warlock and black here means thats heiress cant do anything so yeah a little break is good.


  9. Has anyone considered that Robber might already be Named? Everyone calls him Robber, he acts out in a manner appropriate to that role, and it’s a Name that lends itself to keeping its nature unnoticed.


    • Maybe that’s why there’s no known goblin Named: they already call themselves by those sorts of names, so noone can tell if it’s their name or their Name. 😉


    • Apprentice already proved that he can detect when someone is about to receive a Name when he met Hakram.
      I think he would be able to tell if someone that he meets every day is Named or not.


  10. I was going to disagree with those who thought Black would take care of Heiress. My reasoning is that killing her would be a political problem of the highest order – Heiress would know this and have counters. The biggest counter is that no-one can be certain she was the one who released the demon. But the Wandering Bard said she wasn’t plot relevant… which means she can be killed.


  11. >> Apprentice still had enough wits about him that he could serve as a detection device for corruption with the right spell, so I had Ratface appropriate a guildhall and rotate all legionaries who’d been within sight of the demon through it.

    A dozen times, I patted a man or a woman who’d served me with nothing but loyalty on the back and sent them to a backroom where a sword was driven through their back. <> Apprentice himself might have been touched by corruption, and could not be relied on to check himself. <<


    Bonus points for anyone seeing the problem in these two scenarios hinging on the SAME GUY to check people / himself. So you just killed a dozen people you CANNOT BE SURE ABOUT actually being corrupted or not? After it was shown that Masego actually CAN just rip out corruption, even if it means losing part of the soul in question (as evidenced in Cat's own case)???

    Sorry, but this aftermath is really awfully illogical, despite all the rest being rather brilliant most of the time. *sigh =(


    • Oh wow… it’s worse. She actually did realize the problem and killed some anyway, despite not trusting the others because of it?? o_O Way to go, Cat, way to go…. But yeah, I guess the missing-part-of-the-soul and acting more soulless shows? Slippery slope down the line, “in case they really were affected, we better kill em off, hoping he is not affected” thinking?
      Though, if it should be the other way round, you killed off perfectly healthy people and left all the corrupt ones anyway. Guessing she really must be heavily relying on Masego being too powerful to be affected and having succeeded in burning in it — otherwise why the HELL would she not just watch ALL of them, if she is unsure about either? OR, alternatively, kill off ALL of the ones that might have been exposed, just to make sure, which would fix the whole problem.

      But nah, we have to go the illogical way of halfway down the villainous slope, not enough villain to do the only logical thing, and… neither heroic enough either to NOT do the *il*logical thing? This doesn’t really make sense, logically…. So she’s just acting emotionally or what? Then again, her emotion seems to run along the lines of not totally trusting Masego at the moment (even if wishing to) and also NOT wanting to kill these people (but fearing she should). So she goes halfway and kills a few? o_O It’s all muddled.

      My reader reaction is definitely: this shunted me right out of the story. Either she should not really suspect Masego – which makes the killing believable (/-ly logical) …. or she should just keep tabs on all, if she doesn’t really trust Masego’s judgement at the moment, because the inherent problem obviously does not only apply to himself… Gah.

      I guess it might be the “normal human way” to go, I have been found to sometimes have “strange approaches” by human standards (train experiment example – I definitely would push that person myself, too, figuring I should save the many in an example of “all is unknown but the numbers”). *headscratch
      Sometimes I don’t understand normal humans.. maybe this applies here, too. Dunno. But it’s definitely one of those circumstances where I find very, very strange the ruling that is applied here. o_Ô

      >> I had records kept of all legionaries who’d been exposed to the demon even after the… purge, just in case. I’d need to have them looked over by another mage as soon as I could manage. I could feel myself falling asleep on my feet, but there was still too much to do. <<


      • Ehrm.. what did I just read there… “trust in Masego having succeeded in *burning it away*” is what this should have been. Mpf. Where’s my edit… *sigh


      • Let’s see. We have one Apprentice that once managed to rip out a part of Cat’s soul that had demon corruption festering in it. When doing so he was well rested and it was a job that had him exhausted.

        Then we have a dozen people who have been in direct contact with a demon of corruption. Not only is their souls being corrupted but their very flesh is about to join team demon. In fact the may spread this corruption to any others who they meet. And we have a Apprentice who has burned more power in a day than most mages burn in a month or even half a year.

        Yea let’s have Apprentice “cure” the growing corruption in these unfortunate soldiers. Surely we’ve got time to do this. If he just treats one per day he’ll be done in less than a fortnight. Surely we’ve got time for that? They couldn’t spread all that much corruption in only two weeks, right?

        Or we could kill the quickly and painlessly making sure there’s no more people getting corrupted, as per Legion standard operating procedure for the handling of demon corruption.


  12. It all seems pretty logical to me, they didn’t have soul corruption, Cat only had soul corruption because she tried to fight it in her soul, so it can’t be just cut out. The Apprentice checking is the only person who could check, regardless of whether or not he was starting to be corrupted, he seemed fine *now*, it’s just that he might not be fine *later*, which is why she needs to keep tabs on him.

    Also she’s in the middle of a war, she can’t afford to just butcher all of her troops just because they were in the battle, she needs as many as she can get since she was already way below strength.


    • *in other words she needs to check and make sure she gets everyone not corrupted so she doesn’t lose all the vital manpower that would be lost in just killing everyone including those corrupted.


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