Inexorable

“Courage and cowardice fill the same grave, but earn different eulogy.”
– Lycaonese saying

Otto Reitzenberg’s crown sat ill on his brow, and always would. On it weighed the three deaths that had carried him through the gates of Sternlerin fortress: his father and sisters, every one of them a better and braver soul than he. They had perished at the Enemy’s hand, and with every death further down the line of succession the crown was passed until it sat on his brow. Sat laden with the weight of those who should have led their people instead. Sometimes he thought he could hear them in the wind. Father’s rasping laughter, his throat never quite recovered from the poison on the ratling spear. Gude’s calm and steady drone, never moved to haste by fear nor displeasure. Elsa’s thundering wraths and kindnesses, neither any less terrible than the other. The Enemy had come for the House of Reintzenberg, that day, and spared only the runt of the litter. For the blood he carried on his brow his people had named him Otto Redcrown, and in his hands the heavy charge of turning back the tide of the Dead had been left.

He was not that charge’s equal.

“Come now, Reitzenberg,” the other man drawl, “no need to look so grim. The situation’s markedly improved since this morning.”

The Prince of Bremen scowled at his companion, unamused by the attempted levity. Prince Frederic Goethal was the very personification of every mocking tale shared around fires about the Alamans – covered in silks and ribbons, his long flaxen hair cascading down in ringlets all the way to his shoulders and usually drunk well before noon. The Prince of Brus was also the only ruler from south of Neustria to have sent so much as a single sword to join the defence of Lycaonese lands. And it was more than a sword the man had ridden with: near the entire army of Brus had made for Twilight’s Pass under the prince. Frederic was, Otto believed, both a finer soldier and a finer tactician than the Prince of Bremen himself. Yet he was also as prone to preening as the colourful azure and crimson kingfisher that was the banner of the House of Goethal. The juxtaposition of the two was disconcerting, made more so by the fact that the man was barely twenty and boyish in looks besides.

“I do not see how, Prince Frederic,” Otto said. “For one, this appears to be a dragon.”

The long stretch of mountain passes, valleys and narrow ridges popularly known as Twilight’s Pass had several choke points, the jagged pits of Volsaga being the latest they had been forced to defend. Volsaga Fortress itself, raised on a narrow strip between two sharp cliffs, had held for a fortnight as the dead massed their hosts under cover of constant, grinding assaults. It might have held for another fortnight, Prince Otto thought, if not for the Dead King unleashing the skeletal horror he’d just referred to. The gargantuan dragonlike thing had torn through the outer walls, ignoring like arrows and stone like they were summer rain, and scattered the defenders as the lesser dead poured in. Now it was curled around a low peak that loomed above the path into the fortress, forbidding attempt to claw it back from the dead.

“’twas a dragon, perhaps,” Prince Frederic mused. “It is now quite dead, one assumes.”

“We pulled back in time,” Otto grunted, ignoring the other man’s words. “We’ll save maybe half the companies we’d committed to the fortress. That is still a heavy loss. It will be a fighting retreat until Graueletter, too, and that abomination is bound to pursue.”

“The dwarven ballistae seemed to have only irritated it, alas,” the Prince of Brus conceded. “Though given the weather in this parts, it is a miracle the things work at all.”

“How, then,” Prince Otto patiently said, “has our situation improved since morn?”

“I would think that obvious, Reitzenberg,” Prince Frederic said, and elegantly flicked his wrist upwards.

The Lycaonese prince glance upwards, and saw little more than the sky. There were none of the corpse-drakes, at least, which he supposed was a small mercy. Both archers and slingers were beginning run out of projectiles, and it would be days before the next supply convoy.

“I see nothing,” Otto admitted.

“The sun has finally deigned to arrive, my friend,” Prince Frederic cheerfully said. “We will, at least, perish slightly thawed.”

A convulsive chuckle tore free of Otto’s throat before he could help himself. It’d been a dark jest, but then Lycaonese humour was not renowned for its lightness. The Prince of Brus took a moment to push back his long curls, then glanced curiously to their side. The Farewell Stones were a striking sight, Otto would admit. The steles of granite carved straight from the stone went on for most of a mile along the mountain path, most of them with a large iron peg hammered through. Some were empty, others rusting, but in every last one a farewell in iron had once been made. It was not a monument the way southerners would know it, but to his people it held great meaning.

“I’ll confess never to have heard of this shrine,” the Prince of Brus said. “May I ask what it stands for? It does not seem dedicated to the Heavens, at least in no way I understand.”

“It is not,” Otto replied. “My people call them the Farewell Stones, and they are no hymn to Above. They are… a vow, I suppose. Oft renewed, never fulfilled.”

“A Lycaonese custom, then,” Frederic Goethal said, eyes curious.

“This place, Volsaga,” Otto slowly explained. “It is halfway through Twilight’s Pass, and the easiest path through it. Armies have marched here since before the days of the Iron Kings, when we were tribes held together only by fear of the dark.”

The Alamans prince listened attentively, his face twisting with fascination.

“When we come through here, to march against the Plague or the Dead,” Prince Otto said. “We make a farewell in the stone. Before going to war, we leave it as an oath.”

“The spikes of iron,” Prince Frederic murmured, glancing at the long stretch of them. “There must be hundreds, and the rust… Some of them are mere traces, now.”

“We have done this,” Otto Reitzenberg said, “for many hundred years. Every time knowing it might be the last. That this war could be the one that breaks us and lets the Enemy devour us all.”

“But there is always a fresh farewell,” the other man said, tone thoughtful.

Otto nodded, pleased her understood.

“When the farewells reach the end of the steles,” the Prince of Bremen said, “those at the beginning have faded. So it has been, so it will be.”

Otto turned to his sworn swords and curtly gestured. They came forward with a large fold of leather and opened it before the two royals. Inside was a large peg of iron, and another of his soldiers offered a steel-tipped hammer to accompany it. The Alamans prince smiled in understanding, eyes sweeping to the stele closest to them. Empty, save for some last traces of rust deep inside.

“You are to add your own farewell, I take it,” Prince Frederic said.

“We,” Otto Redcrown said.

The other man studied him closely.

“How many Alamans have given farewell here, Otto Reitzenberg?” he quietly asked.

“After today,” Otto said, “there will be one.”

The Prince of Brus paled, as if slapped.

“There is no need to-” he began, then bit his lip and when he resumed speaking his voice was hoarse. “There should be no reward for this, Prince Otto. Not for simply joining the battle when you’ve all had to bid farewell to these passes for centuries.”

The Prince of Bremen shook his head, for after all the other royal did not understand him. Did not understand this.

“We are not better,” Otto said. “We too have murdered and schemed, Frederic Goethal. We have warred on our own and on southerners for greed or lust for power. There is naught in our bones that sets us apart from the stuff of other men.”

The last of the House of Reitzenberg straightened his back and took the iron peg he was being offered.

“It is the choice that matters,” Prince Otto Redcrown said. “Of marching through the pass. Of leaving shelter behind so that you may shelter others.”

The hammer was pressed into the hands of the Prince of Brus by a gruffly insistent armsman, and the fair-haired Alamans finally took it. There was no disapproval in the eyes of the soldiers sworn to Bremen, as Prince Frederic prepared to hammer in the peg that Otto was holding in place. There would be none from the soldiers of Hannoven, either, or Rhenia and Neustria. Why would there be? When the call had sounded, when the Dead had crossed the lakes, only one prince had come north. The name of Frederic Goethal would be remembered in these lands so long as Lycaonese held them. The hammer came down, claiming three strokes before iron nestled deep into rock. Otto clapped the shoulder of the other prince, after.

“We retreat to Graueletter,” the Prince of Bremen gruffly said.

“No,” Prince Frederic quietly replied. “No, not quite yet. You northerners are not the only ones with their pride.”

The flaxen-haired man whistled sharply and there was a cheer from the slope below, as the two thousand horsemen that were his persona retinue raised their banners. The Prince of Brus sent for his horse and deftly mounted the saddle, claiming a long lance from his page.

“The fortress is lost, Prince Frederic,” Otto told the man.

“That may be,” the man smiled, “but you were not wrong, in saying the beast will pursue us during the retreat. Many will die, should it not be slain.”

“Charging the path is a fool’s errand,” Prince Otto bluntly said. “It will kill you all.”

“So we will do no such thing, my friend,” Prince Frederic replied. “See the low peak where it looms, and the slope above it.”

The Prince of Bremen flicked a look, only to confirm what he already knew.

“It is sheer enough to be called a cliff and not a slope,” he said.

“We shall be most careful not to tumble, then,” Frederic Goethal grinned, looking for all the world like an impish boy. “Worry not, Reitzenberg. We will return victorious, should we return at all.”

“It is folly,” Otto said.

“I am a Goethal of Brus, my friend,” the prince said. “I Dare are the words of my blood, and to them I will keep. Prepare the retreat. We guests must meanwhile earn our keep.”

The Prince of Brus rode away to join his retinue, and Otto stood on the heights above them spellbound. They were a colourful lot, these Alamans horsemen, a riot of silks in red and blue trailing behind their polished scale like fairy wings in the kingfisher’s colours. Pages saw to their riders, and to the cheers of the soldiers offered up thin glasses of what Otto thought might be crystal. Pure crystal, exquisitely shaped and filled with red wine. Prince Frederic took up his own and led his mount to the fore of the retinue before raising his glass.

“Ladies and gentlemen – to Procer, and Her Most Serene Highness,” he toasted.

As one, the soldiers toasted and drank. Not the full glass, the Lycaonese saw, but a mere sip of it.

“To our hosts.”

The Alamans drank.

“To the kingfisher, may we never shame it,” Prince Frederic said.

A cheer followed, and another sip. The Prince of Brus’ horse arched impatiently, though even one-handed the man reined it in effortlessly. He laughed, loud and bright.

“To doom, and glorious death,” he bellowed.

Madmen that they were, every single one of the Alamans flung their glasses against the ground. Crystal shattered, red wine spilled like blood, and behind Prince Frederic Goethal the riders followed. A fortune had been broken on stone in a moment of pique. Otto Redcrown watched as they rode up the mountain paths, disappearing in a crown of mists and stone. There was nothing he could do but arrange the retreat and wait, ordering bowmen companies forward to cover the retreat of the last soldiers escaping the fortress. The dragon of bones stirred at the sight, though it did not yet deign to intervene. There was still fighting taking place in the fortress courtyards behind it as the dead overwhelmed the last of the trapped defenders, and it lazily watched until nothing but the dead remained. Mere moments after, two thousand Alamans crested over the mountain path overlooking the abomination’s perch.

Otto’s fingers tightened as he saw them slow as they reached the edge of the slope, that steeply inclined bare rock precipitously tumbling down towards the skeletal horror that still remained perched over the path. The kingfisher banner rose glittering under the sun, blue and red and glittering gold, and two thousand lances were lowered as the cavalry thundered down the slope. To doom and glorious death Prince Frederic had summoned them, and the Alamans joined him laughing and singing their summer songs as they charged, silks trailing behind them like ephemeral wings. The beast only saw them too late, and like a pack of bright-clad wolves they tore at it. Tore at it and died. Leathery wings were ripped, but their beating still shattered horsemen and horses alike. Claws tore through armour and lace just as easily, maw crushed men and mount in a single screaming snap. But the madmen did not flinch or flee or withdraw. With hungry tenacity they carved up the abomination, ’til limbs had been rent and bones broken.

Until the Prince of Brus himself shattered the skull with a hammer, and the eldritch lights in the monster’s eyeholes were snuffed out. The man raised it high above his head and the cheer from the army was deafening, defiant. A sliver of light brought to a dark day. Of the two thousand horsemen that sallied out, six hundred returned.

Easily thrice that many soldiers might have been lost in the retreat, if they had not gone.

There was going to be a snowstorm tonight.

Captain Bernhardt had learned to tell the signs: wind grew restless, and colder, but you could still taste the heaviness in the air. It’d be a rough watch for whoever served after dusk, even more so for the rationing he’d had to place on braziers. Charcoal and stones were running low, and the promised supplies from Bremen had never arrived. In the captains’ private opinion, it was a toss-up whether it was the Enemy’s warbands who were responsible or the ugly truth that there were only so many supplies to go around and half a dozen forces that needed them more than his own. Not that the territory Bernhardt had been ordered to hold was without importance: Hocheben Heights sloped down from the southern peaks of the Kaltwend, a broad plateau that stretched all the way to the rocky shores of Lake Pavin. It was a lock on the hard spit of land that stood between the Grave and the tributary river to Lake Pavin, heights overlooking lowlands now crawling with the dead and damned. There were only a few paths up the sheer cliffs, though, and he’d ordered them collapsed the moment he took command. The dead had only half-heartedly tried the climb a dozen times since, and been duly driven back. He could understand why commanders might send the wood and grain to Twilight’s Pass or the Rhenian Gates instead, where every hour saw a fresh swarm of horrors unleashed.

It didn’t make the nights any warmer for his soldiers, though.

The fair-haired captain mused loosening the rationing for the duration of the snowfall as he tread the icy stones of Emil’s Displeasure, the long stretch of fortifications jutting from the edge of the plateau. The watchtowers were few, for this high up they were hardly needed, but Prince Emil Papenheim had not been skinflint in seeing to the defence of Hocheben. Stone parapets with punctured arrow slits oversaw the drop, and further back thick oaken trap doors led to the dug-in sections Hannoven soldiers fondly called the Emilzorn: tunnels leading to lower in the cliff side, through which ice-soaked trees and massive stones could be rolled down to fall at any force trying to climb up. Bernhardt had found the two hundred men and women left in Hocheben by the Iron Prince to be priceless, after coming to take command at the order of now-dead Prince Manfred Reiztenberg. His three thousand soldiers were mostly Neustrians, as was he, and they’d never had to fight for the heights in their lifetime. The old garrison knew the paths, knew the defences, and Bernhardt had made sure to make their own captain his second. You couldn’t trust a Hannoven woman to crack a smile even at her own wedding, famously, but what Captain Elpeth lacked in humour she more than made up in ability to kill things.

Bernhardt tightened his furs around his shoulders as he passed the third and last watchtower, slowing his steps by the brazier tucked away behind it. The three soldiers out on watch looked up guiltily as his arrival, well aware at least one of them should be up on the tower at the mercy of the evening wind.

“Captain,” the oldest among them began. “We-”

“Up,” Bernhardt interrupted in a rasp. “Now, and I will pretend I saw nothing. Don’t let it happen again.”

The older man saluted, the spear but clacking against the cold stone beneath, and Bernhardt watched him hurry back to his post. The other two might have looked abashed, he thought, though it was hard to tell with the padded cheeks of the helmets hiding away so much of their faces.

“It will snow tonight,” he told them. “Keep a careful eye out. The Enemy does not shiver or sleep.”

“We will, sir,” the youngest solemnly said.

Gods, he thought, she couldn’t have been older than sixteen by the sound of her voice. The lock of red hair that’d slid out from under the rim of her helm was moving with the wind. No older than Bernhardt’s own oldest daughter, which he’d seen off with the family coat of mail and his dead wife’s sword. Seen off to march with Prince Manfred’s host to hold Twilight’s Pass against the Dead King, along with most the Neustrian volunteers. Fredda could be dead, for all he knew. Word from the fighting at the pass had been sparse, but what he’d heard had been enough to chill his blood.

“I’ll take you at your word, soldier,” Bernhardt said, tone softening.

It was a whim that drove him to stand at the battlements, to take a look over the edge into the howling winds. Far below bare trees and evergreens stood half-buried in snow, until a frozen river cut them off, and it was the sight of that river that raised his hackles. A large patch of ice was cracked. He could see no dead moving below among the trees, and yet…

“Sound the horns,” he ordered. “All steel to the walls.”

“Sir?” the girl asked.

Now,” he barked.

It was instinct, he knew, but there was something wrong. Captain Bernhardt stepped back and went looking through the sparse supply cache at the watchtower’s side, until he found what he was looking for: a long torch, ending in a tightly-tied cloth soaked with oil. He plunged it into the brazier, waiting until it caught fire before stepping back to the edge of the battlements. Atop the watchtower the call to arms sounded, sharp and echoing across the heights. Steadying his hand, the captain tossed the lit torch over the edge of the cliff. For five, ten heartbeats he thought he’d made a fool of himself and utter relief swelled. Then the torch hit something that wasn’t there, and after a sound like a broken mirror a hulking shape flickered into sight.

“Gods stand with us,” he whispered.

It was no simple dead, but instead a great abomination. A misshapen thing made of men’s bones and stretched out leather, shaped as some long-clawed bear with an overripe belly scaling the cliff. It must have been almost two hundred feet tall and half as large. Empty eye sockets turned to look at him, and with a keening sound the abomination leapt up.

“Spears at the ready,” Captain Bernhardt ordered, hastily backing away from the edge.

Two sets of bones claws closed around the battlements, grinding against the stone, as behind Bernhard the first reinforcing company spread out. Shafts of wood with tips of iron or steel dipped forward. The fair-haired Neustrian bared his sword, cursing himself for having left his shield at the barracks when setting out. The abomination’s massive head came out, all leather and bone and blind malevolence. It opened its mouth, jaws unhinging, and with horror Bernhardt realized that the monster was not the whole of it: climbing relentlessly out of the dead thing’s belly were sure-footed corpses, armed and armoured. It was a siege tower, he realized, the likes of which only the Dead King could possibly craft. And a precursor to all-out assault. They might hold here, he thought, but how many others like this were climbing up the cliff unseen? The captain found the eye of a soldier at the front of the spear wall.

“You,” he said. “Go, and tell Captain Elpeth what you saw here. She has command.”

The young man opened his mouth to protest, but Bernhardt would not argue and so ignored him.

“Volunteers,” he called out. “Ten of you, with me. Let us give Keter its fucking due.”

In front of them the abomination was spewing out its dead progeny, corpse after corpse forming a foothold, but ten brave souls came to his side. They used the old way, knowing full well what it meant. Three large urns of pitch, three torches, the rest to serve as the arrow in flight. The girl was one, that soldier with the errant red tuft.

“Go back, kid,” he said. “Let another old hand take your torch.”

Dark eyes met his.

“Hanne,” she said, tone hard. “My name is Hanne, and I am Lycaonese.”

The rebuke was hard as the voice. No older than his own Fredda, the captain thought. What kinds of fathers were we, to raise daughters like these? It was a bitter kind of pride, but pride nonetheless. Grip tight around his sword, Bernhard nodded.

“Steady then, Hanne,” he rasped. “Remember that the flame is what matters.”

She let out a shivering breath, nodding.

“Though mountains crack, and ice will thaw,” Hanne said.

Bernhardt of Neustria let out a spout of laughter like a spasm and nodded, taking the lead. Behind him the volunteers fell into formation

“Though mountains crack, and ice will thaw,” he called out.

Spears cracked down against the stone, a defiant snap.

“Though walls will fall, to tooth and claw,” the captain screamed, voice rising.

Eleven against the assembling dead, and still they charged. Sword in hand Bernhardt hacked at the bronze-clad corpse before him, elbowing the dead aside and burying himself in their line. At his side the other swords fought like the mad, pushing in and knowing there would be no going back.

“Though stars will fade, and shadow spread,” Bernhardt screamed, and they screamed with him.

Three of the volunteers were dead already, taken by axe and spear, but the dead had not expected so fierce an assault by so few and for a heartbeat he stood before the beasts’ open maw with no foe before him. His sword he dropped, snatching a torch from one of his fallen instead and the girl, Hanne, pushed at his side even as he took an axe in the ribs. The gap in the enemy surprise had bought them was already closing.

“On the heights we stood, with iron red,” she whispered, teeth clenched.

Torches were touched to pitch – one, two, three.

Into the beast they leapt, screaming defiance, and from the inside it burned.

The Hocheben Heights held halfway to dawn, and the surviving garrison retreated in good order.

81 thoughts on “Inexorable

      1. konstantinvoncarstein

        The only reason for witch I don’t like Good always winning is that Catherine use Evil for good reasons. When I read this kind of chapter, I am very, very glad that Good always cheat.

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        1. stevenneiman

          The point of Good is that they get to be the triumphant heroes whether or not they really deserve it. But once in a while, they really act like what they claim to be.

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      1. All I am saying is where are the heroes at. It seems there so focused on schemes that they are absent from all these battles.

        Tired of hearing about heroes fighting Cat when undead abominations are everywhere.

        Wish we got a POV of “heroes”. Or saw the emergence of a name. Undead invasion seems like the right atmosphere for a name. There is purpose to kill undead, burden to save the kingdom.

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        1. Skraeling

          That prince of Goethal seems like he should be coming into a name shortly. What with his shining charge and laughing madness. Seems perfect for a warrior prince Name.

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          1. Insanenoodlyguy

            That is more than likely the point.

            Saint, at least, is counting on exactly this sot of thing. Forming new heroes in the crucible of war. That it cost a minimum of 1400 lives to maybe empower this one man is not a bug, but a feature. The left over population being inspired by new heroes will get things back on the Good track they need to be, after all.

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      1. philosophize70

        I think that’s the point: that average people are more heroic than the Heroes.

        History in Caledonia would seem to be necessarily defined by the “Great Man” theory of history – that history driven by the efforts and impact of “great” men (and women). After all, that’s what Named are (“Great”) and what they do (make things happen). However, much of what we see made to happen is simply awful for the average person, and here we see that it’s the average person who is truly needed. It’s not Heroes who are holding the line, but average people – commoners and nobles alike.

        Heroes are consumed by their squabbling with Villains, and as a result are allowing the people to suffer instead of stepping in to help. It’s as if being a Hero isn’t defined by being heroic, but simply by being opposed to Villains, regardless of who they are or what they are doing. It’s being in opposition for the sake of being in opposition.

        Catherine seems somewhat unique, in that while her actions do cause suffering for the average person, she at least regrets it and seeks ways to reduce it. She’s also working to put an end to it – including her own role in it by eventually abdicating. You don’t see the Pilgrim or Saint looking to remove themselves from the equation by making themselves unnecessary. They want to continue playing a role, whatever the cost – a cost continually paid for by others.

        She’s also willing to make common cause with Heroes to fight a greater enemy, something they aren’t keen on doing with her. So unlike them, she’s not obsessed with simply opposing others. She’s got goals she wants to achieve, and being a Villain was a tool to get what she wanted, not an end in itself.

        Vivian was the same, and now look, both she and Catherine aren’t Named anymore. Coincidence? Unlikely.

        Some food for thought…

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        1. haihappen

          Also, do not forget these are Procerans. They are culturally opposed to the idea that the one great Hero will come and save them. They fight their own wars, make their own sacrifices, as mortal men and women. There is no cultural weight that could drive the creation of a Name, thus this would be a rare occurance. I think the only ones that are known are the Saint (which I do not for certain know is Proceran), and the Augur. The Augur, for that matter, seems like it was facilitated by the Bard or otherwise placed deliberately by the Jerks Above.

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        2. “History in Caledonia would seem to be necessarily defined by the “Great Man” theory of history – that history driven by the efforts and impact of “great” men (and women). ”

          It’s the exact opposite, actually.

          >“There’s plenty of people who care about Callow,” Thief said. “And if I learned anything from the Woe, it’s that caring doesn’t fill granaries or run a court. She’s certainly in the right place at the right time with the right amount of power to get things moving, but that’s not really what matters. See, the thing is that she acts. Sometimes those actions are mistake, like going after the fae and leaving you to plot under your rock in Liesse. But, most of the time, she improves things. Just by a little bit. And she draws other people who act with her. You think that’s some unearthly trait, like she’s some force of nature, but that’s Wasteland talk. The Tower’s the centre of the world for you, and the most important person in the world is the one that climbs it.”

          >The other Callowan paused.

          >“Except she’s not,” Vivienne said. “The exemplar of whatever fucked up Praesi virtues you want to sing about, that is. She’s kind of petty, her temper’s foul and if Hakram hadn’t stepped in she’d probably be a drunk. She ogles every pretty face that shows up even if they’re our enemies, and she cannot for the life of her shut the Hells up even when she really needs to. She’s not unique or irreplaceable, but even if you think otherwise that doesn’t really matter – because she’s part of something greater than her. She’s just the rock that started the avalanche, Sahelian, and she did that by doing the most Callowan thing there is: after the invasion is done, you get up and get back to work. Others will come to help you, because a kingdom’s people and not banners.””

          This is a story about how even in a world where Great Men are an actual thing, they’re still not the real drivers of history. Named don’t hold territory, armies do.

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  1. RandomFan

    Heroes come and heroes die, and villains do the same against a greater evil. The fact that none of these were gifted with names doesn’t change that- except, perhaps, to remind us that there are no villains when standing against this monstrous force.

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  2. Valkyria

    Damn. Just… no words. Epic, terrifying and just… amazing.

    Still was kind of confused at first since the chapter is missing the “Interlude” in its name.

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  3. It goes to show why the Lycaonese are grumpy bastards.

    And makes a solid argument for those who want the Heroes and Alliance to stop dicking around with trying to ruin Cat’s day and deal with the Dead King as being way more important than a villain being in charge of Callow.
    I’ll grant that crushing Kairos and Heirarch might be worth the division of forces and attention, given what they’re doing and where.

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        1. They haven’t even managed to fully update their classification from “Winter fae abomination with traces of an Evil Name” to “non-Named high priestess of an Evil deity” yet lmao

          So yeah more or less this.

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          1. Ben Serreau-Raskin

            In their defense, she is wandering around their back lines with a huge army. Leaving how they feel about her personally, that’s not the sort of threat a nation can just ignore, no matter how bad their other enemies are. The fight against the Dead King depends on the logistical support of the rest of Procer, which is already basically hanging on by a thread. If Cat wasn’t so reasonable she could basically end Procer as an economic or military faction and they know that, even if their assessment of the specifics how is out of date.

            We know that she’s willing to deal but politics at that level is a combination of pragmatism and working to the worst possible scenario.

            Historically nations that just decide huge armies in their back yards aren’t a problem don’t stick around long.

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    1. Skaddx

      The Auger told them they have to fight if they let Cat walk with the Legions and Black…the Grand Alliance collapses into Civil War. They are not going after Cat just because they want to rain on her parade. That is the reason why the plan is to do battle win and then let Cat run back to Callow through the pass. Then they handle the Tyrant and march on back to the North. This was all explained a few chapters ago.

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        1. Insanenoodlyguy

          Remember that many of these lands were in fact savaged by the Black Knight. They are hurting, bad, and with this war above, this winter is going to kill many, nobody can spare the time or resources to help them.

          If that is ignored entirely, their rebellion is sensible. They will earnestly believe that the Prince does not care about them at best, is happy to lead them to destruction at worst. Neither makes for a ruler you’d tolerate.

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          1. RanVor

            Let’s not forget that all of this happened only because of Cordelia’s bad decisions. Rebelling against her is only sensible at this point.

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  4. caoimhinh

    Pure badassery. Lycaonese live to show that they do not need to be Named to be Heroes.
    Although it is surprising that more Named aren’t arising in the middle of an invasion from the Enemy.

    It will be awesome when the Lycaones fight side by side with the Army of Callow, two armies raised with the strength and resolution to fight uphill battles against the impossible odds, be it hordes of monsters, mortals, devils or undead.
    I think that might be the foundation of strong backing for Callow joining the Grand Alliance.

    Typos found:
    ignoring like arrows and stone / ignoring the arrows and stone
    pleased her understood / pleased that he understood
    the spear but clacking / the spear butt

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    1. Jdawgi

      I dont think they can. Cat mentioned that because the heavens played so heavily in the crusade, the dead king was released to counter. The heavens went all in too early trying to get Cat at the expense of the real enemy. That’s my take on it anyway.

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      1. Mennolt van Alten

        IIRC the idea was that the Dead King needed to be invited to come out, either because someone charged in and tried to crusade his territory, or because somebody made a deal with him, for example a ruler of Praes currently getting crusaded.

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  5. Andrew Mitchell

    What a magnificent chapter! Especially the first part. So, so moving…

    “How many Alamans have given farewell here, Otto Reitzenberg?” he quietly asked.

    “After today,” Otto said, “there will be one.”

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    1. SlyMcFly

      I specially love these ‘Good-side rando does something badass and heroic as fuck’ chapters.
      Due to spending most of the time in Cat’s POV I find it’s easy to think of all of Good as being represented by Grey Pilgrim, Saint or William and thus conclude that the entire ‘side’ are hypocrites and fanatics and the fools being played by them.
      These chapters help me remember that there’s more to Good than that.

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        1. stevenneiman

          Good societies aren’t necessarily more functional. Remember how Procerans act like such scumbags to their neighbors that people forget that they keep back the two existential threats to life on Calernia when they aren’t too busy starting wars of aggression with their Good neighbors.

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            1. Agent J

              The counterpoint to Bellerephon is Ashur not Procer. Both technically function, but are horribly repressive societies.

              Procer, as the greatest Good nation on Calernia, finds it’s opposite in Praes. And they mirror each other splendidly. Constantly scheming nobles, consistently warmongering foreign policy, prone to civil war, and despised by all their neighbours.

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                1. Agent J

                  1) The point was “Good societies aren’t necessarily more functional.” You refuted that by saying Procer is more functional than Bellerephon. My point is, Bellerephon is a poor comparison to begin with.

                  2) Yes and no. Praes and Callow influenced each other more than anyone else, but they stand in stark contrast in a lot of areas. Procer and Praes, however, act a lot more like each other than either is really comfortable admitting to.

                  3) Interesting. Why?

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                  1. RanVor

                    1. It is not a poor comparison at all. Procer is Good and life there is shitty. Bellerophon is Evil and life there is even shittier. Any hypothetical counterparts have nothing to do with it. You could replace Procer and Bellerophon with any other Good-Evil pair and the principle would still hold.

                    Moreover, the deal with counterparts is not as clear-cut as you believe. Good polities in Calernia outnumber the Evil ones, and not every Evil polity has its counterpart on the other side.

                    2. Fair enough.

                    3. Because reasons.

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        1. RanVor

          But we’ve never actually seen them doing it. We only know it because we’ve been told it, and that’s precisely why it’s not convincing. Show, don’t tell.

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          1. True. Even Tariq’s interludes left the heroic things he actually did only described, not shown.

            Unfortunately, that’s the best we can get without Erratic launching a full-blown side novel about the heroes’ exploits. We have to project and go for obvious conclusions ourselves, alas.

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            1. RanVor

              That’s not true. Even two or three scenes of Tariq doing something unambiguously good and heroic would go a long way to prove that his status as one of the foremost heroes is actually well deserved. I don’t know if this is intentional on the author’s part, but the utter lack of any actions of this kind from him is a major factor in how he is seen by the audience.

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                1. RanVor

                  The story of the Barrow Lord was told, not shown. The plague, alright, I’ll give you that, but that was before he became a hero. It would be foolish to claim he hasn’t changed since then.

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                  1. That was what directly led to him becoming a hero. That was what decided the kind of hero he became.

                    IDK, I don’t think the entire readership has a problem with it like you claim. Tariq is a side character and an antagonist, why would we get absolutely plot irrelevant scenes of him taking puppies from trees and slaying Levantine monsters?

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                    1. RanVor

                      Well, you obviously don’t have any problem with Tariq, so any claims about entire readership having a problem are blatantly false. However, there is a significant portion of the fanbase that does have a problem, and this might be one of the reasons.

                      Also, the best way of avoiding giving a side character plot irrelevant scenes is to make them plot relevant.

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                    2. I can agree with that rephrasing, though I suspect it’s a vocal minority with self-selection bias: people who don’t have a problem don’t speak up because they don’t have a problem (and like 12 people actually hang out in the comment section)

                      You have a point there, the problem is that Guide is already fucking huge with 1000000 characters and plotlines. How would you do this correction?

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                    3. NerfGlaistigUaine

                      Honestly I love Tariq because I can see his reasoning and might even agree with it in his position. He works for the greater good, to save the most people even if he has to drown his hands in blood. And I feel like people dislike Tariq because he doesn’t compromise with Cat, but Cat is a threat and was especially volatile as Winter, and she’s even admitted how much of a monster she could be if she let loose. Hell, she’s even said she would let loose if circumstances required. Going from the perspective a hero it totally makes sense to get a surefire kill method on her. And sacrificing Callow to Proceran ambitions also makes sense to ensure the defeat of Praes and the continent united under Good. Considering Tariq has been heroing for decades and literally never seen a villain not fall off the slippery slope, I think the fact that he’s willing to deal with Cat at all shows how much of a hero he is, it’s just that Mercy isn’t kind. Also, Tariq’s the Heavens’ troubleshooter, ambiguous and complicated good is what he specializes in.

                      The only part of Tariq that irked me was his interaction with Cat after the Bard’s little talk with her. Cause he really shouldn’t have expected her to be fine with a damocles sword situation, he forgot who he was dealing with.

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  6. Cap'n Smurfy

    Chapters like this really show why Procer has so less major names or why their leaders don’t become named. When even the children are ready to die for a slim chance at victory there wouldn’t be enough names to go round.

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    1. My very own name

      That’s more of a North provinces thing than widespread for Procer. Though some people from the South are learning what the fight against the Enemy truly is and they are rising to the challenge.

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      1. Mennolt van Alten

        And if you look at the casualty rate among nobles in the chapters shown so far, probably the most occuring names would be ‘Bastard’, ‘Sacrificer’, ‘He who was left’ or something similar. I’m in awe that nobility hasn’t totally collapsed up there, look at last time when we lost 3(!) people in line for the throne on one day!

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      1. Ultimate_procrastinator

        Very true, but in case it was missed, the comment you replied to was an excerpt from Tennyson’s “Charge of the Light Brigade” which actually was about just six hundred horsemen.

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        1. mavant

          Albeit six hundred horsemen with substantially less tactical justification for their doomed charge than the ones in this chapter. But I found the newly literal character of “Jaws of death, mouth of hell” amusing.

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  7. I’ve seen a number of people comment on how this chapter really highlights just how true it is that the real war is against the Dead King in the north and this southern squabbling is a frustrating diversion. And that is absolutely true! But something that occurred to me as I was thinking about this is that this also, in a weird semi-backwards kind of way, goes some distance towards explaining why Cat’s been having such a hard time getting the heroes in particular to see reason.

    Because remember, Black and especially Cat’s mode of Practical Evil is so recent that on the historical scale of Calernia it’s still basically brand-new. And *this* shit, this shit right here that’s going on up north, is the *historical* face of Evil on Calernia. Almost all of the things that have made it so frustrating watching Cat try to get some sense into the heads of these heroes are things that would be *virtues* in the context of this brand of villainy – the refusal to compromise, the intent to seek victory no matter what, et cetera and et cetera. Remember, while Named aren’t necessarily completely bound to stories they are moved by them significantly more than normal mortals are. And very nearly all of Calernia’s stories about heroes are about them facing foes such as these, not foes such as Catherine. Given that, is it really so surprising that Named heroes would consistently demonstrate the qualities that match heroes in those stories? The qualities that *made the heroes the heroes* in those stories?

    *We* know that Cat basically represents a round peg/square hole scenario with regards to trying to fit her into those stories – and the things she’s said and asked for reflect that. But when the heroes aren’t immediately sold on those things and it comes to a fight, well, now you’ve got a villain who is killing soldiers (and sometimes heroes) fighting in the name of Good. And in this case it’s really through pretty much no fault of her own! But that specific dynamic does reinforce all the wrong things from the stories that form the backdrop of so many heroes, and it just leads into this very ugly vicious cycle situation.

    I’m still optimistic that Cat is going to get through to at least most of the heroes (I’d put money down that Saint is headed for the dustbin of history, though). If anyone can break an unfavorable story that’s standing in the way it’s our dear Black Queen, after all.

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