Challengers

“To be good?

An empty boast.

To be good at!

There is the glory,

even in devilry.”

– Extract from the play “I, Triumphant”, author unknown, banned by decree of the Tower under Terribilis II

Rosalind hadn’t been a Fairfax until there were no Fairfaxes left. She still remembered the knight that’d taken her away and brought her to the monastery, grim and silent and hidden by the visor. She’d grown to love it there, growing up in the gardens with the Brothers and Sisters, but she would not forget that she had been an embarrassment. That it would have been scandalous if Good King’s Robert own cousin was known to have fathered a bastard, so Rosalind must be spirited away in a small monastery in the southern reaches of Callow where she wouldn’t get in anyone’s way.

Much as she still resented that, it had likely saved her life.

Lord William, his wife and their two children were all dead. The Calamities had butchered even the four-year old boy, when they took Laure. But no one had known that Rosalind existed, so no black-clad killers had ever come knocking at the gates of the monastery in the middle of the night. Not, Brother Harlan had told her, that she would have been given up if they had. Lord William had chosen for her upbringing a monastery where more than a few knights had retired, perhaps intending to throw a knighthood her way when she reached the right age.

They would have fought for her, Brother Harlan said, not only because she was now the rightful Queen of Callow but because she was as much their daughter as anyone of their blood. And their conviction had sunk in her, Rosalind thought, for someone needed to save kingdom. The Praesi were still taking tallies and establishing taxes, for now, but it was only a matter of time until their ‘imperial governors’ revealed themselves as cruel tyrants. Rosalind must stop them before it was too late, and that meant rising in rebellion.

And for that, when Harlan – once Ser Harlan, Grandmaster of the Sleeping Lions – had laid the blade on her shoulders she had not risen to her feet a simple knight but instead the Rebel Knight. Eleanor Fairfax’s own Name, she had been told. Her fate was to be one of resurrection, bringing back Callow into a golden age as her ancestor had long ago. Resurrection apparently began with a lot of riding around, though, because that was what she’d been doing since leaving the monastery.

“You’re sure that Countess Elizabeth will help us?” Rosalind asked.

Brother Harlan stroked his beard, which though white had lost none of its luster – much like the man himself had lost little vigor or muscles even though he was in his sixties.

“The Countess Marchford is ambitious but she loves this country,” Harlan told her. “She might insist that you be betrothed to one of her family – I believe her nephew is her heir and the ages are close enough – but she will rise for a Fairfax. Of that I have no doubt.”

And the Countess was wealthy, Rosalind had been told, because of the silver mines in the hills she ruled. Coin would be needed, if the Rebel Knight was to begin raising an army. That was what had the five of them riding north at night, Rosalind and her mentor and the companions she’d found since leaving the monastery. Jack and Jane, the ever-smiling twins from Liesse that always seemed to know more than they should and showed wicked skill with knives, and Lucian. A stuck-up ass of a squire, who though unseasonably handsome kept picking at every decision Rosalind made.

She was pretty sure he was some noble’s son, even if he insisted otherwise, because he kept being surprised at all sorts of common things.

And, surprise of surprises, he rode up to her side the moment Harlan stopped talking. It’d been pretty obvious he was eavesdropping the whole time, as he often did. The pretty boy offered her a smirk.

“Do not worry, Rosalind,” Lucian said. “I have been to Marchford before. When your etiquette fails, you can rely on me to avoid disaster.”

“That’ll be the day,” Rosalind replied, rolling her eyes.

Gods Above, if the squire would just shut up and be pretty this journey would be so much more enjoyable. Harlan looked disapprovingly at the two of them, at him for his presumption and at her for the rudeness, but then he froze and pulled hard at his reins. His mount stopped, and so did the rest of the company’s.

“Harlan?” the Rebel Knight asked.

“We’ve just entered a ward,” Harlan grimly said. “Everyone, scatter.”

Rosalind had been obeying him in the training yard for years, she moved without hesitation. Lucian did not, and a heartbeat later there was a plume of ash where he’d been standing. Rosalind’s heart caught in her throat as she galloped away. Gods, was he dead? Just like that, dead? Light bloomed in the night, and a streak of red flame died against a shining shield. Harlan grunted with effort.

“To me,” he bellowed. “We have to pull back to-”

Rosalind deftly obeyed, as did the wide-eyed twins a moment later, but there was a blur of motion as one of them and their horse were bowledover. A massive wolf ripped out the twin’s hair, the horse screaming as it convulsed with broken legs.

“Jane,” the survivor screamed, anguished.

The Rebel Knight could see, now what the purpose of the ward had been. It had broken, perhaps because of the Light, and now a large mounted company of armoured riders could be seen spreading out around them. The Blackguards. And at their head, riding by the side of a tall Soninke in red robes that must be the Sovereign of Red Skies himself, was a man in plain plate. The Carrion Lord himself, Rosalind realized with a shiver. Harlan moved between the two of them, Light burning in his gaze.

“Ser Harlan,” the Black Knight calmly greeted him. “It appears your retirement has come to an end.”

“Had me watched, did you?” her mentor growled.

“We have people in Marchford,” the Carrion Lord replied. “Making contact revealed you.”

To their side the Blackguards were still fanning out and Rosalind felt fear creeping up her spine. If they got surrounded…

“Run, child,” Harlan quietly said.

Rosalind rocked back as if he’d slapped her.

“Harlan, no,” she insisted. “I can’t leave you-”

“I can hold them back long enough,” Harlan said, back straightening. “It will be my last gift to you, Rosalind.”

She choked up. He’d taught her since she could wall, taken care of her through every tantrum and skinned knee, every… He was more her father than some dead Fairfax could ever claim to be. Jack put his hand on her shoulder, pulling her back.

“We need to go,” he said, voice raw with grief.

Around them the riders were still spreading out, moving methodically. Harlan turned to her, smiling through his white beard.

“Farewell, Rosalind,” the old knight said. “Rule well.”

And she ran, Gods damn her. Followed his last order even as Light bloomed like a midnight sun.

“Come on, Carrion Lord,” Grandmaster Harlan of the Sleeping Lions laughed, “let’s have the fight that should have ended you on the Fields.”

A pause.

“All crossbows fire at will,” the Black Knight mildly said. “Delay pursuit, it’s pointless now – Wekesa, track her.”

Whatever happened after that, Rosalind was too far to hear it. She rode her horse hard, Jack sticking close to her. But these were flatlands, and when enough time had passed that she could look behind without tears in her eyes she saw the Blackguards had resumed pursuit.

“There’s a village to the east,” Jack shouted at her. “Off the road. We need to hide there.”

She nodded, not trusting her voice. Something was burning her belly, a rage she’d not known before. It had been a duty, driving out the Praesi, but now it was something more. It was personal. They took Jack’s advice, the Blackguards pursuing in the distance, and before long found the village he’d mentioned. A nowhere place, wide asleep. There was nowhere in sight.

“I’ll find us fresh horses to steal,” Jack told her, pulling ahead. “Keep an eye on-”

The crossbow bolt took him the throat. The Rebel Knight threw herself to the ground before another could take her in the chest, but her horse was not so lucky.

“No,” she wept, but Jack was already dead.

What could she do but run? The village was swarming with goblins in Legion armour, suddenly, and if she stopped moving she was dead.

She was exhausted when the enemy caught up to her. Rosalind was fast, but not so fast she could outrun horses. She turned around, sword in hand, to meet her enemy.

“Come fight me, coward,” the Rebel Knight shouted.

The Carrion Lord studied her through his visor in silence, then simply raised his hand and lowered it. Rosalind was already running, but there was no avoiding that many crossbows. One bolt after another punched through her chain mail, every step becoming harder until she collapsed. She had not, she realized, gotten even half of the way there. The monster dismounted, a dozen soldiers following him as he approached her with his sword bare.

Rosalind tried to raise her arm, strike at him, but she was too weak.

“Three years,” the Black Knight said, shaking his head in disgust. “Even Scribe thought we’d get six before the first of you popped out.”

“I won’t be the last,” Rosalind gurgled out. “Damn you, I won’t be the last.”

Eerily pale green eyes met hers.

“No,” the Carrion Lord softly agreed. “In every sense, child, you will not be the last.”

It was mercifully quick.

The Scholar had heard what the monsters did to heroes in these parts, and he wasn’t going to meet that fate. That was why he was drinking in a dingy tavern, sipping at stale beer, instead of trying to hook up with one of the dozen would-be rebel groups that dwelled in Vale. Julian was Callowan too, just as much as any of them, but he’d been abroad. He’d been studying in Atalante when the Conquest happened, so he had… perspective that the people who’d never left lacked. These villains weren’t like the ones from the old stories, they’d take longer to drive out. Coming at them plain wouldn’t work. So instead of adding his corpse to the growing pile, Julian Evers was going to do the smart thing.

He’d learn everything he could about them, all their tricks, and give that information to every hero on Calernia. Time would do the rest for him.

Still, he had to wonder if it was the occupation that’d made the beer so watery. Surely an honest Callowan tavern-keeper wouldn’t cut their drinks if they had any other choice, right? The brown-haired man shot a suspicious look at the man behind the counter. He’d already used Examineon the tavern-keeper to make sure he did not have the tattoo that marked Eyes of the Empire, so he knew the fair-haired man was at least marginally trustworthy. He leaned around one of the candles on the counter, avoiding the uncomfortable wafting heat.

“I’ve a question,” Julian said, “if you have a moment.”

“Maybe if you order another beer,” the tavern-keeper mildly replied. “You’ve been nursing that tankard all evening.”

Fair enough, the Scholar thought with a sigh. He ordered again, setting aside his old tankard and sipping at the new one in a gesture of goodwill. It was significantly better, he noticed, and took a deeper swallow.

“Do you cut your beer, by any chance?” Julian asked, stroking a finger against Examine.

The blond man puffed up, looking offended.

“Of course not,” he replied.

A lie, Julian saw. His aspect wasn’t entirely foolproof, it tended to get caught up in details, but it saw clearly through most situations. Besides, particular attention to detail was only natural for someone who’d studied in Atalante: the philosopher-priests had quite literally invented the discipline of semantics.

“So yes,” Julian drily said, “but not this one.”

The tavern-keeper glared.

“Fine, there might have been water in the first,” he admitted. “But not your second.”

Truth, Examine told him. Julian took another swallow.

“What do you want, stranger?” the tavern-keeper asked.

“Your advice,” the Scholar said, smiling at the knowledge he now held the advantage. “I have been thinking of heading to Summerholm, but I hear the place is swarming with Praesi.”

“Largest garrison in Callow,” the other man agreed. “What about it?”

“I can deal with soldiers,” Julian shrugged, “but is it true that the Calamities often go there?”

He hoped so. Finding employment, laying low for a year or two and then begin quietly gathering information was his plan but it would only work if he could find a place where at least some of the villains regularly spent time. The Black Knight had not taken up a city as the capital of the occupation, unfortunately, which made the business tricky.

“Way I hear it, the Black Knight blows through every few months,” the tavern-keeper said. “And the Captains’ supposed to stick to him like glue, yeah? Don’t know about the others.”

The Scholar hummed. One tavern-keeper was not a certainty, but it was a start. He’d moved around, ask in other places after having changed his appearance like he’d done in Dormer. He offered the blond man his smile and thanks, then set about finishing the rest of the tankard out of politeness. Best not to be rude, it risked making him into a story to be peddled. Only when he was halfway through, he felt a sudden and vicious cramp. Julian looked down. His limbs were trembling, he saw, and he dropped to the floor.

He had, he realized with horror, been poisoned.

Distantly, he heard a few screams and people running out of the hall. Footsteps too, large, but his eyes were on the candle on the counter. Burning, he thought. Destroying impurity. And what poison, if not that? He focused, feeling the life leak out of him, and thought of a flame. Of it scouring his veins, destroying all evil. A hulking shape leaned over him. Not a woman, he dimly thought, for what woman could possibly be so large?

“Did you just learn to burn out poison on the fly?” the Captain said, sounding impressed. “It’s not even that common a trick.”

“I,” the Scholar gurgled out, “you won’t get away with-”

“You certainly didn’t,” the Captain said, raising a great hammer. “We lost you after Dormer, Scholar, but if you keep using dives for information then it’s just a waiting game.”

The hammer came down.

It’d all begun when a wolf king had come out of the Waning Woods and begun to raid farms. It’d not exactly caused a panic, since it or something like it happened every few decades. The tale was well-worn: some fae lord came into Creation, played court with some animals enchanted to talk and then when they got bored and abandoned the whole affair. Leaving the territory closest to the woods, the Barony of Dormer, to deal with the aftermath. The wolf kings were the worst of the lot, what with the way they gathered large packs and went after cattle single-mindedly, but it was nothing that Baroness Anne’s knights wouldn’t be able to ride down.

Only this time the fae had decided to go for broke, and horse-sized fox that spoke in rhyme had attacked the knights’ camp as they slept, tearing through them while they were unarmoured. The fox – a vixen, to be precise – had all the while been telling them that she was truly a princess and that the only way to be free of her curse was to slay as many men as there were days the enchantment was meant to last, but the good people of Dormer took that one with a grain of salt. Everyone’s grandmother had a story about some frog-prince who’d ended up being a badger with delusions of grandeur or a cousin who’d freed a buck only to find the promised treasure was a pile of acorns painted gold.

The survivors from the attack had sent for reinforcements and gathered the dispossessed farmers in a small town called Strawthorn, walling up there until the baroness’ troops could arrive. Blake had gone out to help, of course he had. He might have left behind his life as a Brother to marry Sawyer, but he was still a healer at heart. So long as he could wield Light, he’d pitch in when Evil came calling in one form or another. Sawyer hadn’t argued, one of a hundred daily reminders of how he’d made the right decision upending his life to be with her, and instead hung her apron to belt on her sword.

That nasty business with her father had ensured that Sawyer Halcroft would never be a knight, but her years abroad as a mercenary had taught her entirely more practical skills.

They were a month in Strawhtorn, Blake to heal the sick as he ignored the sideye from the priests and Sawyer spending her days training the town’s fledgling militia under the disapproving gaze of the Dormer knights. His wife was teaching them Free Cities spear tactics, not a proper Callowan shield wall, which while more likely to save their lives was apparently lacking in patriotism on her part.

“Never mind that a shield wall that green will melt away like summer snow the moment wolves run at it,” Sawyer groused at him in private.

Just as they began to get restless, however, word came from Dormer: another force had been assembled and was on its way. Darker news came too, to everyone’s dismay: rumour had it the Carrion Lord had taken an interest and might be headed this way. Hopefully it was really just be a rumour.

“It probably is,” Sawyer reassured him. “If you listen to gossip, the man’s bloody everywhere.”

“I won’t mind that,” Blake said, “so long as it’s everywhere but here.”

The Calamities might not have been the kind of tyrants he’d expected them to be, but they were harsher in doling out punishment than the Fairfaxes had ever been. Best not to draw their attention at all if you could, that was just plain sense. The two of them made plans to leave Strawthorn when the reinforcements arrived, deciding it was best to get gone before they could get caught up in the inevitable pissing match between the Dormer soldiers and the Praesi.

Only they didn’t get to, because the wolf king came straight at the town. No one had expected it, because the creatures never did that. It might have a crown seared onto its head, but it was still a wolf: those didn’t attack towns, or even most villages, unless hunger made them desperate. The knights were caught with their pants down again, although even half-dressed their core of veterans made a bloody fight of it, but things were looking bad.

“I need to form up the militia,” Sawyer hissed at him. “Can you-”

Blake kissed her.

“Go,” he said, and she did.

He should have gone with the priests, readied himself to heal the wounded, but a doubt was niggling away at him. Why would the wolf king act this way? Following a faint instinct, he headed for the House of Light and there found his answer: the great fox, trying to force open the gates. Around her neck hung the limp and bleeding body of a she-wolf.

“You took the wolf king’s consort to draw him here,” Blake said, fingers clenching around his staff. “Why?”

The fox turned to look at him, smirking as much as an animal could.

“Poor priest, blinded and crossed

Knowing not what was buried and lost

I came here cunning, and will have my bite

Of that old treasure made of Light.”

Blake stared her down.

“Your metre’s terrible and your rhymes second rate,” he told the monster.

It did not take kindly to that. But even though he was no longer a Brother, he was still a wielder of Light and standing near the threshold of a House. When he called it to him it came strong and easy, burning at the great fox’s fur until it yelped and ran away. The vixen was a coward at heart, it was why she’d gotten the wolf king to do her dirty work, and in the haste of her flight she abandoned her unconscious prisoner. In the distance Blake still heard the screams and howls of battle, the wolf king still attacking desperately to claim back his consort, and the healer hesitated.

The fox had revealed that some manner of artefact lay underneath the floor of the House, something powerful enough the creature had desired to devour it for power. If he claimed it, he could drive away the wolf king. But though Blake was no longer a priest, he had not forgotten the lessons of the Book. If the choice is between lighting a candle and a pyre, ever choose the candle: to save is a greater act than to destroy. So instead Blake knelt by the she-wolf and laid a gentle hand on her side, Light blooming around her pelt. Her breath steadied, and she woke. Too-clever eyes met his and he smiled.

“Let us end this,” the healer said.

And they did. The fight went out of the wolves the moment the two of them arrived, and Sawyer ordered the wall of spears to part so they could pass. The two wolves reunited, lovingly rubbing their cheeks together, and Blake’s heart clenched. He glanced at his wife, who was looking back with a small, secret smiled. The wolf king took a few steps towards him, nervous townsfolk raising their spears, but the crowned wolf did not attack: it bowed its head down in thanks before rising again, eyes expectant. Blake knew his stories, like all good Dormer boys. He was being offered a boon.

“I ask,” he said, “that you no longer attack humans and their cattle, Your Majesty.”

The wolf king stared him down with amber eyes, then curtly nodded and trotted away. The large pack, nearly sixty wolves even after all the deaths, followed in his wake. Blake slumped, the wind gone out of him now the danger was passing, and might have collapsed if Sawyer had not come to help him up. It was over, finally. The townsfolk cheered themselves hoarse, and that night a feast was thrown. The couple stayed two more days, long enough that Blake could be satisfied there would be no one who died from their wounds, and as they did they felt a… change.

The townsfolk and even the knights had begun calling Blake a wise healer, and the words were beginning to have weight. Almost like a title. And Sawyer, who’d been offered by the town elders to stay on as captain of their militia, had begged off by telling them that though a mercenary she was now retired. The words stuck to her too, the way she got called the retired mercenary. The both of them feared the change, and decided it was time to get gone. They could ride this out at the bakery, piece together what was happening.

Just to be safe they did not wait until morning to leave, riding out in the night and finding a roadside inn to stay at. The rooms were full so they had to sleep in the stables, but neither of them minded. It wasn’t their first night roughing it, and they settled together in the hay.

The woke up to a bright light being shined into their faces.

Sawyer was on her feet in a heartbeat, sword clearing the scabbard, but it was caught by another blade. As Blake struggled to get up, reaching for his staff, he saw his wife getting headbutted by a man in plain plate, the crunch of the steel helmet on her forehead a wound to his heart. She reared back in pain as Blake called on the Light, letting loose a bolt, but the man moved out of the way with a dancer’s grace. Sawyer struck again, but the stranger was so fast – he slapped aside the thrust and his gauntleted fist struck her in the mouth, smashing her back down into the hay and breaking teeth.

“Robbers,” Blake shouted, drawing on Light. “You fools, even if the baroness doesn’t get you the Legions w-”

And then froze, because the man had not come alone. The stables were full of soldiers in plate but no heraldic markings, and there was only one company in all of Callow that wore such armour: the Blackguards. The Carrion Lord’s personal retinue.

“No,” Blake got out. “Why? We haven’t done anything.”

Under the visor he saw pale green eyes studying him, the violence pausing. Gods, let them be able to talk their way out of this.

“We don’t want to fight you,” Blake desperately said. “I swear. We want only to leave, to return to our bakery. We’re not rebels.”

“I know,” the Black Knight said, and he sounded sounding genuinely sorry. “But that is only in the immediate. Should I leave you alone now, fate’s wheels begin spinning.”

“We have no quarrel with the Empire,” Sawyer croaked, down in the hay.

“Not today,” the monster said. “But eventually an imperial governor will wrong you, or a legionary’s carelessness, and when that anger reaches a boil another hero will show up.”

The man sounded vaguely irritated.

“Someone young and strong, with potential but little experience, who would need companions like a wise healer and a retired mercenary to reach the fullness of their power,” the Carrion Lord said. “By then, it will be too late. This is best nipped in the bud before the band of five begins gathering.”

“You’re mad,” Sawyer hissed through her broken teeth. “This is all nonsense, you’ve just gone rabid and-”

A sense of immediate danger blared across Blake’s mind, but the Carrion Lord was not moving so what could possible be the cause of it. Oh, Merciful Gods, the Wise Healer realized. He wasn’t really talking to us, it was just a distraction so the Warlock could-

The last thing Blake ever felt was the scent of burning brimstone.

34 thoughts on “Challengers

  1. When I first started to read this series, I was like “Damn, another filler chapter?! Annoying! I want to know what happened next!”

    Then I catched up. And it became “Ohh! Two chapters instead of one this week?! Great!”

    And now, since they’re patreon exclusive, it’s just “Aw :C”

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    • It creates a bit of a conundrum. Am I going to bother once the story is done? Seems like it would diminish the ending in some way to read that before these. But you know the penultimate chapter has to be a cliff.

      On the other hand, if EE doesn’t release a bonus book as the “and one” then these bonus stories would fill that role.
      Also, the bonus content has introduced red herrings in the past – for example lots of people thought Roland confiscated Masego’s magic after his side story revealed that aspect, but we just found out the SOS removed it.

      Back on the first hand, maybe those bonus chapters contain some critical foreshadowing that make the pandering lately a bit more palatable. I mean I doubt it, but a girl can dream.

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      • Hey I’d love to know what you mean re: ‘pandering’

        And I’d highly recommend jumping on the patreon to read them before the story’s over, they add a lot, and EE’s patreon tiers are very cheap compared to many.

        Re: the red herrings; I’m not in any social media circles that discuss the story, so I only see comments here/patreon, but did people really think Roland took Masego’s magic? I’m pretty sure Nessie did it explicitly on screen no? And I like Roland, but somehow I doubt he could front Masego. I mean, it’s Masego.

        I thought ‘Challengers’ was one of the weaker side chapters this book, but the rest have been fantastic, and last I saw the polls showed that the next extra chapter will detail Rumena’s origins as the Tomb Maker, way back from the end of the Empire Ever Dark, so it should be hilarious and exciting!

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    • I completely get why you, and other commenters below, don’t like the idea of having to pay for content. The fact that it is free is part of what drew many of us to web fiction in the first place.

      That said, the bonus chapters are good and EE has done an insane amount of work writing this very very long story that we all love. I feel like $1 a month is a pretty good deal for that.

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    • I’m not a patron either, but like, from what I can remember they’re not usually important to the actual story. It’s more Silmarillion than anything. Nice, expands on the world, not necessary to enjoy the main content. And it’s questionable if it’s “deeply important”. I mean if you feel it’s deeply important that’s fine, but objectively it’s not important at all to anyone’s actual comprehension of the story. Enjoyment is completely subjective but personally it hasn’t been a detractor for me. And as someone pointed out, this is still better than any normal book. We still get all the content for free eventually. And again, the main content is completely free no strings attached. I really don’t see anything to complain about here.

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      • The incredible entitlement of some people tbh is mind-blowing

        You have this brilliant work. It’s enormous, larger than Harry Potter by a factor of at least two. It’s completely free.

        And just because the author dares to ask for money – for only optional lore chapters – people are pissed. You can get these for 1 US dollar a month you horrific cheapskates. Good lord is a DOLLAR A MONTH so much to ask for this quantity of amazing writing? And again, you don’t even have to pay anything if you just want the main story.

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        • They aren’t optional, important information has been stacked behind them. And no I won’t support the patreon specifically because the chapters are paywalled. If they were free to everyone it would be a different story.

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          • They are 100% optional. You could easily have learnt this from reading the extra chapters that were released before the paywall, and now that the paywall is down you can read the newer extras and find them functionally superfluous to the main story. They just tell us what various characters were like before they reached the points in their arcs at which Cat met them, alongside a few lore tidbits like Neshamah’s theories about where demons come from or this chapter’s inclusion of fae-influenced talking animals.

            It is not stingy of EE to ask compensation in exchange for EXTRA chapters. If you’re broke and mad about it, be mad at your bosses for not paying you a living wage. This attitude is completely insufferable.

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            • Insufferable would be this toxic rhetoric you’re on about where not only I am not allowed to criticize the situation but clearly the only viable reason to do so would be being broke and just not personally wanting to support this method of monetization. It’s the latter friend for three main reasons. First off, I have read them now, and much like the ones published in the past when they were free while some are really just optional (like this one) others are not either because they are actually important to the story like the Nemeshah chapters were or because they fill in seriously needed characterization bits and complete plot arcs that felt rushed or incomplete without them. It’s almost like “optional” is remarkably hard to gauge properly when talking about situations like this one. Second, the long delay between publication for patrons and non-patrons combined with a remarkably lax spoiler policy both here and on the reddit meant I got spoiled for almost every interesting reveal or cool moment in these things long before they were available for me. Third, I personally prefer that being a patron come with short term exclusivity for the reasons above or come with generally non-exclusive bonuses that the whole community can benefit from as to not create a “haves and have nots” situation. And you do get that people are in fact allowed to criticize the author’s monetization strategy without also saying the author shouldn’t get money at all right? I’m not saying EE should be broke and sad and chained to desk to write for free.

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              • I’ve actually been fairly aggressive at times in telling people off for trying to raise EE or his work above criticism, I just think your specific critique is bad, or perhaps I should say that you overstate your case.

                Neshamah’s extra chapter is, in my view, a very good example of how genuinely non-critical these are, though. We know from the main story that Neshamah is an extremely powerful necromancer, diabolist, and sorcerer of various other disciplines; we know that he desires ultimate personal freedom from the Game of the Gods, at all costs; we know that he is extremely clever and extremely cautious, willing to throw away what a mortal would consider their life’s work if it results in better long-term odds of survival; we know that he destroyed his own homeland and all therein, and by extension that he was not truly close to anyone emotionally at the time he did so; we know that he was very low-status royalty, often overlooked by other royals.

                What we learned from his extra chapter is how he was originally set on the path that eventually led him to rebellion against the Gods; whether he was always completely lacking in emotional ties; how those ties he had came to be severed; one thing he suspects about demons (the demons themselves being character-less plot devices whose only non-trivial details are how they can kill you and vice versa); and what some of the cultures were whose secrets he studied, as well as a few cultural details from them, e.g. how the Twilight Sages comported themselves and what exactly their order’s political significance was. You know, those guys whose only main-story relevance is that their fatally-misplaced arrogance almost doomed the drow.

                Your point about the difficulty of determining what should be optional is valid, albeit it cuts both ways. After all, they’re extra chapters, not superfluous chapters. If the story wouldn’t lose something without them, that means their presence doesn’t add anything– but they still don’t give us more than a bit of context for who various characters were before their arcs intersected with Cat’s, plus enough background details to be more than a blurb.

                Re: spoilers: I’m sorry that happened to you, but it’s not a monetization issue so much as a moderation one, to my mind. Still not something I wish to argue against though.

                Mostly what set me off to begin with was your remark about withholding financial backing you would otherwise presumably have given because the extra chapters were held back for that purpose. One of the two times I’ve seen EE reprimand a commenter, it was for making a superficially similar remark that I now realize had less in common with yours than I’d thought.
                For that, I apologize.

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            • Hmm, but the Extra chapters do contain important information.
              Perhaps not the ones that were put behind the temporary paywall (I haven’t read them all, though they are indeed enlightening and broaden perspective), but it is understandable that many people reacted badly to that decision, because up to that point the Extra Chapters HAD provided vital info in some cases, especially those chapters that were providing context for events, such as Fatalism.

              An important example, the Colossal chapters introduced Kreios and gave the background information for who he is and what his relationship with Antigone is. Without those chapters, Kreios would be a Deus Ex Machine that came out of nowhere. Because there is zero info on him until Antigone summons him to ask for help in the war on Keter.

              True, it’s not wrong for EE to ask for money for his work (though being free is the main appeal of web serials, reaching a large audience that provides support through donations without needing to sign with an editorial) or to give a reward to Patreons, as they very much deserve that for being the supporters that are actually giving money.

              But, it is a bit disingenuous to claim that the Extra chapters are simple optional things that don’t add to the story or don’t affect the reading experience.

              A much better strategy would have been to have chapters early for Patreons instead of leaving people without this info up until the end of the saga. That would have helped get money and more Patreons and wouldn’t have aroused indignation in so many people.

              But at this point this kind of discussion is pointless since what’s done is done and the Extra chapters are now available to all.

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    • Interestingly, the way Amadeus dealt with the Wise Healer and Retired Mercenary is contrary to the way he dealt with Vivienne when she became Thief, which was simply scaring her off and telling her to not act against the Empire (which worked for a while, until her father died and she joined WIlliam’s band).

      Makes me wonder, why did he spare Vivienne?

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      • I think because the name of Thief isn’t necessarily a heroic one; with these two, he knew their Names would force them into some rebellion, whereas a Thief going around and Thieving can be neutral or even evil.

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        • Right. There’s nothing inherently heroic about a thief, even a Thief, but a good-hearted Healer or retired fighter-type Name will pretty much always come down on the Good side. And Black’s right, Names like that are a beacon for whippersnappers with more gumption than sense and training combined. Especially when the senior names are paired together the way a married couple is.

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      • Don’t worry, any time I speak that monsters name I brush my teeth. Going to have to grab a mint or something after even just referring to it.

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    • I would’ve crucified you for this comment half a book ago, but damn his death soured me on him. The cruel execution of those last two is just salt in the wound at this point.
      Tyrant’s death was glorious enough every scene with him was made retrospectively better. Black was maybe my favorite character, but killing himself for Malicia leaves just the worst taste in my mouth.

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      • You hate it too. OMG. I HATED that ending. I don’t think Alaya is worth it. Gosh. That sentimental foool!!! He is my favorite too. I wrote essays about his characters, decisions and such. Why does he have to be so blindly loyal to the one woman everyone hates.

        First of all, when he was thinking about sacrificing himself to clear the way for her and Cat at the beginning of the series, she was putting hooks into his officers – the one who fought for him. And I pretty sure all of them are the one who fought through the civil war which brought her the throne… That ungrateful bitch.

        When he was trying to negotiate with Cat for her and Praes sake at Book 5, she couldn’t get over her fragile ego to just accept the apologize and move on from the word misspoke like a normal person.

        When he was busy dealing with Callow – the greatest accomplishment of her reign. She whined about him leaving her alone at court. Excuse me Lady. He left half of the legions in Praes proper. Nim was an excellent generals and loyal too. He had shits to deal with aside from acting as a prop for your political games. You were the one sitting on the throne, you were the one who like the slow death method, you had a spymistress who was also someone involved with the murder of his family which he spared for your benefit no doubt. Deal with it yourself. Having taxes, foods, an elite army and political positions to bargain wasn’t enough for you???

        And for some reasons he also had to do diplomatic mission where upon his returned, half of Callow was on fire thanks to Akua – the one she left for her own purposes. I mean let be real I am pretty sure the money Alaya was funding Akua came from Callow taxes and Black hardwork so she is using his money to kill his legions and burned the place he governed down with it ???

        And don’t forget how she was considering rolling back the Reforms as compromise with the High Lord. She is insane. The High Lords don’t give jackshit about her. She could sell thêm her soul and they would still betray her. The Reforms are the promise her reign made to the people that supports her and actually loyal to her. She had one jobs, find a way to implement and keep the Reforms. Was she seriously considered giving into these treacherous bitches demands???

        Then when Callow was literally the last ally of Praes (DK doesn’t count). She messed with them for daring to getting out of her control. I mean pretty sure half of Catherine government are former Praesi. Her legions are Praesi. It could have been so easy established a friendly relationship between the two and she butchered it.

        Wonder how can anyone look at that track records and consider her a decent Empress. Black apparently. It is like Alaya put something in his drink to make him completely her dog. The way he acted toward her is pathetic.

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      • If he had half the backbone he had toward others people when he was dealing with her. It might have been better. But that is kind of who he is. Letting his friends walked all over him to the point that they thought they could just kill Cat and he would have forgiven them. Seriously, that is how little his emotion and plan mattered to these people. They can just casually mess him up and ask for forgiveness. Wonder if it is anyway related to him losing his family and literally only had them left.

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        • I think a lot of Malicia can be explained by blue and orange morality. She ruled the court of Praes for 20 years, and from what I gather the way you did that was by positioning knives at everyone else’s throats and making sure the knives they positioned at your’s ended up in theirs. From this angle mind controlling the Legions makes perfect sense, nevermind that it’s a Xanatos Gambit in the most classic sense. They don’t rebel? They don’t find out. They do rebel, and now I have a countermeasure. It’s a human rights violation to us, but she’s Praesi, they quantifiably know how much a human is worth. I’m pretty sure it’s the same type of thing for the conference in Salia, she’s on top of the hierarchy of Praes and so she needs to actively make sure all of her rivals stay below her. This isn’t her ego, this is legitimately life or death, especially for a Named. Black would normally not object to this, but their previous conversation was in the book 3 epilogue and the one before that was him blowing up Fortress Liesse, neither of which are good showings for Malicia.
          Keeping that in mind, her way of dealing with Callow makes perfect sense if we also consider that she doesn’t expect it to stay independent for long. She plans on assassinating Catherine multiple times in her interludes and a freshly crusaded Callow further weakened by however Malicia decided to screw with them would be easy pickings if Praes manages to stay mostly untouched. Speaking of screwing with them, assassinating Ratface, Anne Kendall, and a bunch of nameless government people in retaliation for a legitimate assassination attempt makes sense in this context. She’s setting up for an invasion of Callow in the future and attempting to condition Catherine into not acting against her via negative reinforcement (technically this qualifies as positive punishment but that’s jargon while negative reinforcement is a term used to generally refer to the Pavlov stuff). From our perspective it’s cruel and unjustified, but our perspective is Moonless Nights Catherine who is an unreliable narrator. She’s still in the lighter shade of grey, but how did she expect Malicia to respond to political assassination?
          I’ll defend the way Malicia deals with High Lady Tasia. A handful of months later and her entire coalition was completely destroyed, and her successor got soulboxed. In that kind of political state it would’ve been child’s play to reinstate the reforms, and even pass a few more on top of that because look at what happened to the last guy who tried something against her. The reason this doesn’t happen in canon is Thalassina gets nuked along with a substantial portion of her support base which itself happens because of the 10th Crusade and Malicia was counting on Fortress Liesse to dissuade that entirely. Black was right of course, Stories would ensure that the Fortress Liesse gets destroyed meaning the result of the whole war would be a foregone conclusion, but Malicia is more of a politician than a Named combatant, of which there are exactly Black, Catherine, Tariq, and the Wandering Bard, maybe Kairos too considering his stunt at the Princes’ Graveyard. Her plan makes sense and would’ve tied up all the ends neatly, she just miscalculated something and in the process of correcting for her Black frayed the tapestry.
          The instance of Malicia rebuking Black happens in the book 3 epilogue if I’m not mistaken and I think the important thing to note there is that the line of conversation ends when Black points out that Malicia isn’t even trying to convince him, she’s just frustrated. She had her whole plan lined up and now it’s in shambles. Catherine admits to herself that she would’ve sided with Malicia against Black at the time in regards to keeping the weapon, so there goes that common ground in the future and Catherine’s opinion of her isn’t formed based on not wanting to fight a war, but on Malicia’s willingness to sacrifice Liesse in an attempt to do so. All of the sudden things aren’t sunshine and rainbows at court so she can no longer repeal the repeal of the reforms. Her right hand man and best friend’s faith in her was apparently so weak he actively backstabbed her plan even when she was there in person pleading with him. That’s not even going into the fact that over the past 20 years they were a whole country away from each other and outside of their little chats she only heard of his exploits that she needed to fix since the ones he handled well in she didn’t need to concern herself with. Malicia criticizes his handling of Callow for not appeasing the High Lords while also not settling the Callowans, which is fair, but retrospectively Black’s primary goal was to show that the average Praesi is not the enemy, which was successful, so that was another cause of frustration in the conversation since Black though Malicia was also all in on the “end racism, buy food” plan. So no, it’s not exactly a coherent criticism, but it does make sense for her to say in that situation. The main thing that comes through from the conversation is that Malicia is deathly afraid and pretty much every word Black says foreshadows something in book 7 (I believe this is the first instance of the mold metaphor, he calls them out on their demon summoning tendencies, and “It is irrelevant who actually rules Callow so long as we no longer need to invade to avoid starving” is justified by the epilogue).
          In regards to Malicia’s puppeting of Black for political gain, he is entirely complicit in that scheme and not in a way that warrants the kind of slander you send at him for it. During the end of their bid to overthrow the previous Dread Emperor, Black agreed to Malicia’s way of doing things because he understood that killing High Lords is cutting heads off a hydra and Malicia was more adept at maneuvering around them. He’s not just letting her walk all over him, a strong Malicia gets to weaken the High Lords which was one of his primary goals.
          Looking at her track record and declaring her a pretty good Dread Empress is because most of the things you criticize her for are lauded in Praes. Also she dodged assassins for 20 years, which is significantly above curve.
          I’m assuming Malicia, and also Weska, did not know how much Catherine meant to Black. How could she? She was wrangling High Lords when Black was picking up his apprentice, and after Summerholm he took a very hands off approach with her. It’s not something that I’d expect Malicia to ask about, and given how much she allegedly cares about him I’d expect to see significantly more hesitance in her plots to murder Catherine if she knew. This is evidence that she doesn’t care about him only if you think she doesn’t care about him and is otherwise a believable miscommunication that is consistent with her characterization (assumes she understands the situation ergo does not attempt to understand the situation).

          I spent this reply defending Malicia because my issue with her is a combination of Blue and Orange Morality combined with Freudian Excuse is no Excuse, but the blue and orange morality does add an interesting flavor to the salt and I don’t like seeing her dismissed as a bargain bin sociopath that she quite frankly isn’t.

          I will take this opportunity to salt on Black’s death though, because from your comment you kind of damsel him and I like him way too much to let that pass. Black wanted to turn Praes into a republic, or something more approximating it than the murder pit it was previously. He can probably force himself into a position to get elected, but he knows the High Lords won’t stand for it because they hate him. As shown by the tower still being partially intact in Arcadia, the Dread Empire isn’t fully killed and they would have reverted back to it at the closest opportunity, likely the moment someone sinks a knife into his back. To prevent this from happening, he needs the Chancellor to be someone THEY can accept AND someone HE can accept, and only Alya fits that niche. She was running things for 20 years, they’re more than used to be ran by her and she’s his close friend so he knows she’ll be a good ruler for Praes and not sabotage the new system for personal gain like the first Sahelian Dread Empress did to the Dread Empire (in a world where reality is based on stories, having the first story be a literal backstab sets a poor precedent and a person versed in Namelore like Black knows he needs to get this right). The perfect person for the new position. Problem, Catherine is coming on a literal warpath and will likely not accept this outcome, not when a better fit for ruler of Praes, read: Black, is literally sitting right there. She’s basically in the position Tariq was at the Princes’ Graveyard: everything Black (Catherine) wants, she (Tariq) wants, but given everything Black wants she’ll reject it and pursue her secondary objective which he cannot abide. So he resorts back to his plan at the end of book 3: Catherine kills him and then for lack of better options has to play ball with Malicia, because who else could it be? MAYBE Akua, but Catherine has bigger designs for her and Black knows that being the first Chancellor of the Republic of Praes is not a very long price. This whole debacle pissed me off at the time because he said he doesn’t believe in Martyrs, but I guess there’s a distinction between martyring oneself and dying for the cause to him, where the former is dying hoping something will happen and the latter is dying knowing it. I still fucking hate it, because that whole chapter is just Catherine’s no good very bad day in which her father needlessly dies because Catherine is unwilling to accept Malicia as the most suited to rule Praes for the moment because she is quite frankly very overdue a good stabbing and so because it’s the only way to stop her Black has to die. Needless, pointless, tragic, and then that bitch the bard shows up and kicks me in the metaphorical nuts by ensuring their doom against the Dead King. It was a very intense chapter and even if I can respect it in hindsight for being Black’s equivalent of the Princes’ Graveyard that doesn’t take away the horrible feeling of bad vibes because of meta reasons and still hoping against hope that things end up okay only for your every dream to crumble in front of you and your favorite character to be killed off. A bit melodramatic, but you can see how that leaves a bad aftertaste, though despite my visceral reaction looking back I can’t really see it going any other way, except maybe Catherine compromises on Malicia’s death but she can’t do that because that would hamstring her name which was already hamstrung into being half of a whole. At least the next arc justifies that disappointment as being intentionally disappointing, and honestly the rest of book 7 is so good I really can’t hold it against APGTE. There has to be a lowpoint for there to be nowhere to go but up.

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          • I actually thought that he was pretty fine with Malicia after the blowing up Liesse part because he scry ed her in his normal clothes (deliberately showing his vulnerability) while she did it in her Empress regalia. And only when she kind of pushed him that is when he snapped back at her. I saw the whole conversation at Book 3 as him initially wanting to apologized to her and she rebuked his effort by provoking him making them end the conversation on a bad note with each others. And like, I think he has more reasons to be angry at her than she is at him because her plan killed not a small number of his troops – whom I think he was very fond of. She also betrayed his trust and such. But, in their first conversation after he woke up, he was the one trying to say sorry. He was pretty mature while Malicia’s continuous provocation is just …erh. Thus, she rubbed me in the wrong way.

            As for the fragile ego, there were signs even before Book 5. I think it was a conversation during book 3 or 2 when Amadeus and Alaya was still good with each others. They was chatting pretty casually and then at the end she slided in the fact that she was the Empress. And the she did it again at the end of book 3. The need to consistently assert one’s position is often indicative of underlying insecurity, suggesting that despite her outward authority, Malicia was uncertain and seek to proven her standing and authority within Praes even with the one person who was willing to die for her.

            Additionally, even without the story reason, I still think knowingly fund a WMD for the people who wanted to overthrow you is excessively risky because she doesn’t know exactly what this weapon can do, how far it can reach and such. One misstep and she can be killed or Black/Cat can. Even her plan to steal it leave much to be desired. I mean if we think about how Russian broke the US nuke monopoly. They send spies in to steal the blueprint not actually waiting for people to assemble the nuke then send an army in to rob it. Not to mention how she was going to use it to attain peace. I doubt she can make a MAD situation with the Flying Fortress. MAD is US doctrine and applicable to the US situation after WWII when the US was a superpower with allies everywhere and the good wills of most of the world for her role in WWII. IMO, Praes has more in common with North Korea than the US. North Korea basically still holds China, South Korea and Japan hostage with their nukes but it doesn’t really do the country itself much good. Overall, it was a pretty bonker plan even without the story coming into play. Thus, I kind of judge her pretty horrible on the Empress scale because of this.

            Furthermore, I think I judge her as an Empress on a pretty different perspective than you I wager. For me her style of doing things is leaving behind embers that can potentially reignite the fire. She defeated Tasia coalition but failed to completely annihilate them, poses a significant threat. My knowledge of Chinese history tell me that if you don’t deal with you enemies when you can, you are definitely going to regret it. If your enemies is sick, you need to end their lives. If you leave your enemy a breath, that is only to make chance to end them completely in the future. It seems to me that she was so in love with her game that she underestimate her enemies. And even though, she doesn’t have the chance to regret this in the future (or did she – Akua?), I just needed to look at Xiang Yu and Han Gaozu, Cao Cao and Liu Bei, Li Jiancheng and Li Shimin, the Han Dynasty and Feudalism, every country in the Spring and Autumn Period to see how well it turn out for them. In the realm of dealing with enemies, even your fresh and blood can’t be spared

            Plus, the part about abolishing the Reform and reinstated it later was a very poor political move in general. Like, there is one person I know who was in the same exact situation with Malicia in keeping a very unpopular reform alive which is King Huiwen of Qin. He literally would rather killed the author of the Reforms to appease the dissatisfied faction at court than to repeal it. He kept the Shang Yang Reforms alive which helped set Qin up in a position to win the entire Spring and Autumn conflicts during his great grandson reign. And another example of a very unpopular Reforms being repeal leading to the downfall of an entire dynasty – the Wang Anshi Reforms in the Ming Dynasty. Wang Anshi as the Regent of a declining Ming Dynasty had create a very throughout reforms which could have turned things around for the Ming. However, it touched the benefits of the royal and the elite class which made the Reforms very unpopular. The moment Wang Anshi died, the Reforms was repealled and Wang Anshi entire family was exiles which was the beginning of the end for the Ming Dynasty. Thus, what I learned and applied to the situation that Malicia was facing is that there are places for the concern of court opinions but not in front of something that can decided the trajectory the entire country. As an Empress, I just think Malicia completely misjudge the important of the Reforms. And when a Reform is appeal, reinstating it would diminish its value and effectiveness. Just like if you given someone a piece of land for 40 years then take it back then give it back. The second time you give out the land won’t have the same effects as the first time. And like, I understand her not wanting to kill Black to appease the High Lord since he is her BFF and an important supporters of her but like if she asked, I thought he would have agreed.

            To elaborate further on the important of the Reform, there are two important pillar of her reign which are the strength of the Legion and the Calamities. Black – the leader of the Calamities was the very person who wrote the Reforms and the Reforms main purpose was too keep the loyalty of the Legions. So by appealing it, she is directly undermining a foundational element of her power base, which is not good. And I might add this but you can be as good with soft power as you want, without hard power backing it up, soft power is just soft. There is no diplomacy for the weak. Don’t believe me. One of our country best diplomat was killed by the Chinese court precisely because he was too smart and we were in no position to oppose China for him. The China wanted to deprive us of a talent so they just straight up killed him. Soft power, akin to the flower pattern on silk, undoubtedly enhances the allure, but it cannot replace the intrinsic value of the silk itself – the hard power. Thus, Sacrificing hard power for the illusion of soft power risks missing the forest for the trees IMO

            And there is also the fact that the money not only funded 1 rebellions but 2 rebellions – Tasia and Akua. Like, I chalk that one up for misusing tax money in my bad day and an acceptable lose in my good day. I do think she did a good job dealing with Tasia coalitions just not throughly enough leaving them a slight chance of actually getting her back.

            And for her dealing with Callow, I just find it is a wrong approach in treating a subordinate. Like, even before the assassination attempts from Catherine. Malicia was subtly messing with Callow fiscally and through immigrations which actually forced Callowan court to be more independent financially because they don’t want to get screwed over by her. And Callow is actually a very important place in term of food security, financial and strategic location. They got absolutely fucked over by Praesi drama, then instead of showing them the reason why they should return to the fold, she tried to force them to return which would absolutely torch the shaky apathy/friendliness (?) that Black tried to foster for both of the country. Like, you catch more flies with honey is true. If you want somebody to go the way you wanted you needs to show them the good part first not immediately reaching for the lash. It is a very important that you lead with the benefit and downplay the negative. For someone who are a master at soft power, her handling of the Callowan situation in general was pretty disappointing.

            And when analyzing Praes occupation of Callow, I used the Chinese occupation of my country (failed) and of Yunnan (success) as a sort of guide on what to do and what not to do. So there are three keys differences in the Chinese handling of us and Yunnan that were identified as the reason why one failed and one succeed. First of all, the quality of the governors. Secondly, how integrated the new territory was to the rest of the Empire. Finally, external forces. Basically, the governor sent to my country was shit while the one sent to Yunnan was actually decent – so Marzus or whatever was firmly in the first category. Secondly, the Chinese was aggressively moving people especially farmers from Southern China to Yunnan which literally made Yunnan into a mini Jiangnan plus added a lot of incentive to the locals like a much more reduced tax rates. Compared to the absolute shitshow that was my country heavy taxation (which made it into the Chinese history book btw). On this front, I though Black was handling it pretty well by surrounding Catherine with Praesi and stationing various legions in Callows which encourage marriages and exchange of culture, plus the orphanages and barely changing the tax code. However, this completely changed when Akua literally decimate the second biggest city in Callow. I can’t think of a faster way to sour relationship between a new territory and the Empire. Thus, the enabling of Malicia was in a way directly contribute to her losing Callow. Finally, external forces. So the position of my country was sandwiched between the Chinese and another Empire which mean not only do we have to deal with shitty governor, and court intrigue of the Chinese, we also have to deal with its enemies attacking us with barely any help from the central government. Compared that to the Ming literally stationed the most accomplish general of the time in Yunnan and absolutely decimate all the power surrounding Yunnan. I think Callow was in the same exact situation as our with the Crusade from the West and Praesi political drama spilling into Callow proper. Like, Black stationing Grem at the Red Flower Vale to protect Callow was the right decision from what I observe. After reading all of these do you understand why I was so frustrated with Malicia. She literally did everything wrong in Callow.

            Then there is the order summoning Grem back into Praes right before Procer invaded. First of all, it makes no sense. There is no better natural defense than an actual mountain range so abandoning it would be impossible if we actually want an easy time dealing with Procer. Aside from the damage that Procer could do to Callow if they actually cross the Whitecap. The border between Praes and Callow is not exactly the best defense position. Once they crossover and secured the Red Flower Vale, Callow would be wide open and Praes would lost it newly acquired breadbasket. So Grem absolutely can’t follow that order and Malicia KNEW THAT. She was just using his refusal to follow an impossible command as leverage against him in the future. This was such a bad behavior for a monarch for so many reasons. 1, Regardless of her feud with Black, Grem was actually a war hero, both Malicia and Black owed their power to Grem decision to follow them and dragging his entire clan with him. Therefore, the fact that she was just willing to screw him over when he was about to risk his life for her Empire again was … not a great look. Grem was an absolute champ for staying loyal to Praes after the insults. Generals went on strike and did way more drastic things if they were treated like this 2, DON”T give impossible orders PERIODS. Zhang Fei actually lost his life because of this exact mistake. 3, Right before an invasion is not the time for political game, it is just inappropriate. Qin Shi Huang actually carried an immense pressure from the court due to the 6 years long campaign led by Wang Jian precisely because just hesitation or distrust could have ruined the invasion completely. The opposition actually cracked first btw. Malicia’s decision, timed poorly and driven by political calculations, was a stark departure from the decisive leadership needed in the face of imminent threat.

            And now the most important – Salia. Before we get to it, I will be frank with you, Malicia was judged by a complete different standards compared to Black partly because I like him more but also partly because I was very annoyed with her constantly emphasizing that she was the one sitting on the throne. I said “Okay, sweetheart, you want to be the adult, I’ll treat you like an adult” Amadeus was completely soft balling her the entire time. I read way harsher criticisms from government official sent to Chinese Emperor. One emperor was literally about to cut the head off the advisor before being talked down by his wife. The advisor entire job was to criticized the Emperor and he compared the Emperor’s action to Jie Xa – an Emperor that was deposed. He said the Emperor brother should have killed him when he got the chance. He sassed the Emperor in front of the entire court numerous time. We have the combo of name-calling, personal insults and public humiliation in one guy. Like, what Amadeus said was pretty tamed by comparison. It is paramount that an Empress can be opened to the harshest sounding criticism and won’t be phrased by it. And more importantly, if something went wrong you should always look at your own part before you look at others. Thus she just ragging on him the entire conversation was pretty off-putting to me. Furthermore, Amadeus was actually getting pretty desperate by the end, he saw the writing on the wall for Praes, everybody saw it except Malicia. I conceded that she had an excuse of needing to protect her image and authority after Thalassina decimating her own side – which would also be a consequence of not dealling with your political opponents pernamently but I think regardless of whether she purged everyone or not, the remains would pounce on her the moment she looks weak. But I am still disappointed abit in her inability to just take his apologize and prioritizing the good of Praes before a possible weakening of her image.

            In conclusion, Malicia just rubbed me all the wrong way and the fact that my favorite character sacrifice himself for the person I thought wasn’t deserving of his dedication to her is just adding insult to injuries. I am not going to rag on him, I love him too much for that. Even if he specifically stated that he despise Martyr yet still did it and broke my heart along the way. I actually don’t hate matryr. I find the act of sacrificing oneself for another an exceptionally selfless and beautiful thing. However, did you ever experience seeing you friend fall for the person you think is using them. Seeing him do that for the person I thought was undeserving of loyalty from all her mess-ups with Grem, the Legions, all the people who bought her the crown in the first place, who doesn’t exemplify what a worthy Empress would look like, who answered his blinded trust with deceits because let’s face it her doing all the stuff with Akua and the Legions were a slap in the face for him. I remember Cat using the exact same words to describe him when she pleaded with him to make an one last leap of trust. I just can’t stop my dislike of her. And Amadeus was so unhappy too. He doesn’t have a family, he enjoyed no luxury, he was suicidal. Like, I look at him at the beginning and I saw someone being hollowed out by his responsibilities. I saw how beaten down he was at the end of Book 5 when the Amadeus I know was a fighter just like the Bard said, he won’t give up, he will just keep going. Alaya really punched him right in the guts. Alaya was always troubled between her love for him and her desires for control. He just seem like he genuinely wanted the best for her. He loved Praes and her, she loved her power and him. One is inherently more selfless than the others. And I hate Praes, like really hate them. I saw the current state of the country as their own makings. They are everything that an Empire shouldn’t be. They are the Jin Dynasty which was built on betrayals and was destroyed by it, bringing everyone along.

            I even wished for Amadeus to die right in book 4 because I just wanted Praes/Alaya to suffer the consequence of their own action. I knew as long as he was alive, there is no chance in hell he would have abandoned Praes/Alaya. I just want him to die fighting befitted of a general while protecting his country from its enemies. He would have been okay with it too. Maybe he would have some regrets about not reconciling with Alaya but I infinitely prefer him never having to suffer through Book 5

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          • And I never saw what he would do with the Chancellorship. Based on the system he devised and his personality, I thought that he was making a sweet trap for the High Lord and the votes were the baits. I imagined that it would be impossible to force the High Lords to give up their private armies especially when they are a bunch of cunt who couldn’t care less if DK did overrun everything. So he made the votes precisely so that they would give up what he wanted. Then he would use every single way to further weaken them until they couldn’t actually move against him even if they wanted to and then actually make his move to shape Praes the way he wanted. The votes could have been expended making it lost it values. The empire could have waited until the house became extinct just like real life clans and then the control of the vote for that regions would lie in the hand of the people living there. Or the military could just be controlled by some Julius Caesar or something or civil war could break out with the votes being completely sideline and the general leading Praes fought for the control of the entire place or so many things. I would never know what he wanted to do. And the High Lords of Praes – the exact families that caused so much harm to their own country are still sitting at the top in the end, seemingly suffered n consequences for their awful behavior…

            I don’t even know if what Alaya did was what he would have wanted… Like, Cat was never the one who understand Amadeus the most. Alaya did. But she was also the one who messed up his (their) entire plan for Praes for her own purposes so who knows how much she actually get it right

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          • So I once read another story which I think really embody my thought on both Amadeus and Alaya. The story was about 2 fishes getting trapped when the tide receded, they managed to flop to each other and shared the little remaining water. They encouraged each others to survive. When the tide returned, they escaped and went on separate ways, never meeting each others ever again but presumably have a much better live than getting stuck in shallow water. And this story just stuck with me. Amadeus and Alaya stuck together for so long, they went through so much but in the end they just can’t stay together because Alaya insecurity and needs for control. She horded it like a dragon horde gold, if someone is even slightly capable of touching it, she would make plans after plans to cut that person regardless of who it was. She just couldn’t do it, except when she truly lost everything she cherished. She could be with him when thing get rough but not when the sweetness came. <- This is not entirely accurate but it just seems like it. They couldn't stay together once the fruit of their labor came.

            I thought Amadeus would have been happier if he just learned how to let go and go on separate lives with Alaya, just like how he let go of Scribe. It would be painful and torturous but I did think he have done enough for her to pay back anything she ever did for him at that point. And when I read about what happened to Praes after that, there is always this feeling of illogical bitterness. Alaya could have given it her all, she could have made what he wanted came true but didn't (allegedly because I never know what Amadeus truly wanted). It doesn't make sense at all but that is what I feel. Plus, I never knew what they promised each other when he made her the Empress. Like from what Alaya said during book 4, it seems she failed to fufill that promise with him while went above and beyond what she expected.

            EE was a pretty good author. This story really stuck with me.

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    • Really explains why it wasn’t until 20 years later that someone like Cat could rise. Pretty much anyone who could remember the “Good Old Days” would always oppose Black. Even Cat herself was marked for death almost until the last second.

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  2. Actually, if Rosalind just stayed at the monastery or something, nothing would have happen. But, this is like saying if Maddie stopped being the Squire, the Heir would have left him alone. Truly, as a bastard of house Fairfax, Rosalind would always choose to fight for the thrones. The moment she did, it is life or dead for them both. Amadeus did what Wei Zheng adviced Li Jiancheng do – kill the enemies before he had the power to strike you. He followed the advice so he has better ending than Li Jiancheng did. I have no doubt if Rosalind managed to escape, Amadeus would be preparing his funeral and found himself a replacement.

    As for the scholar and the married couple. Er the Scholar fell for the trap while the married couple was truly unlucky. It is so funny when the Scholar fell for the most obvious lie. Still, killing The master before the student could look for them is an… unique approach. It is like killing Ranger before she met Black. It would have been a much harder journey without Ranger.

    It is so scary how Black can genuinely feel sad for them and still decide to kill them. Like, he has all the emotions that normal people has, he just seperated emotions from work. He could have been a good person faraway from Praes. Wonder if that horrible country is worth throwing away everything human about yourself, Amadeus?

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